Hey my freaky friends...I know y'all have a bunch of dark crap...
But I really want to see the mushey side of y'all.This is my first contest so I want it to be good!
I will try to coment on all entries...
Good Luck To All!
Okay...here are the rules:
1 no erotica! none of that crap!
2 no sticky caps...It takes me forever to read and I have neither the time nor energy.
3 make me cry...I wanna feel what you feel...k?
okay...here's the deal you can submit pre-writes ONLY if I okay them first!
have fun darlings!
But I really want to see the mushey side of y'all.This is my first contest so I want it to be good!
I will try to coment on all entries...
Good Luck To All!
Okay...here are the rules:
1 no erotica! none of that crap!
2 no sticky caps...It takes me forever to read and I have neither the time nor energy.
3 make me cry...I wanna feel what you feel...k?
okay...here's the deal you can submit pre-writes ONLY if I okay them first!
have fun darlings!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 7, 2006
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: This was honestly the hardest contest to judge!
All these things came from your heart and I wish I could give you all points!This contest took me hours to judge and it was so hard to narrow it down!
You are all winners in my eyes and thank you so much for entering!Entries [31]
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The Greatest Christmas Present
I shall wrap for you a box full of loveby thegoldenpen 35 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 27 5:25 PM 2001. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Darling...
As we, hand in hand embark together on love's journey...by thegoldenpen 35 lines, on Oct 28 12:06 PM 2001. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
rays of light pour from each strand
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you feel as cold, tonight
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Your lips so soft
Your voice so sweet• Commented on by judge. -
Don't remeber your smile
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my words for you possess a home in the twilight
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And I too sit still in silence waiting.
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You can try
until you dieby lovin-casey 28 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 8 9:35 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
You set my soul on fire,
it takes me so much higher,by slipknot babe 19 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 27 12:37 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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You can't have rain
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And they lay there in the grass
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It's just another
empty dresser drawerby RyanLong 14 lines, 3 comments, on May 1 5:34 AM 2006. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. -
A rejection of who I become
The inner me I kept beyond.....by crisofcross 31 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 9:28 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
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Clock Strikes Midnight on a Foggy Paris Night.
The Lights Never Looked So Beautiful.by Were Not Special 8 lines, 1 comment, on May 2 8:57 PM 2006. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
No more tears, no more pain
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You say you might not come back
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we wrote this together for eachother:)by Mistaken6Identity 29 lines, 1 comment, on May 6 5:44 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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For your beauty stuns,
And makes mere men lose their breath,by The Dashing Atheist 18 lines, 11 comments, on May 6 5:57 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Time to kill while you¢®¯re on pills
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It saddened her to watch him part,
So very hard to watch him leave.by thegoldenpen 72 lines, 3 comments, on May 6 11:34 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
your heart pounds around them
it is hard for you to breathby The Angels Revenge 23 lines, 3 comments, on May 6 12:58 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
by Illuminati-x 19 lines, 2 comments, on May 6 8:18 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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hello, i would please like to submit a prewrite please, a poem a wrote called "moment in time". is that ok?
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yay thank you -x-x-x-
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I hope you will ok my prewrite "forever" good luck judging!!
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i hope u like my poem "i love you"
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I would like to enter this poem... allpoetry.com/Poem/1982388
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I would like to enter my prewrite "Mommy's Little Girl". Is that okay?
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I have 2 pre writes I would like to enter they are " Words we Never Spoke and A Love so True" so let me know if they will be ok or not! Thank you !!!!!!
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Wow! You have a lot of entries here! I am sorry to have added one to the load, but it was ready to come out into words and you helped inspire it to become better. There are many competitors that are all fantastic writers and I wish the best of luck to all of them. Thanks for encouraging our writes to be publicized on AP. Some people are shy with that, and we are now being urged to come out of our shells and show the world what we have.
Thanks for hosting the contest and all!
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HEY! i have a prewrite that i may wanna submit into this contest....i dont know how you wanna do this but ill just say its name is Snowy Rendezvous and it is on my authors profile obviously but yea i hope you like it......-evan
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I submitted 'I'll Be There' by accident, without okay-ing it with you first. I hope you will allow me to keep it in.
Yours,
Kain
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I would like to submit my poem called
A Letter To You.
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ok well I entered my poem as it was written after this contest started and I thought it would be perfect if it is not ok then deleat it if you must
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Good Guidlines
I wrote a poem it is called happy again, just thought you might like it for this contest if not okay if you need to go through it go ahead! -
Thank You All
Hey thanks for the compliment! this is my first contest and I have a ton of entries! I was really hoping for that and got it! So thank you to everyone for taking part!
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ohmygod! i forgot to ask if you'd ok my prewrites, or one of them. if it's too late, i understand. but if not, will you? mine are "smoke", "98.6..." and "filled with light".
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there were 69 entries in this contest so it eas incredibly hard!
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Beautiful contest!!!!!
Alanna, I want to thank you for hosting this beautiful contest.
I almost forgot about my piece I had started and when I saw this contest it inspired me to finish it. You had so many entries to choose from and I'm sure it was very hard to make a decision. Kudos to you for the hard work you accomplished. It was a joy to enter this. My heartiest congratulations go out to the winners and all who participated in this wonderful contest that was filled with so many happy feelings. I think all that entered should take a bow for their hard work and efforts. Love and blessings to everyone, today and always.
Joyce
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