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~~~PHOENIX~~~ # 4

Hellooo again my fellow poets ...

Welcome to the fourth round of the word inspiration

Ok! I am looking for phoenix.. Oh wait! I am looking for poems on Phoenix( the bird and not city )..anything that is related to Phoenix.

SO HAVE FUN !

Since people are getting confused here is an example I wrote :

Phoenix aka the song bird

The fire burns brightly
turning the song bird into ashes of nothing.
Then suddenly from those ashes
a fiery golden bird rises
filling its admirers with a new life.

Rules
One entry per person.
Not more than 5 lines..
Dont annoy me with some weird writing...and act like some zombie!
And yeah have fun..

Anything else ask me...

Signing Out
phoenixonfire
(preeti)

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 14, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for entering...I will be closing this sooner because its getting really diffcult for me to judge..the entries are too good..!

    Here we go with the winners this time :
    #1 - hoodoolover
    #2 - JeannieD
    #3 - StormGoddess

    Honourabe mentions ( in no particular order )
    Cupcrazy
    crystalheart
    Dove
    DarkenedAuras
    Speaking4thekids..

    Thanks all again for entering and hope to see you in my future contests

Entries [6]

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  • by StormGoddess 5 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 13 1:07 PM 2006. In Fantasy
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Silver
    by JeannieD Hunter 9 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 13 1:48 PM 2006. In Fantasy
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Breath of Life, winded song,
    Gloriously you sail along.
    by crystylheart 6 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 13 2:10 PM 2006. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • like falling Azazel from the sky
    burned away to it ashes
    by abuyi 6 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 13 2:18 PM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Consumed by fire,yet she lives again.Rising from the ashes.Destruction only slows her,it does not keep her down.
    by My Nemesis 4 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 13 2:50 PM 2006. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.

  • Phoenix, mighty firebird
    by DarkenedAuras 6 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 13 3:13 PM 2006. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Floorboards
    August 13, 2006
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    another one, crikey!

  • phoenixonfire
    August 13, 2006
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    lol!

  • Sadistic Lavender
    August 13, 2006
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    Pheonix, AZ or Pheonix the bird?

  • phoenixonfire
    August 13, 2006
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    loL! The phoenix bird...
    ~~~PREETI~~~

  • LadyOfFate
    August 13, 2006
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    no more then 5 lines??? what are we to do? a haiku or something? there are long long long long stories on the phoenix in each contury in every laungage out there~!!!

  • phoenixonfire
    August 13, 2006
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    just a general thing on phoenix...I dont need stories..I do know a lot about phoenix...I want u to describe its power and beauty..etc etc
    ~~~PREETI~~~

  • LadyOfFate
    August 13, 2006
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    sorry I am long winded

  • phoenixonfire
    August 13, 2006
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    no problem at all! Have fun!
    ~~~PREETI~~~

  • Granny Goose silver member
    August 13, 2006
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    lol... your name fits Phoenix, Az this summer... it's been blazing hot here... I could write about that but I know it's the Phoenix bird you're refering to

    Good luck with your contest, it'll be an interesting one

    Maybe I'll come up with something anyway
    Dee

  • pointlessdayz
    August 13, 2006
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    do you want like Phoenix the city? or the bird... cuz i could write you a nice poem about the city... its about two hours away... but the bird is more interesting....

  • phoenixonfire
    August 13, 2006
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    Yes its the bird..I will look forward to it!
    ~~~PREETI~~~

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 14, 2006
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    Thank you so much for silver!! Congratulations to the other winners.
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