Right now I'm going through a lil situation with my girl. I confessed to her all the things that I did behind her back while she and I were apart. Now we're at a point were she's contemplating on whether or not she stays or goes. I could beg her for years to stay, but the problem I have not a word to say. I want DEEP poetry on this scenario. Make it heartfelt, with every emotion you have. I don't want her to leave. Ladies I want your poems to be about your man being in my position, he cheated, and messed around with other girls. Or with the contest having two titles, you can write about receiving the most devastating confession that your man could ever give.
Fellas, I want poems trying to persuade your lady "Let's stay together."
do everything you can to keep her from going away. Or, with the contest having two titles, you can write about the most devastating, heartbreaking confession you could ever tell your girl.
Rules are, no cursing.
No, sexual references.
DO NOT submit a prewrite unless it fits into the criteria.
No sticky caps.
and NO SORE LOSERS!!!
Fellas, I want poems trying to persuade your lady "Let's stay together."
do everything you can to keep her from going away. Or, with the contest having two titles, you can write about the most devastating, heartbreaking confession you could ever tell your girl.
Rules are, no cursing.
No, sexual references.
DO NOT submit a prewrite unless it fits into the criteria.
No sticky caps.
and NO SORE LOSERS!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 10, 2006
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thank all of you poets for the entries, and the overwhelming support. I'm glad you all put helped me out and and a special thanks to mackintoch, my first place winner. I don't know who you are but I will try to keep in touch with you man.
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If I Only Had a Choiceby JuJuBean430 25 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 3 11:07 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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On Tuesday night, my bf and I kinda got back together...we had a horrible fight Thursday, and he said he was sorry in the most romantic way on Tuesday...but I dby FollowingFate 31 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 3 12:41 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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sitting here waiting for that day
when will finally here my baby sayby XSKITTLEZx 8 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 22 1:45 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Mind breaking,
heart shattering.• Commented on by judge. -
Word’s can’t explain my sorrow and they can only start to say how sorry I am
I know you are thinking how I could let this stormby YoungCutta29 23 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 30 10:04 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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Your confession breaks my heart
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Nine, ten, eleven, twelve shots,
how could you do this to me and get caught?• Commented on by judge. -
I'm looking at him and he's cryin his heart out.
Purgin his soul because he lied,by Simplipoetic 0 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 30 11:16 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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I dont want to lose you
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A Matter of Trust• Commented on by judge.
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There are too many days
in the year – colorful and unadornedby KatieNicole 33 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 30 2:02 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Lay there weeping
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You look at me, agony,
torturing yourself and me,• Commented on by judge. -
ill love you no matter what you may do
but i am not sure if i should stay or go• Commented on by judge. -
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the way you held my face when I cried,
the way you swore to me I was the only one,• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
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Love is trust.
Trust is love.
Call it a vicious circle. I
ended up divorcing someone to
learn that lesson. When I
stopped trusting him, the love
followed with it. I wish
you luck in entries for this
contest, and I wish you luck
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This is a contest for me... I'll be entering.
♥ Kas -
Tell her you wouldn't have told her unless you truly loved her. Because you can't have a perfect relationship without honesty. I hope she understands and that everything works out.
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wow, i think i'll tell one of my friends bout this one, cuz this is what is going on with her right now...good luck with your relationship and judging.
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damn it , if you havent the words to say to your girl, what exactly have you got that will last years and years ... sometimes it is best to not confess all, you did it to make yourself feel less guilty, not for her ... communication needs to be found - with you ... if you have no communication, you have nothign to base your relationship on ... open your mouth
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I have to agree with glispa.
If you cant communicate, if you cant tell her how you feel, if you arent able to express your feelings to her, then you have nothing.
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HeHe, if you need to ask people how to say I love you, then maybe you dont? AAHHhhhh. Guilt, eats things slowly! hope you find the answer, assuming your looking
best wishes Paul.
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the saddest news or confession for someone you dearly love.
sad because you messed around, painful it is really.
but if the girl really loves you and accept the fact that in a relationship always expect the worse,(not only the better) she will learn how to forgive and put everything behind and start a new.
but... if she will keep on digging the past and try to remind you of all your mistakes then its best to let it go.
good luck
find her soft spot and she will forgive as long as you stay truthful
i will try to enter
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This is a great contest, I thought I's never trust my fiance again, even though I'm trying, I thought I'd always feel the way I do, but I've learned through everyone's poems here that it's really going to be okay. This is the best contest ever, thanks for hosting it!
♥ Kas -
Hi- I just want to state my oppinion on your situation. I have a lot of anger towards those who cheat on their girlfriends because my ex-boyfriend just hurt me this way- but if you and your girlfriend were truly apart while you went through with these actions...then that isn't infidelity. A mistake sure- but you didn't cheat on her. You cheated on yourself.
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That's not the problem, see. I can communicate well with my girl and I read her well too, very well. I told her everything in the past and now I'm still telling her with my own words and with my own mouth. I think you may have misunderstood what you read in the contest. It was never about communication, it was about truth and infidelity. We have good conversation though lately it's been kinda hard because she's not telling me what's bothering her and what all she's thinking in her mind.
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I adore this contest.... it is very very inspiring! It takes a lot of guts and character I feel for you to admit that you were wrong for this... and to try and look into understanding both sides...
I entered two poems for this contest, simply beacuse I had two immediate reactions to this situation. one being hurt and weak... the other was empowered by anger!! So, if this is not okay please feel free to remove one of them I couldn't help it... Both seemed so appropriate 
Always,
MElanie
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thanks for the bronze blak, i really do appreciate it, and you know i'm here if you ever need to talk.
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