This song "Unfaithful by Rihanna" has been on my mind a lot lately.. So I thought I'll start a contest on it.. All you have to do is to read the lyrics, and write a poem about the same topic, same idea, but in your own words.. 
Here it goes:
Unfaithful
- Rihanna
Story of my life
Searching for the right
But it keeps avoiding me
Sorrow in my soul
'cause it seems that one
really loves my company
[Verse 1:]
He's more than a man
And this is more than love
The reason that the sky is blue
The clouds are rollin' in
Because I'm gone again
And to him I just can't be true
[Bridge:]
And I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dyin'
[Chorus:]
I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
Everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...a murderer
[Verse 2:]
I feel it in the air
As I'm doin' my hair
Preparing for another date
A kiss upon my cheek
As he reluctantly
Asks if I'm gonna be out late
I say I won't be long
Just hangin' with the girls
A lie I didn't have to tell
Because we both know
Where I'm about to go
And we know it very well
[Bridge:]
'Cause I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dyin'
[Chorus:]
Our love ... his trust
I might as well take a gun
And put it to his head
Get it over with
I don't wanna do this...anymore
anymore
[Chorus:]
...a murderer
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Best of luck..
Peace,
~ Soledad..
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Here it goes:
Unfaithful
- Rihanna
Story of my life
Searching for the right
But it keeps avoiding me
Sorrow in my soul
'cause it seems that one
really loves my company
[Verse 1:]
He's more than a man
And this is more than love
The reason that the sky is blue
The clouds are rollin' in
Because I'm gone again
And to him I just can't be true
[Bridge:]
And I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dyin'
[Chorus:]
I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the reason why
Everytime I walk out the door
I see him die a little more inside
I don't wanna hurt him anymore
I don't wanna take away his life
I don't wanna be...a murderer
[Verse 2:]
I feel it in the air
As I'm doin' my hair
Preparing for another date
A kiss upon my cheek
As he reluctantly
Asks if I'm gonna be out late
I say I won't be long
Just hangin' with the girls
A lie I didn't have to tell
Because we both know
Where I'm about to go
And we know it very well
[Bridge:]
'Cause I know that he knows I'm unfaithful
And it kills him inside
To know that I am happy with some other guy
I can see him dyin'
[Chorus:]
Our love ... his trust
I might as well take a gun
And put it to his head
Get it over with
I don't wanna do this...anymore
anymore
[Chorus:]
...a murderer
~ * ~ ~ * ~ ~ * ~ . ~ * ~ ~ * ~ ~ * ~
Best of luck..
Peace,
~ Soledad..
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 12, 2006
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Congratulations
Entries [2]
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Dancing underneath the moon
Looking into the eyes• Commented on by judge.
Gold trophy winner
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a tempting project to do but i will pass, i am stopping posting new for a little while i think. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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thank you for passing by and leaving a message..
~ Soledad
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nice idea but i dont think i can do it........ i wish i could
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gosh, i absolutely love that song, and could write some good poetry off of it, but my pen has been dry and it is getting very irritating...ill try to enter though. good luck.
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Let me know if you open this one to prewrites... I have used this song as an inspiration before. Great idea for a contest, I love using powerful songs to inspire me to write the good stuff! Good luck with your contest!
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Why do you say that? I think if the idea inspires you, you will come up with something great.. Do give it a try tho!
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I'll be lookin forward to your entry Good luck..
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Will you give me the link to your poem? I haven't allowed pre-writes but exceptions can be made..
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ill try soon ok
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yes you may..
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