I have decided to go in a different direction with this contest. I want to know how you would spend your last day on earth, if you knew it was your last. It should be an inspiring poem, based on your faith. I DO NOT want dark poems or silly ones.
You can use any form you like. Shorter would be better, but is not really an issue.
I may put a limit on this, depending on how many entries there are.
Rules: (Yes, I love rules. So I have them.)
1. Spell-check is a must. I have little patience for lack of it.
2. No erotica. Or foul language. Or suicides. Or cutting.
3. This must be spiritual in nature. It is God we are talking about.
4. Please state your form in the author's notes. I am not a big stickler for this one, but if I cannot figure out the form, then it is disqualified.
5. Do *NOT* write any stupid phrases in the author's notes to let me know you read the rules. I will know without such childishness.
6. I will warn any entries breaking rule 1. Otherwise, you will be disqualifed without warning for the other rules. They are clear, and I assume you can read.
7. I will acknowledge each entry. Unlike some hosts, I feel it is the least I can do if you write a poem for me. I may not critique each one, but I will let you know I read it.
Gold will receive 300 points. There may be more, depending upon my whims.
NOTICE!!!!!
There are two who did not get applause. I ran out and then did not quite remember who still needed them. If you did not get one, please IM me and let me know. I do know that everyone but two got them.
I am extending this until the 6th as we have a busy weekend. I have commented on everyoe who has entered thus far. If you enter after today, please IM me so I do not overlook anyone.
I have turned on the pre-write option, but it is only for GoddessofTemptation, who accidently deleted her entry. Any other pre-writes will be deleted. (Well, if it is exceptionally good, you may try to justify it, but I want an IM first.)
There is one day left. Everyone who entered got applause. If you are one of the two who did not, please IM me. You have until the day after the judging.
You can use any form you like. Shorter would be better, but is not really an issue.
I may put a limit on this, depending on how many entries there are.
Rules: (Yes, I love rules. So I have them.)
1. Spell-check is a must. I have little patience for lack of it.
2. No erotica. Or foul language. Or suicides. Or cutting.
3. This must be spiritual in nature. It is God we are talking about.
4. Please state your form in the author's notes. I am not a big stickler for this one, but if I cannot figure out the form, then it is disqualified.
5. Do *NOT* write any stupid phrases in the author's notes to let me know you read the rules. I will know without such childishness.
6. I will warn any entries breaking rule 1. Otherwise, you will be disqualifed without warning for the other rules. They are clear, and I assume you can read.
7. I will acknowledge each entry. Unlike some hosts, I feel it is the least I can do if you write a poem for me. I may not critique each one, but I will let you know I read it.
Gold will receive 300 points. There may be more, depending upon my whims.
NOTICE!!!!!
There are two who did not get applause. I ran out and then did not quite remember who still needed them. If you did not get one, please IM me and let me know. I do know that everyone but two got them.
I am extending this until the 6th as we have a busy weekend. I have commented on everyoe who has entered thus far. If you enter after today, please IM me so I do not overlook anyone.
I have turned on the pre-write option, but it is only for GoddessofTemptation, who accidently deleted her entry. Any other pre-writes will be deleted. (Well, if it is exceptionally good, you may try to justify it, but I want an IM first.)
There is one day left. Everyone who entered got applause. If you are one of the two who did not, please IM me. You have until the day after the judging.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 6, 2006
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: This was a difficult decision to make. There were several good entries. There were also far too many that did not meet the mark. I understand how exciting it would be to know that you have only one more day before joining our heavenly Father; however, this contest was about how you would spend that last day. Too many passed by that to describe actually reaching heaven. Exciting as that may be, that is not what I wanted. The top three should include another:
Ready And Waiting by sandygram
Unfortunately, there are only provisions for three top winners. So, I am making a special place for fourth. No trophy, but it does consist of points. So, my line up is:
If Today Were My Last by Frogzter - Gold and Four Hundred Points
My Final Hours by Forms of Me - Siver and Three Hundred Points
Cradled in God's Loving Arms by volebabe - Bronze and Two Hundred Points
Ready and Waiting by sandygram - Copper and One Hundred Points
Then there are Honorable Mentions - Marble Trophies and Fifty Points:
The Light On The Last Day by ChaosLore
If Today Were My Last Day On Earth by Inside and out
My Last Days by GoddessofTemptation
The Final Day by WolfHeart
Some of the rest were wonderful poems, just not what I wanted. Some were not even in the runnings. Three were pre-writes, proving that you did not follow the rules.
I am disappointed in that a couple who were invited did not enter. However, I do thank those who did. Each qualifying entry received and applause. If you did not get yours, you have until 7/8 to notify me. There are only two that were missed.
Again, thank you all. I enjoyed reading these.
Entries [13]
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In my final days walking on Earth,
I'd take a spiritual walk.by Sum1sDreamer 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 2:22 PM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
An angel whispered in my ear that this
would be the last day of my life on earth.• Commented on by judge. -
Taking One Day,At A Time,As We Strive,To Climb 'The-Ladder',To 'Gods'-Kingdom,'His-Personal-Stairway'................Let Him,Show Us,The-Way'!!!by Shirley Shaw 39 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 27 2:53 PM 2006. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge.
