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I want DEEP

I want something so DEEP that it hurts your insides....I want emotion and drama ...... Think of something that is hurting you so bad you think your dying...


WOW I didnt know that some many would be interested,... Its gonna take me a while

Rules:
1. They're kinda basic
2.USE lots of IMAGERY
3.Be Creative

I want this to be the best piece of dark writing.....

I wish you of you GOOD LUCK!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 30, 2006
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thanks for all of you that entered my contest .... I wish everyone could of won.... But I hope you all liked this contest I was PROUD of all your for trying....

Entries [16]

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  • In the snow of Winter’s Dress.
    Dare you stain her hems with your red water?
    by L. J. Arien 34 lines, 32 comments, on Aug 17 4:11 PM 2004. In Nature, Dark
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • ~release me from this labyrinth it is choking leaving its stain~
    by Mystical-Gardenia 91 lines, 109 comments, on Mar 12 9:28 AM 2005. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Shall I say I am in hiding…?
    No longer overwhelmed by me…
    by pratapvs 60 lines, on May 28 3:37 PM 2005. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I stand alone, in winter’s chill grey,
    and look on a stone, if engraved it would say:
    by Jason Logan 36 lines, 39 comments, on Sep 6 4:54 AM 2005. In Sad, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • On the road of life,
    You’ve to walk to the end…
    by Championswimmer 15 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 27 8:44 AM 2005. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Decaying souls
    rain down from
    by Your-not-my-friend 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 8:59 PM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Fear is lurking at my door,
    as worry turns it's head.
    by chekeeapt5 57 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 19 7:16 AM 2006. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • i think i ought to die
    not just sit here & cry
    by cutypie-sukriti 24 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 22 10:53 AM 2006. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Life for me is too much to bear
    It always seems so unfair
    by Angel In Darkness 30 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 23 9:00 PM 2006. In Sad, Spiritual, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I reached out, to grab a hand
    and all i got was air
    by cryzndiez 12 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 24 7:45 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • i brought the razor to my wrist
    looking out of eyes full of mist
    by lostinadream769 71 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 24 11:59 PM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Like the seasons friends will come and go.
    The heart is strong and yet it is very vulnerable.
    by TransLussion 57 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 25 12:09 AM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A cylindrical tear falls from my eye pausing in the moment of the night to glisten as it falls in its graceful beauty sliding through the darkness whereit hits
    by happyclowndeath 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 25 12:54 AM 2006. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The rain outside is falling,
    the vioce in me keeps calling,
    by nulphyou2 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 25 1:34 AM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Turning eyes
    Towards wayward demise
    by dead poet83 56 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 25 1:54 AM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The end of life
    Is filled with strife
    by Angel In Darkness 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 26 9:43 PM 2006. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Closet Poet
    January 24, 2006
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    i would..but i cant. i'm crap at imagery...need to learn it...to use it...


  • KnightRhymer
    January 25, 2006
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    Great

    OK I will give it my best shot. Sort of what I am going through now, but here it goes. lol Great contest.
    Edited on Jan 25, 9:34 because ''.


  • prettylikedrugs
    January 25, 2006
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    Cool idea for a contest hows you anyway?
    Nim x

  • