Abuse: Any Topic Related, Stories or Poems, Enter!!

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on November 25, 2006
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
• Final notes:
  For a start i'd like to say THIS WAS SO HARD TO JUDGE! I was given 73 brilliant pieces and this is a hard number to judge, trust me!! I thought it was too hard to only allow the top three, so I have three honourable mentions as well.
  
  This doesn't mean your piece wasn't brilliant. I personally think you all wrote beautiful pieces and if you could all be winners i'd make sure of it, most definately.
  
  Thanks for taking part and any comments or ideas for future contests please let me know. I am going to be doing a Weird Al/Comedy parody contest next *starting now* so if you want to join that please check out my authors page and enter your heart out kiddos!!
  
  Thanks for entering all of you, you're all winners. Thank you and hope you enjoyed the contest!

Contest Winners

1. Bottom Stair

   A little girl sits on the bottom stair,
   With tears in her eyes and long tangled hair,

   by limpy 27 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 15 4:13 PM 2005. In Personal, Abuse
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Only two years old

   Only two years old
   And already scared

   by infinite spirit 47 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 15 2:07 AM 2006. In Personal, Abuse, Other
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
3. What's New

   passing off as one of them
   queen bitch flamboyant at night

   by lordoftherings 136 lines, 43 comments, on Mar 18 11:48 PM 2004. In Personal, Society, Angst
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Memories of My Father

   Rain rapped
   and thunder pulsated

   by lordoftherings 237 lines, 47 comments, on Mar 17 1:10 AM 2004. In Adult, Abuse, Angst
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. wounded heart

   My body flew through the closed door.
   I laid sprawled on the floor.

   by bluebethy 36 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 23 10:46 PM 2005. In Personal, Abuse, Other
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [59]

• Asking

  Why did you do it?
  Look at me please

  by DefinitiveFreak 25 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 8 11:26 AM 2003. In Personal, Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Beaten But Not Broken

  Please tell me why
  As you kick me in my side

  by LadyOfFate 51 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 6 1:22 AM 2005. In Abuse, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Broken Vows

  You said you loved me but now I see
  How big a liar you can be.

  by DarkenedAuras 42 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 20 8:34 AM 2005. In Abuse, Other, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Parental Beatings

  She goes to school everyday
  They all think she is normal

  by DarkenedAuras 28 lines, 20 comments, on Nov 7 6:59 AM 2005. In Sad, Abuse, Society

  • Commented on by judge.
• dark days black nights part 2

  He has finally let me out.
  I feel as shaky, and so hungry that I want to cry

  by Elvenfairy 83 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 30 8:02 AM 2005. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• When daddy came home: bloodied princesses and business trips

  And daddy is usually gone
  away from me

  by Lithium n lollipops 42 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 31 2:29 AM 2005. In Personal, Abuse, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Controlled Desperation

  My mind
  constantly running

  by pierre4 31 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 31 6:03 PM 2005. In Society, Love, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Vice

  Vice
  Patience with you is futile

  by triplethreat-brunet 34 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 20 9:05 AM 2006. In Personal, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• What is a Dream?

  I wonder how a dream feels like,
  The way I hear children describe

  by between slices 54 lines, 12 comments, on May 24 9:43 AM 2006. In Abuse, Society, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• I paint a Mockery of Myself

  Every one of those stairs left a mark
  Every one of those words left a scar

  by Fly Agaric 56 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 28 4:34 AM 2006. In Abuse, Love, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• it seems like yesterday will haunt me forever

  I dance to the images in my head
  the ones that were put there so long ago

  by Darksadness 36 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 8 12:27 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Storm Shall Cleanse You Of All Sin

  The thundering footsteps
  Roll towards the room,

  by master-of-shadow 62 lines, 30 comments, on Aug 16 5:19 PM 2006. In Personal, Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Protest Goes Unanswered

  My Protest Goes Unanswered

  by Susan E. Pennycuff 76 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 20 8:20 PM 2006. In Personal, Society, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• why little girls

  as slowly it becomes night my heart fills with fear
  i try to stay awake to hide my silent tears

  by trace3grls 32 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 25 8:44 PM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• how i end it

  by babyonboard 9 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 29 3:17 PM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Once Knight in Shining Armor

  You took me off the streets,
  With your promise that you~{!/~}d love and cherish me.

  by PoetrysAngel2041 35 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 2 12:55 PM 2006. In Abuse, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• A Story Not To Be Told

  I always have that feeling of anger and fright
  Watching my door because he used to come by at night

  by allfaith 47 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 13 1:40 PM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• A girl called toy

  about the worst kind
  of sexual abuse

  by Elvenfairy 85 lines, 20 comments, on Sep 18 4:10 PM 2006. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Mother Killed Me

  Its all your fault, I want to die,
  Your hold onto me, I can't defy,

  by slipknot babe 40 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 21 7:57 AM 2006. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Broken Angel

  Through the clouds I’m falling,
  Falling with my broken scabbed wings

  by HauntedByDesire 44 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 2 7:22 AM 2006. In Love, Hope, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• No

  Your stench fills my nostrils
  permeates me

  by mu lau hu 18 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 6 5:16 AM 2006. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Hush

  Tucked tightly between matchbox sheets, the cars
  move in rhythm with his soft breathing.

  by pixxiepoetess 13 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 7 9:37 AM 2006. In Sad, Abuse, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• rape

  by the affluent poor 75 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 11 11:53 AM 2006. In Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Just a Simple Little Game

  Featuring monsters, magic, violence and sensuality!
  Our children's favorite pass time transformed

  by Lady Prudence 24 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 23 3:27 PM 2006. In Spiritual, Society, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• One, Two, Three

