Pain. It's hard to describe pain. It can be small and it can be so large that it hurts to much to put into words. I want to learn of your pain. I want to know if its killing you, i want to know if it's changed you. I want you to put your pain into words. (of coarse this is emotional pain, not a broken foot)
Rules:
No erotica or adult themes (im only 14)
Dig deep - pour all of your emotion into your poem.
Awards:
1st: Gold and 300 points
2nd: Silver and 50 points
3rd: bronze and 25 points
I'm sorry but due to the floods of pre-writes they will no longer be allowed. Sorry for any inconvienience.
Rules:
No erotica or adult themes (im only 14)
Dig deep - pour all of your emotion into your poem.
Awards:
1st: Gold and 300 points
2nd: Silver and 50 points
3rd: bronze and 25 points
I'm sorry but due to the floods of pre-writes they will no longer be allowed. Sorry for any inconvienience.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 8, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Still Alive...and Still on AP !!.!.!.!!by eternalpoet 63 lines, 61 comments, on Dec 5 12:04 PM 2006. In Dark, Personal, Sad
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2426935, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Happiness is the mask I wear
My misery is something no one wants to share• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Um got bored, was flickin through contest. Thought may as well enter.by BarbedWireButterfly 46 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 5 3:19 AM 2006. In Personal, Sad, Feelings
Honorable mention
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On and on this hell goes
unless I dare to stop it nowby Hearts.That.Bleed 29 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 8:06 AM 2006. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Death, Depression, Emo, Suicide, Teen issues Honorable mention
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just me ..i like to express it before you wonderful writer..just read me• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Entries [46]
1 - 46 of 46
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i saw her again this morning
unable to speakby sublimeluvr 42 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 9 2:55 AM 2006. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To a Lawyer
You image-improvement, alas!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I lived in Housing and had a statement from a psychologist saying I needed my Rabbit, Powder. Housing still said I either had to get rid of her or possibly fac• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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All year I've been waiting
Now it's so close• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
All these years I've wanted to know
Why the pain never seems to cease• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I cant do shit right,
In this fucking life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
standing at your grave,
brby chardonnay 30 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 3 7:51 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The pain that sorrow brings is overwhelming and deep.
The lump in your throat that makes you want to weep.by Elvenfairy 13 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 24 3:56 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why me, what have I done?
Why won't you let me go out and have fun?by Helen Melon 19 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 1 2:01 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You can't see what I been through until you been through it.
brby We da Best 11 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 30 11:38 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's a hot day and we picking cotton
We getting wipped unless you hear the gun poppinby We da Best 7 lines, 10 comments, on May 16 3:04 PM 2006. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The world is stupid the world is gay.
This world is screwed so stay away.by ohdavey2008 6 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 13 12:18 PM 2006. In Humor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How can it be right for her
And not for me?by wolfcub 32 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 5 12:26 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look down at the scars on my wrists.
I wonder why I turned out like this.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
wearing more make-up than before
I just want to be beautiful• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
let it be ...in turn we are all the same
let me be me , love burns no more painby Poet-of-the-shadows 23 lines, 35 comments, on Nov 6 6:35 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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So many pieces of my broken heart
Even if I fix them there remains a crackby Chweetkavi 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 5 9:07 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
Its a monolauge kinda. Of my past and my presant. I guess its just a poem about my life growing up.• Commented on by judge.
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Broken Bulb
Lights out! But they never flickered back on.by Freestyle Bushido 23 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 6 1:30 PM 2006. In Dark, Self, Personal., Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. -
as i close my eyes
i see your image thereby magik moon13 70 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 6 8:49 PM 2006. In Dark, Abuse, Sad, Pain, Depression, Death• Viewed by judge. -
I am hushed into silenced, never allowed to tell,
I must keep my abuse hidden, my lips are sewn shut.by XXBrunettexBarbieXX 28 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 7 7:43 PM 2006. In Abuse, Dark, Personal, Depression• Viewed by judge. -
They tore me from the round warmth of my mother's womb
And hung me by my heels to die.by Bill Robertson 16 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 8 9:45 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Just a new chapter
youre writting the bookby Kiimmyy 24 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 13 9:45 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. -
I strive
for the perfection you seek• Commented on by judge. -
It was one time I did not know about pain
but as I got hurt I really understood pain.by half-dead 20 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 7:44 PM 2006. In Personal, Love, Hope, Fantasy, Spiritual, Friendship, Happiness, Dedication• Commented on by judge. -
just me!! when i dip my self in alcohol• Commented on by judge.
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It stank.
Sandwiches pretending to be eaten• Commented on by judge. -
Bleeding tears
Benieth my eyes• Commented on by judge. -
Pain beyond belief
It grips me and doesn't let go• Commented on by judge.
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you are right, it is hard to describe pain or sorrow, or ahppyness, or anger, or any emotion with words.
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A nice contest here... but I see you're flooded with entries... I hope you read through every contestant's poem .
best of luck to everyone from Vic... take cares and have anice time
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Finally a fellow 14 year old has started a contest.. hmm let me see what I can do...
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