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love hurts

I want a sad love poem... give me your all... i want to feel the pain...
who ever can make me cry... which is hard i might add... will get 1st prize...
I want it dark and tragic
Rules-
1- nO sTiCkY cApS
2- cursing is allowed
3- HAVE FUN WITH IT

this can have death, cutting, anything you want and need to write this poem... i just want something heart breaking...

good luck

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 20, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thank you for entering my contest... All was lovely poems... it was VERY VERY VERY hard to choose top three... thank you again and let your heart flow through your words....

Entries [19]

1 - 19 of 19
  • A Call to Death
    Oh wretched death
    I beckon thee,
    by jordan1985 20 lines, 56 comments, on Jan 2 1:01 AM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I Can Only Say...
    by cookie crumbs 13 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 29 10:17 AM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I remember
    Whats broken inside of me,
    Can never be repaired,
    by crushed 88 lines, 21 comments, on Feb 12 3:23 PM 2006. In Sad, Love, Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • All It Does
    Push me away, and make me fly,
    Hold me close, and let me die,
    by HiddenShadow 17 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 12 12:24 AM 2006. In Personal, Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My Dear Baby
    I made a mistake with a boy one time, and I hoped no one would find out.
    But then my period was late, and I had no idea what that was about.
    by Cr187 77 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 12 5:00 PM 2006. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Living In A Lie
    that I knew was true
    by cookie crumbs 20 lines, 5 comments, on May 5 6:58 PM 2006. In Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • fuck love
    how could you do this to me
    i loved you so fucking much
    by ilovebigfoot 38 lines, 8 comments, on May 12 4:41 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • hate
    you claim you love me , all you want to do is own me .
    my heart is gone . my words are lost in the wind .
    by dragongurlz69 25 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 12 12:38 AM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I've Been Rotting Away
    I've been rotting away...
    Please don't plea for pity...
    by lostinawe. 18 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 20 5:40 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Broken heart.
    Simply looking into your eyes..
    Telling myself, that you were the one I needed.
    by FieryFlame 19 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 2 8:45 PM 2006. In Sad, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You said.
    You said you loved me.
    You said you cared.
    by FieryFlame 33 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 11 3:08 PM 2006. In Abuse, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Back Again
    I’m falling farther,
    Every day,
    by torntopieces 34 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 17 5:38 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A dedication to Richard Marx’s ‘Right here waiting’
    i was once in love too and i still feel the pain of loss even though its been years now. can't move on.
    by bubbasamuel 33 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 17 6:17 PM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sonnet
    Her heart beats fast like bread flour pounds to dough.
    She wants her racing heartbeat pace to slow.
    by Iana 17 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 17 6:17 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Past Is Never Truly Gone, You'll Never Leave Me.
    A sound so heart-breaking
    Ripped from her throat
    by Alli zombieee 19 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 18 4:28 AM 2006. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Kill me
    shatters diamonds and errodes platinum
    by oceanman2001 32 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 18 3:20 PM 2006. In Contemporary
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Happy Birthday Mama
    by jerryspringerfanone 58 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 20 5:13 AM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • lostinawe.
    August 17, 2006
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    My poem is sad, and about love...
    I hope it fits in weel enough...
    If it doesn't go the theme you need,
    Let me know and give you more of me...

    Good luck with this one...
    Peace and Love,
    Matt

  • Shadow Cat 1990
    August 17, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Hey, thanx for allowing prewrites. And, good luck to everyone!


  • -Lonely-Prisoner-
    August 17, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    Good luck to all. I have posted a pre-write. I have read through a lot of these poems and commented on what I have read. I feel we are all brave to have posted what our hearts have felt. And to those who have written from a perspective, well done or portraying a persons feelings. Good luck to all.
    Be safe.

    Love Re xXx


  • Never Fall in Love
    August 18, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    hey wow
    finally i found the contest im looking for
    in fact, im making one peice
    and then im gonna add it right now
    good luck to all
    and when i get time
    i'll certainly comment on everyone's writes!!

    good luck
    great contest

  • Shadow Cat 1990
    August 21, 2006
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    Congrats to all the winners! I look forward to the next contest.

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