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"Maybe You'll Notice Me Now"

Hi All Fellow Poets
I would like you to be inspired by this VERSE
If you listen to music by MINDY MACREADY--listen to her song -{Maybe He'll Notice her Now] and you will understand what kind of write I am looking for-feelings wise.



Maybe you will notice me now
Maybe you will open your eyes
Sometimes it takes somebody leaving
For someone to realize
Maybe you will tell me I'm the only thing
That you can't live without
Now that I'm gone
Maybe you'll notice me now.


Fom a womans point of view--Why is it that after all is done and she leaves-he notices her now instead of when he should have when she was right there in front of him.Why does a man always notice you when its too late?

I want whatever inspires your mind as soon as you read this.
Give me poems,lyrics or just anything.
The most heartfelt poem or lyrics  will be the winner.
I love songs-so if you can write me one--youll have a better chance in the running!!!!!!But your song must be at least four verses long with a beginning chorous.
If you can really touch my heart and make me cry--you will win me over for sure!!!!!!!
Your write can be from real experiences or just a write what the song may inspire you to write !!!!

Rules
No erotica
No swearing
I am allowing prewrites but am looking for something related to the above verse-so if i feel your write is not in this category or does not relate to what I am looking for-I will delete!!!!



Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 26, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:

Entries [4]

  • Your heart’s still broken
    Now can ‘I’ fix it?
    by jaimevidau1 113 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 13 8:32 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Hadji Murad 152 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 23 5:50 PM 2006. In Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • They lived in the same house, but they were like strangers now
    He would go off to work and stay gone most of the night
    by beautifulbrat 72 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 26 1:07 AM 2006. In Angst
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 22, 2006
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    Aunt Donna can I enter this in a made up write? I don't have any reason to write for this contest as I'm happy in all ways but can I still enter? pleaseeeeeeeee ha, can I can I? and yeah it's my cough meds making me hyper okay Lmao...love you Josie xoxooxoxo


  • beautifulbrat
    September 26, 2006
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    OMG I'm so bookmarking this contest and gonna try to write something for it. I love the song "Maybe He'll Notice Her Now" and my mind is already working on some stuff for this. Great idea for a contest. Hope you get a lot of great entries