Okay, I want Love.
I want to feel how you feel. I want poems about heartache, loss.
Love is a wonderful thing, however, is quite often taken away. It causes one to lead an unsterdy life. It leads to one having a broken heart, but trying to keep strong and hold it together, keeping it in one tattered peice. Some try to move on too quickly, and find themselves with one who they have no feelings toward, one that they are using, just trying to help keep their heart together. Some people just fall apart, unable to keep their emotions together and their heart from falling completely apart.
I want poems that tell of how you once Loved and Lost, and yet still feel pain to this day. I want to feel your sorrow, yet know what it is you go through to keep your heart held together, to keep it from further shattering into tiny peices. I want to know how you live with the pain. I want to know your thoughts, feelings, how you coop with trying to keep everything together, how you feel on the inside and the things you do on the outside. I want emotion!
Rules:
1) No StIcKy CaPs. I will automatically discard your poem.
2) Prewrites ARE allowed.
3) Limited TWO per person.
4) No erotica.
5) Put either a rose (* rose *) or a broken heart (* unlove *) in the author comment box so I know you read the rules.
6) Make me cry!
7) Cursing is allowed, however, don't over-do it.
8) Cutting, suicide, etc. is allowed.
It's not that hard. Just write from the heart and soul and make me feel your pain.
-UPDATE!-
I know, it's been closed for about three days now, and not even half the poems have been viewed and commented. I've got a lot of stress and emotional things going on right now, but I will try my best to get those judged ASAP. Sorry for the wait.
I want to feel how you feel. I want poems about heartache, loss.
Love is a wonderful thing, however, is quite often taken away. It causes one to lead an unsterdy life. It leads to one having a broken heart, but trying to keep strong and hold it together, keeping it in one tattered peice. Some try to move on too quickly, and find themselves with one who they have no feelings toward, one that they are using, just trying to help keep their heart together. Some people just fall apart, unable to keep their emotions together and their heart from falling completely apart.
I want poems that tell of how you once Loved and Lost, and yet still feel pain to this day. I want to feel your sorrow, yet know what it is you go through to keep your heart held together, to keep it from further shattering into tiny peices. I want to know how you live with the pain. I want to know your thoughts, feelings, how you coop with trying to keep everything together, how you feel on the inside and the things you do on the outside. I want emotion!
Rules:
1) No StIcKy CaPs. I will automatically discard your poem.
2) Prewrites ARE allowed.
3) Limited TWO per person.
4) No erotica.
5) Put either a rose (* rose *) or a broken heart (* unlove *) in the author comment box so I know you read the rules.
6) Make me cry!
7) Cursing is allowed, however, don't over-do it.
8) Cutting, suicide, etc. is allowed.
It's not that hard. Just write from the heart and soul and make me feel your pain.
-UPDATE!-
I know, it's been closed for about three days now, and not even half the poems have been viewed and commented. I've got a lot of stress and emotional things going on right now, but I will try my best to get those judged ASAP. Sorry for the wait.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 15, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Everyone's entry was wonderful. Thank you all for entering, and congratulations to the winners. My deepest apologies for the dely. I wish you all the best of luck in Love & Life.
Contest Winners
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What's behind, those big bright eyes?
Little girl at the watersideby Rose Darkest Night 73 lines, 41 comments, on Dec 2 11:35 PM 2006. In sad, will make you cry, love, broken heart
Silver trophy winner
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She tilts her face toward the heavens.
A look of hope in her eyes.by Patched Up Ragdoll 27 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 28 1:38 PM 2006. In Love, Hope, Angst
Bronze trophy winner
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Capitals and syllables are useless
When the roof of your mouths caved in.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Through the cracks of white blinds
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So here I am
Undressed and unarmed• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Desire of my heart
wish you where here• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
collecting her broken heart
holding her heart in her hand• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She was a proud, strong girl
She was never going to let anyone change that• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the love i have is messed up so i have tears for you .....by Themasteroflove0608 15 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 20 9:12 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You say there'll be no games this time,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It is like a dream
Laying beside this stream• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm breathing in the prickly gloom
Exhaling it in puffs of charcoal smokeby Alleksa Jan 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 28 4:41 AM 2006. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
when you are not near
you are but• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Where once was love, love is no more.
