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I Saw Sparks

Did I drive you away?
I know what you'll say
You'll say, "Oh, sing one we know"
But I promise you this
I'll always look out for you
That's what I'll do

I say "oh"
I say "oh"

My heart is yours
It's you that I hold on to
That's what I do
And I know I was wrong
But I won't let you down
(Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah, yeah I will, yes I will…)

I said "oh"
I cry "oh"

Yeah I saw sparks
Yeah I saw sparks
And I saw sparks
Yeah I saw sparks
Sing it out

La, la, la, la, oh…
La, la, la, la, oh…
La, la, la, la, oh…
La, la, la, la, oh…


My favorite song by coldplay..

I would just like someone to write about someone giving you that spark... but please no cheesiness.. and make it come from the heart.

Rules:
1.no Internet talk
2.enter only 2 per poet
3.ask me any question and ill be glad to help
5.blah blah blahhhhhhhhh
6. have fun...

uh since AP has a rod up it's bum they dont want you to look at my work but um basically i just want people to know that i dont like easy rhmying unless it fits well. Please just try your best and thank you for entering

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 28, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 500
  • Final notes:
    Thank you for all your entries and although i was a little dissappointed on how many i recieved i was still glad i got your entries!! ♥ You all wrote beautifully thanks again!

Entries [8]

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  • Come Love Me Tonight
    Give one little spark, search for the glow,
    teach me tonight how far it can go.
    by Sandygram 0 lines, 17 comments, on Sep 19 6:29 AM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Lead Me Through The Storm
    Chill hugged me and possessed my inner chest
    Stinging my broken heart and pulling me out of my rest
    by Anan Tello 23 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 19 8:23 AM 2006. In Fantasy, Love, Hope
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Shortcomings of Rome and Juliet
    But my love for you will never fall out of fashion
    My love will not fall, for it is as a house made of brick
    by Austonian 14 lines, on Sep 19 3:55 PM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Act I: Encounter
    by Broken Raven 47 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 20 4:44 AM 2006. In Personal, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dear One
    Sing the silence of one so sweet,
    deploring desire
    by MenthrinKuth 46 lines, on Sep 22 10:07 PM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • X
    This one is to you X
    Nobody will ever love you, like I did
    by King Midas 59 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 26 2:52 AM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Touch Is Forever
    by kaibab 156 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 26 10:48 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Nature, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Blown Away
    Your hand rubs against my arm
    Cautiously moving to mine
    by ShaylaRenea 20 lines, on Sep 26 3:47 PM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • windhover3 gold member
    September 26, 2006
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    No offense, but "please no cheesiness"?

    I say "oh"
    My heart is yours ???????

    Yeah I saw sparks
    Sing it out ????????

    I'm just saying, you know.
    Hope you get great un-cheesy entries.


  • Mildew in PinK tile
    September 26, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    um no offense.. no one cares what you think


    ♥


    have a nice day


  • Mystikrypton
    September 26, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Hmmm...I just might enter this one. But seeing as I am leaving shortly and don't feel like bookmarking, I'll leave a comment to remind me to come back to this contest. Best of luck with judging and...reading.


  • Heartless Angel
    September 26, 2006
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    Coolio! Isn't Psyche in a Dress a novel by Francesca Lia Block. I wanted to get it cuz I love the legend of Eros and Psyche. LOVE UR PEN NAME! May have to steal it. JK.

    -Lillian Madeline


  • Leslie gold member
    September 26, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Excellent thought for a contest... I love Coldplay, and that song.... is one of my fav too, I'm still not done with what I wanted to enter.... still I wish you the best in judging and if in any case you reopen a bit longer, please let me know

    Leslie


  • Mildew in PinK tile
    September 27, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    yes it is! i do suggest you read it, its very lovley. thanx for the comment


  • Sandygram
    September 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    VERY BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTFELT

    Congratulations to all the winners. Great contest. take care, Sandy

  • Anan Tello
    September 28, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Psyche In A Dress,

    Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for the bronze trophy...
    This is the first time I win a trophy on this site...
    I even thought of partisipating just for the sake of getting people to read my poems...
    This is soooooooooo cool.
    Thank you again, Psyche In A Dress, you're so cool.
    I'll read as much as I can of your poems... lol

    Best wishes,
    Nano

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