Well, I haven't had a contest in a little bit. I've been having a bad month. And when I was with a new friend, she wrote a song and in it, part of the verse was "Sing me a song of corrupt fairy tales" and I thought it was pretty cool. It was a song of trusting someone and then losing trust for them because they keep promises and then break them.
Anyways back on track. I would like you to take a fairy tale and "corrupt" it. Obviously enough. But it must be accurate to the fairy tale you use.
Here are some fairy tales. You don't have to use the ones I have here, but it must be a fairy tale.
Snow White
Thumbelina
Beauty and the Beast
Little Bo Peep
Repunzle
Rumplestiltskin
The Princess and the Pea
Sleeping Beauty
Cinderella
Peter Pan
The Little Mermaid
Alice in Wonderland
The Three Little Pigs
Goldilocks
etc.
Rules:
~Use any person (1st, 2nd, 3rd)
~Spell check (will hurt you for placing)
~I'd like stories more than poems.
~No longer than 5 pages on Word please.
~NoNe Of ThIs ShIt!!
~Swearing and Erotica allowed (Just don't over do it)
~I may close it when I get more enteries than I can handle.
~Sorry, only allowing fresh writes.
How They Will Be Judged:
According to:
-Vocabulary
-Spelling
-Length
-Grammar
-If it stays on topic
-Express topic with clarity and skill
-Provides convincing interpretation of a specific major issue
-illustrates consistant control over the elements of effective writing (intro, body, conclusion[wraps up nicely], orderly)
Have fun and Good luck.
♥ Lullaby
Anyways back on track. I would like you to take a fairy tale and "corrupt" it. Obviously enough. But it must be accurate to the fairy tale you use.
Here are some fairy tales. You don't have to use the ones I have here, but it must be a fairy tale.
Snow White
Thumbelina
Beauty and the Beast
Little Bo Peep
Repunzle
Rumplestiltskin
The Princess and the Pea
Sleeping Beauty
Cinderella
Peter Pan
The Little Mermaid
Alice in Wonderland
The Three Little Pigs
Goldilocks
etc.
Rules:
~Use any person (1st, 2nd, 3rd)
~Spell check (will hurt you for placing)
~I'd like stories more than poems.
~No longer than 5 pages on Word please.
~NoNe Of ThIs ShIt!!
~Swearing and Erotica allowed (Just don't over do it)
~I may close it when I get more enteries than I can handle.
~Sorry, only allowing fresh writes.
How They Will Be Judged:
According to:
-Vocabulary
-Spelling
-Length
-Grammar
-If it stays on topic
-Express topic with clarity and skill
-Provides convincing interpretation of a specific major issue
-illustrates consistant control over the elements of effective writing (intro, body, conclusion[wraps up nicely], orderly)
Have fun and Good luck.
♥ Lullaby
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 4, 2006
- Rewards: Gold: 339
- Final notes: Well, to the winners congrats. Such wonderful stories and poems.
Entries [8]
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“You did not really think we would allow you to attend a royal function did you?”• Commented on by judge.
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Hi, I am Rapunzel. The little sister to the princess mention in the princess and the pea. Just so you know for starters, the writers got the prince and princess• Commented on by judge.
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Most of it is slander,
The rest couldn’t of been blander.by blatant honesty 35 lines, 5 comments, on May 18 12:47 PM 2006. In Humor• Commented on by judge. -
Well here it is folks, the story of a prince, and the young whore who caught his fancy... and eventually the run in the two had with a rather famous pea.• Commented on by judge.
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"Run" she hissed, up close in his face. "Run far, far away" He could feel her breath: it was warm and moist and had a lingering smell of garlic. He gulped loudl• Commented on by judge.
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It is very clear to me that the Darling family, who is not exactly darling, if you know what I mean, is definitely not very functional• Commented on by judge.
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Snow white never had a chance,
the Queen took care of that.by Freaky Darling 43 lines, 4 comments, on May 25 4:03 PM 2006. In Fantasy• Commented on by judge. -
Drinking blood knowing that it could never fill
The craving that my unmoving heart knows wont sit still .by BrokenWings...Fly 26 lines, 12 comments, on May 27 11:42 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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This seems fun.
I'll try to come up with something.
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Hi swetie, Ill see whatI can come up with luv
mom
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I'm so very tempted to enter this, with erotic and Alice and Wonderland available for comining...well let's just no go there, my mind may kill someone. ^.^;
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Lol... but that would bring more amusement to my life. ^_^
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Oh ther's no dout of that XD...but the question is, how far into randomness are you will to fall to be scarred and confused?
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Hmmm.... extremely?
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This is frickkin awsome idae for a contest! I couldn't come up with anything but man I wish I could. That would be so funny!
If I did it would be Rumplestiltskin or Thumbelina. Rumplestiltskin was my favorite story as a child... I don't know why. ?? Oh well. But anyways, have fun with this! I know it'll be great!
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I'm really excited to enter this contest. I'm actually in the midst of writing my corrupted fairytale, and I don't think I've ever had so much fun in my life. Thanks for giving me such a terrific idea!! =D
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One can never overdo erotic m'dear smirks
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Oh Dear... do I want to read your entry? jk. I promise to read all entries.
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lol, dun worry m'dear, I've managed to keep all but mentions of sex and such out of it...it's tame considering what I usually write...though it all sucks due to its lacking in...flavor.
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I wouldn't mind a little flavor. I'm allowing erotica I believe... and I've written some pretty UNTAME sex fantasies.
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Pity, no pre writes and here I was already rewriting Snow White and Beauty and the Beast.
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hmmmmm.... thinking i may come up with something here... yay! i love this kinda stuff... yup.. this will be fun...
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I have a pre-write for this lol check out my Alice In StaightJacket poem its awesome
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Good luck to those who entered! I was in the middle of writing my story, but high school tends to get in the way of the more important things in life. But this was a terrific idea, I can't wait to see the winners!
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I'll open it for a couple more hours if you want to get your in. I don't mind, I still have a long way to go for judging them.
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That would be TERRIFIC if you were willing to actually open it again. Let me know (either reply or IM) when you'll reopen so I can make sure I get to post it. Thank you so much, I'm very excited to share my story. =)
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Thats Sad I've got many corrupt fairtales in prewrites ...like my "Bedtime Stories for the Truely Demented" series
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Thank you very much for the gold and congrats to the other winners. Thanks for the points and for hosting such a fun contest!
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