Recount your blessings, forget your lore.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I thought I could stand through any storm
But watching clouds without you... just isn’t the same• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hear the tell-tale whispers of lovers’ hearts
by DropsOfCrimsonRain 37 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 29 8:34 PM 2006. In Bitter love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A sad heart on a ship
Running from its misery• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
personal. personal. personal. stupid stupid jess--• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i was once in love too and i still feel the pain of loss even though its been years now. can't move on.by bubbasamuel 33 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 17 6:17 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Because of you,i can't close my eyes,
Because of you i can not sleep.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A fiery passion burns inside
For a beautiful woman• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I remember your face
Like a ghost, hanging above meby Melanie157 24 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 12 1:30 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Alone and scared
its not like you caredby blutiful01 23 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 9 6:16 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. -
My sweet tooth will not settle for anything less
Your shadow above my shadow the sheets we can caress• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I see you walking down the street holding his hand and i want to die.
The way I feel when I see you is pure agony, And the best feeling i have ever had all inby got my love back 26 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 2 11:03 PM 2005. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Here, alone, in my tender bed,
all my psalms and prayers have been said,• Viewed by judge. -
My Best friends in the world 13 in all
Gone due to The Hot Leaded Death; a cruel way to go;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How dare you be
The way you are to meby Crazy-Dan 40 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 3 8:51 PM 2006. In Pure Anger• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes at the dying of the day,
I sit and watch the lastby backstreetdreamer 33 lines, on Dec 10 4:38 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. -
I miss you so much,
sitting here day by day,by arockchick 23 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 7 2:51 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Embers glow dimly in the silver moonlight
Orange sparks dancing across a canvas of blue• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Seventeen years.
brby star lunatic 29 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 27 8:21 PM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Today,
you told me that you love me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Did you feel me?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My love,
my deepest love,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
inner left churn chokeby brightraven 16 lines, 10 comments, on May 9 2:20 PM 2006. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Arg... love is a bitch.......by Absence of Light 76 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 27 5:44 PM 2006. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This door is closed.
I Can't let anymore of you in• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i cried, i cut, i punched brick walls, ive written, ive sang ive danced....
nothing makes you go away.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The only thing to do keep seeking out you,
My loneliness grows deeper what can I do?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
life seems to be only shades of grey these days
but mostly the darker hues of the color• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He was a lie and so were his excuses
A fluke he said I was on drugs and I won’t do it againby Addictedtou 16 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 19 1:23 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. -
he stood there in the pouring rain
with tears challenging his pain.by Whispering Wind 21 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 28 12:47 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I lie here, tormented
Beaten, broken, bruised• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I've tried, in this world, to hold on and never let go
But I fear that that is the reason you've gone away• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Holding on to you
Holding on to the very essence of you• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I wake up to an empty bed,
climb out of bed to look for him.by DarkMysteriousLady 13 lines, on Dec 6 6:12 AM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You sang me a lullaby.
A lullaby led to a dream,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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YOur so wonderful in ways
I could never be. the loveby twornprince 12 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 21 12:05 AM 2006• Viewed by judge. -
Life presents a dismal picture• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"...For those of you who live a LIFE without LOVE..."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"...For those who are in LOVE, and are tormented by the darkness that separates you..."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dress my hair, paint my face,
This smile still feels out of place.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by half-dead 39 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 17 11:46 AM 2006. In Adult, Adult humor, Personal, Other, Dark, Hate, Teen issues, Angry• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Bitter cold air cuts through me like a knife,
As is stand in front of your grave,• Viewed by judge. -
Alone in the Dark
Here I sit, in this world of darkness alone• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I was cleaning today and I found a picture of you,
It caused all these memories and feelings to start,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You get a standing ovation
But I request no encore• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It burns me,
like an angry flameby Etch-a-Sketch 27 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 10 10:03 PM 2006. In dark, life, sad, heartbreak, personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Trying to be thE revolution
and not gEt caughtby Etch-a-Sketch 62 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 13 7:42 PM 2006. In teen, love, heartbreak, sad, odd, society, dark, acrostyx• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The air has an unfamiliar scent;
The sky is a new shade of grey;• Viewed by judge. -
pissed off
losing fastby deadheartedkitty 27 lines, on Mar 10 1:07 PM 2006. In Hope• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you ripped yourself out of my life
without a second look back or even a last glanceby fake isnt trendy 9 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 10 7:05 PM 2006. In Sadness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you let me down
changed this all aroundby fake isnt trendy 22 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 11 4:36 PM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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hmm...half of these werent even viewed..
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Thats a lot of reading to do.. I completely understand.. as for me I do not mind you taking yur time..
Have fun reading though.. whew.. lots of entries!! lol
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