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The light is starting to get closer; I know my time on earth is almost over.
I must make the most of the day ahead.by Social Hazzard 09 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 27 10:59 PM 2006. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
Falling on my face, I would bow
for Him.• Commented on by judge. -
© Bob Barra, 6-29-06
The hope• Commented on by judge. -
I stumbled into God
as I tripped over a dead tree,• Commented on by judge. -
I'd take my children to Disney World,
with my precious grand babies in tow,• Commented on by judge. -
Waiting to embark to the voice of love.
My spirit enchanted with that land concealed.• Commented on by judge. -
I'd look for my parents and give them a hug.by JudoMaster 25 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 6 10:42 AM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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When it is time for me to go
I hope that there will be a way to knowby Picassopoet 16 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 6 3:47 PM 2006. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
my last day on earth
I will sit in my gardenby Fairy Nutty Buddy 21 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 6 4:31 PM 2006. In Spiritual, Love, Hope
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i would probably just do what i do everyday if i found that it was my last day on earth, be lazy and do not a lot with my time
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Great idea for a contest.Hope you like the entry.
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Cool contest! I would read lots of holy scriptures, thank God for my wonderful stay on earth, do lots of charity, call up my best friend and boyfriend, and, thank them for everything. Hmm, I would write some poetry and sing a song in homage to God. I would call up all those who hurt me a lot in life and tell them that I have forgiven them.
All the best with the entries and judging,
Charishma
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God is always with me. I don't really fear death, but I do fear pain. I would rather not know when it was my last day.
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I agree. But, the point of the contest it not actually knowing, but how you would spend your last day, should you know. In reality, you should live every day as if it were your last. I was just curious as to what people would do with that time.
Rous -
This is truly a great idea for a contest.
I wish you much luck....I may have to create something for this one.
LIZ -
Sorry, I went further.
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LOL.. on the little note under your contest heading, you put.. if you don't believe in god, dont go any further... so I did! teehee
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Got it. You must amuse easily, lol. I just did not want to get a lot of comments from non-believers. Then I would be forced to start deleting comments and I really hate doing that. So, I thought I would give fair warning. I do appreciate a light-hearted poke, though. Thank you for the smile.
Rous -
This sounds like a great contest, I hope that I might have time to come up with something! I hope you have fun judging the entries, I have a feeling that there will be some really good ones to judge!
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Thank you so much for the inspiration to write this poem!
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OOPs I missed...OH well here it is for you!
The Last Stop
The train has tolled the last bell
Where would you like to get out?
The County fair, I liked it there.
The rides made me want to shout.
A gathering with my good friends,
Get the family, together one more time.
A last goodbye, wipe a tear from my eye
remember it's all, part of the design.
A kiss for the one that loved me,
through all the ups and the downs.
One half of two, I swear I love you,
so glad that you've been around.
Thanks to those that have helped me
The guidence has helped time to time.
Write on my stone, thanks to whom I've known,
God's love tells me all will be fine! -
volebabe,
You are so welcome. Thank you for actully reading what I wanted.
Rous -
Shakes-spear,
Too bad you missed this. I love your entry. It would have at least made HM. Therefore, I am giving you the points anyway; everyone can use 50 points and a pretty marble trophy.
I do have another contest running, but it may not be for you. Check it out.
Rous -
WONDERFUL CONTEST
Thank you very much for the points and including my poem with the winners I do appreciate it. You made great selections for the winners. This was a wonderful contest. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for hosting such an inspirational contest. I have often thought about the 'last day'. It was nice to actually put it into words. I have you to thank for this.
Congratulations to each of the winners of the trophies. Your awards were well deserved.
Thank you for the honorable mention. This was a nice surprise.
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Sandy,
You are quite welcome. I truly wish there was another placing, this deserved it. Just too many at the top. LOL
Rous -
Inside,
I am glad that this contest enabled so many to think through that last day. It is something we should all do at least periodically, if not every day.
Rous -
I really appreciated the opportunity found in this contest. God bless you in all your efforts here.
Thank you!
TheM0of
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Oh my gosh... I am totally humbled by this! Thank you so very much... I did not expect this... my entry was so whimsical, but pretty close to what I'd actually do! I am blessed by this and I want to congratulate all the others who entered!
May God Bless each and every one of you including the host of this fabulous contest! Thanx
Huggles and blessings'
Frog~ -
thank you for the HM
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MOof,
You are most welcome. I am kind of glad I thought it up. One of those things to make you think.
Rous -
Frogzter,
Yes, your poem was humorous but exactly what I wanted: to know how you would spend the day. I never said anything about being serious, or religious. I just wanted honesty.
Rous -
Goddess,
You are welcome. It was a nice entry. However, only room at the top for three, although I did manage to give four, but no extra trophy.
Rous -
i'm thankful enough that you enjoyed reading my piece
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