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I want to feel so sad, Gimme what'cha got...

OK people...I want to feel your pain...I want to cry because of your poems...I want to feel like killing whatever it is that hurt you...Basically I want to be depressed...So I want your poems

--Rules--

1. OK everyone always says no StIcKy CaPs but hey my name is like that...so if you want to write like that...go for it...no penalty!!!

2. I don't want to laugh or be happy...if there are any poems like that...I will DQ them immediately

3. ANYTHING GOES...erotic, suicide, cutting, death, anything sad, abuse, divorce, you wanna cuss...go for it...anything that hurt you

4. Basically as you can see I have no real rules...but

5. NO MORE THAN 3 (three) POEMS PER PERSON (see I can have a real rule lol)

6. NEW RULE: no really long poems...I will lose interest...and you know what long is


If you can please try to write something new..I'm not forcing that but I would like some new work...if possible

And also...if I ask you to fix something in your poem...fix it or remove it from the contest...because If I want you to fix it...it isn't near winning..so yeah...

oh yeah as usual first prize is 300 points, and then I'm not too sure what 2nd and 3rd will get, I still need to get some more points...but anyways I will also have 4 HM's so yeah...that's it!

-_-_-InKy-_-_-
(Jenn)

good job

1st - Madd Hatter - why Joshua

2nd - Xelgaroth - Avenue of Agony

3rd - Take it with you - cute mayoush

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 20, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Wow I had to close this early...I had so many entries I was gonna go crazy!!!! In a good way crazy that is...anyways good job to all...I will give points my 2nd, 3rd, and 4 HM's (

    Death From within- by Grim Reefer 420 - wow I loved this great job

    My sob story- by hamiltonhottie69 - this was so sad and I loved it

    To All the People I Love by GodeSsOfTemPtati0n- tis was awesome

    The monster- by Brandy3

Entries [21]

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  • Disappear
    If i were to disappear
    Would any one notice
    by Holt3572 12 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 13 2:33 AM 2003. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dear Mommy
    A letter to my dear over-protective mother
    by NoikoYen 45 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 5 5:35 PM 2004. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • 'Suisaid
    It's my own special brand of suicide. One I hold dear to my heart.
    by NoikoYen 11 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 5 5:43 PM 2004. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • For Joshua
    This is for my brother, Joshua, who is missed very much
    by Madd Hatter 34 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 7:18 PM 2004. In Sad, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Why Joshua?
    The horrible memory will always stay
    The good memories will slowly slide away
    by Madd Hatter 37 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 5 5:40 AM 2004. In Sad
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • This Man's Requiem
    i knew a man once.
    i knew that man well.
    by cerphantes 48 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 9 7:39 PM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Never More
    "After long years,
    How should I greet thee?
    by pink-roses 81 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 7 1:00 PM 2005. In Other, Nature, Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Somnambulist
    No music now.
    Turn it off please, its much too loud.
    by pink-roses 84 lines, 17 comments, on May 10 4:43 PM 2006. In Love, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sudden Death Syndrome.
    personal
    differnt
    by pink-roses 113 lines, 13 comments, on May 12 2:47 PM 2006. In Dark, Contemporary, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • set me free
    when i look through the mirror i don’t see what you see.
    i see a girl in a lost world waiting to be free.
    by dead-to-the-world 43 lines, 23 comments, on May 17 10:50 AM 2006. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A Cinematic Ocean Scene
    Amongst all that is beautiful I drift away to dream,
    Of a cinematic orchestra for what is destined to deceive,
    by liljoeneo 45 lines, 12 comments, on May 21 11:25 AM 2006. In Spiritual, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • save me
    They always try to tell me
    My luck is the best of all
    by Viva La Vie Boheme 28 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 7 5:08 PM 2006. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Don't Wanna Leave
    Dad don't do this, I can't do this
    Too much to lose, too much to miss
    by Viva La Vie Boheme 74 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 15 3:22 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • the pain is so real
    the pain is so real
    for it i have to fear
    by mynameiskim 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 18 4:57 PM 2006. In Abuse
    • Commented on by judge.
  • To the dad that was never there...
    For the man who helped give me life.
    by luckystar16 154 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 10:18 PM 2006. In Personal, Other, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Gloomy Heartache
    by NoikoYen 44 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 18 10:43 PM 2006. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Bound Hands
    Here I sit, holding the hands of Time
    Looking upon his ashen face hidden by gray hairs.
    by Scripts 15 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 19 12:54 AM 2006. In Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My Best Friend
    My Best Friend
    Your hair was blonde
    by GabriCal 81 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 12:43 PM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Serpent's Tongue

    Here they come, slithering and hissing,
    by WolfHeart 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 1:40 PM 2006. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Death From Within.
    I'm heading down a destructive path,
    Think god I won’t see the after math,
    by The Grimm Poet 49 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 19 3:10 PM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Take It With You!!!!!!!!
    by cute mayoush 45 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 20 3:35 AM 2006. In Dark
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Ah.Sosha.
    June 19, 2006
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    I have a feeling you will get a lot of entries with this one... soooo good luck judging!
    Liked the rules, lol.
    Enjoy
    ♥'s
    sosha


  • Madd Hatter
    June 19, 2006
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    Hey! good luck with your contest! I'm thinking about entering, not sure what to enter yet tho just wanted to stop by and check it out and wish you some luck


  • JaydinC
    June 19, 2006
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    Hey, good luck judging this contest. I'm entered two prewrites to this and I'm going to try to cook up something new.
    Rock on,
    Jayd


  • 0darkAngel0
    June 20, 2006
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    i entered 2 pre writes and will entr 1 new piece hope you appreciate
    thank you


  • 0darkAngel0
    June 20, 2006
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    the piece to all the people i love is a bit long but not too long. i just want to share it to you. you will know why
    i hope you will consider
    again thank you


  • 0darkAngel0
    June 20, 2006
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    thank you for the HM
    i'm glad you find my piece
    interesting to read...
    congratulations you hosted a successful contest


  • Madd Hatter
    June 20, 2006
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    Thank you for the first place!! im glad you liked my poem so much! Congratz on your contest, it was fun

    ~Madd~


  • -Ink Artist-
    June 20, 2006
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    Thank you very much for the honorable mention in your contest. It is greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed my piece. It will take me days to read through all these wonderful submissions you had! Great contest! Thanks for sponsoring!

    ~*Lori*~


  • Floorboards
    June 20, 2006
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    great contest!congratulations to the winners!

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