  One gun, one bullet, one trigger.
  One heartache, one screw over, one fight.

  by simply-lovely 24 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 31 1:39 PM 2006. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Pain

  You never meant to,
  Oh God, as the pain

  by Original1 14 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 3 8:40 AM 2006. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Cold Hands

  So many years ago I feel it everyday
  In the coldness of his hands I wish it'd go away

  by Shakes-spear 25 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 5 8:56 AM 2006. In Sad, Abuse, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• A brave little girl

  A brave little girl named Peri Ann
  she took her fear one at a time

  by Im Daddys smile 16 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 6 7:01 AM 2006. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Forgotten Measure

  A child I am A child I'll Be....

  by Free1977 19 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 6 9:56 PM 2006. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Daddy's Little Girl, Mommy's Sweet Angel

  Getting Raped not just hurts you physically, but kills your soul and you wind up dead emotionally and spiritually

  by imperfectperfection 43 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 8 8:32 PM 2006. In Society, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Blank silhouette

  Used, abused,
  left for dead...

  by mascararunning 39 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 9 10:58 AM 2006. In Abuse, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Why I Didn't Know

  Why is mom yelling?
  What can’t be true?

  by Quiet09 38 lines, on Nov 9 6:19 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• they think they know

  "Don't ask questions, little one."

  by emevas 86 lines, on Nov 10 3:14 PM 2006. In Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Imagination Of Others

  Do you see me sitting here?
  I'm the one you think you hear

  by DefinitiveFreak 38 lines, 18 comments, on Feb 24 8:09 PM 2002. In Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Gone Too Far

  Blood trickles from her lip
  Three broken ribs and a fractured hip.

  by DarkenedAuras 43 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 17 12:25 AM 2005. In Abuse, Other, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Daemon! (Graphic, Rape, Not for children, Dark)

  WARNING! RAPE! VIOLENCE! NOT FOR CHILDREN!
  

  by Rev Alimae 117 lines, 32 comments, on Apr 10 3:41 PM 2006. In Adult, Abuse, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Childhood Lost

  There is a piece of me locked so deep inside,

  by tawk 27 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 16 3:59 PM 2006. In Personal, Abuse, Dark, noguest

  • Commented on by judge.
• Dark days black nights

  I can hear him coming after me.
  He must have gotten the note from my teacher.

  by Elvenfairy 52 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 14 6:00 PM 2005. In Society

  • Commented on by judge.
• This Broken Child

  Please, this girl
  This broken child

  by x CheepPurfume 23 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 19 1:44 PM 2005. In Sad, Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Daddy Dear

  Paint over my bruises
  As fast as you can,

  by Macey Muse 26 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 21 12:56 PM 2006. In Sad, Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Dead But Not Forgotten

  How could such a young kids life
  Be filled with so much evil

  by betrayed by you 36 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 6 6:00 PM 2006. In Sad

  • Commented on by judge.
• ...another argument...

  by oneperfectrose 138 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 18 1:02 AM 2006. In Adult, Abuse, Angst, Dark

  • Viewed by judge.
• A teenage prostitute 2

  At twelve years old I did not know,

  by caesarjager 43 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 20 10:31 AM 2006. In Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• spirit carrier

  by oneperfectrose 158 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 18 1:13 AM 2006. In Adult, Abuse, Dark, Sad

  • Commented on by judge.
• Wake Up

  Am I just some toy
  you can play with?

  by Forgot2Breathe 120 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 18 12:49 PM 2006. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• What Went On Next Door

  -SMACK
  That's all I can recall.

  by SlakerSyke 36 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 31 1:36 PM 2006. In Personal, Abuse, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Cham'pain'e

  The clouds of euphoria surround the hills
  The young adolescents with youthful bodies the men desire
  I snort in disdain at the sunken eye

  by Dragotha 118 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 22 6:45 PM 2006. In Abuse, Dark, Drugs

  • Commented on by judge.
• Tainted Goods

  Laying here
  numb inside

  by BloodyCrystalEmbers 53 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 22 5:37 PM 2006. In Personal, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Your nightmare

  I hate because I want to hurt you
  I scream to try and make you care

  by Eternal-Beauty 31 lines, 14 comments, on Dec 20 1:13 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Can't Press Rewind

  You stripped me of innocence,
  you left me naked and exposed

  by BloodyCrystalEmbers 38 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 7 12:23 PM 2006. In Sad, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Drip Drop

  This dead end ditch
  doenst look so promising

  by InfiniteCaitlin 205 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 10 10:33 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• after everything

  You took away everything
  And still you wanted more

  by Eternal-Beauty 39 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 20 4:09 AM 2005. In Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• trapped

  Trapped in a life
  That isn’t real

  by Eternal-Beauty 57 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 11 4:38 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Other

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Things get damaged

  Things get damaged
  the perfect autumn leaf

  by Jinxgirl 64 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 15 2:42 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Society

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

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• 
  Elvenfairy
  November 6, 2006
  Edit | Reply
  i entered 3 poems, 2 of them are two parts of one story, and the other one is about a diffrent person. The poem 'a girl called toy' is not based on a life experiance, but 'dark days black nights and it's sequal are something that happened to a girl I know. I wrote it how she told it to me.
• 
  master-of-shadow
  November 6, 2006
  Edit | Reply
  I have many many poems upon this topic... I've enterred a pre-write and shall try to write a new peice too.
  
  
  good luck in your contest, I forsee you receiving many powerful and expressive peices which will be difficult to judge.
• 
  Lithium n lollipops
  November 25, 2006
  Edit | Reply
  congrats to everyone.
  really enjoyed this contest.

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