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i'm in pain and dire need of poems

ok guys i'm really really really sad right now
so sad infact that i cant even cry

my boyfriend of 6 months just broke up with me, i went through hell and back just to be with him and now he's throwing it all away over his comittment issues....

i know most of you will say.. or think.. that he wasnt worth my time or tears and in some ways its true but i loved him... lots he made me so happy and now i feel lost, scared, alone, sad and hurt...

i am also having troubles at home, my dad has a short fuse, my stepmum and i are worse than two... animals.. bunnying at eachother constantly.. well its better now but you know how they are...


i want poems about anything that involves love, not happy love or anything, something dark and that will help me crack so i can cry and be done with it

please, if you want to win, reaserch my work, my latest poems, my favourite is Why?? posted a few days ago,


another type  i would love to see is an erotic but not.. poem if that makes any sense.. look at my poem My only for an idea of what i mean

i am really looking for something to relate to weather it be about family or love , just research and do me an honour

i'm not doing too good on points so if anyone would applaud my work or donate points, i can give more out

1st place. 300 pts and a shiny new gold trophy
2nd. see how i'm going on points and a slightly old silver trophy
3rd. as above, and a stingy old rusty bronze trophy

lol

only a few rules,

no sticky caps they sh** me off big time
grrr

umm no more that 4 entries pp if you have 5 good ones im me and i'll see what i can do

i am allowing prewrites but if youre gonna relate to me i want ones TO me


thats about it, hmmm
have fun and thanks in advance



PEOPLE PLEASE, DONT SUBMIT POEMS THAT ARE HAPPY, I AM NOT LOOKING FOR HAPPY POEMS, ALSO

MAKE THE FONT READABLE ON THE BACKGROUND YOU HAVE UP, I HAVE NOW IMD 3 PEOPLE TELLING THEM TO MAKE THEIR POEMS READABLE... WELL DONE TO EVERYONE FOLLOWING THE RULES



SORRY EVERYONE IM HAVING A TOUGH TIME TRYING TO FIND A COMPUTER FOR LONG ENOUGH TO JUDGE THE ENTRIES, IM EXTENDING IT AGAIN, SO SORRY BUT I LOVE THE WORK IVE READ THANKS FOR THE CO OPERATION XOXO

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 25, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    ok guys im so sorry it took so long, i have been running around like a headless chicken trying to juggle everything all around at once, i am feeling a little better now and i am so glad that i have all of your support and love.. as you can see i had like a million entries, i loved them all, i may have not commented on all of them but rest assured i read them all and loved them, thankyou all for your kind words and support..

    1st place went to camlek with the poem blissfully aware, i still cry when i read this, its perfect i love it so much thankyou.

    2nd was hearts cries by lonely-5590
    great expression of feelings in that piece,

    3rd went to heart, by heart and soul, this was so sad but the imagery is immaculant

    i was going to give second place to the poem cutting deep by the harper 08 but i couldnt find it in the list or at all in the contest, so thanks anyway i will be giving 50 points to that poet,

    thanks to anyone who donated points and applauded my work,
    and sorry it took so long
    you are all fantastic keep writing
    xoxo

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  • silverstein
    February 6, 2006
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    I put in 2 i hope u dont mind not sure if its what u wanted but if not just im me on here and u know my aim sn and take them out.


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    February 6, 2006
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    wow guys there are so many great entries, i love them all, i hope to see a few more, just for shows sake, you can enter as many as you want now i guess, just make them good
    thanks to all who have entered so far
    xoxo


  • eloquence
    February 6, 2006
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    awww im so sorry babe about what happened!!
    no boy is ever worth the tears!!
    i love you babe! ♥ ♥ ♥


  • heart and soul
    February 6, 2006
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    WOW this is probably the coolest contest, not the part about your ex and you, or your parents, I'm sorry about that and I know it may not mean much or anything, but I hope it all works out in the end.
    What I ment by coolest contes is, no one I have seen always four enteries, that pretty darn sweet of you!!
    Hope all works out for the best keep writing!
    Liv


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    February 6, 2006
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    they are great sweetie its what i;m lookin 4 thanks for all your support


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    February 6, 2006
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    its ok, well its not but ya get that, hows things with you


  • heart and soul
    February 7, 2006
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    OK I fixed both the coloring problems to lighter colors. Glade you like Heart.
    Good luck with the contest.


  • The Burning Year
    February 11, 2006
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    the 2 poems I entered go together..."A Goodbye In The Hallway" is part1..and "A Whisper In The Driveway" is part 2 of course..lol thanks for such a great contest


  • Walking In pAiN
    February 21, 2006
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    my poems consist of mostly about men and the love/hate that went in between..but don't worry..nothing happends in a happy way. Also the "look" poem is about my family and how we use to love each other, but then suddenly turned in to hate. if not of my poems go with your contest, plz let me know and i'll remove them. Thank you and good luck with your contest.

    Ashley


  • incapable
    February 22, 2006
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    I'm sorry that you've split up with your boyfriend... I've just split with mine too and I know exactly how you feel, I was with him nearly four months... and although it probably was for the best, it's still hard and I didn't want it to happen, and although guys aren't worth the tears, we still cry them. I hope your feeling better soon and that a lovely guy comes along and sweeps you off your feet oh and I've submitted a poem about my break-up, though I don't think its a good one, I thought I'd share my feelings too. Love from mee xxxxxx


  • isolated sorrow
    February 22, 2006
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    you know nothing of sorrow...............
    be glad
    Edited on Feb 22, 1:45 p.m. because ''.


  • DancingQueenAngi
    February 22, 2006
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    I can totally relate to the boyfriend thing. My situation was a couple months ago, but my best friend of 5 years, we were dating for the second time(he dumped me for commitment last time) it was going great. he was finally telling me how he could actually see us being together forever then three days later he just dumped me. He said he wasn't ready for commitment if you knew the whole story you would know our relationship wasn't serious at all. All the poems I entered were about that break up so I hope you can relate and I hope that they help you get through this. good luck!!
    angi

  • FrenchKiss
    February 22, 2006
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    Great idea for a contest. You have like a million entries. I hope this contest helps you out. Good luck on judging these poems.
    Ray


  • KnightRhymer
    February 22, 2006
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    Excellent

    I do wish I could help you shed the tears you need to do so and I have so many poems, but alas, there are so many here already. I do hope you find the peace and clossure you seek. Excellent contest and if you wish for points let me know. I am doing nothing with mine.


  • Always Deena
    February 25, 2006
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    Congrats to all the winners and I am glad your feeling better. Thanks for hosting!

    Deena


  • heart and soul
    February 26, 2006
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    Thank you thank you thank you!!


  • Camlek
    February 27, 2006
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    Thanks so much for giving my the gold! Well done to everyone who participated! Thanks again! xxx

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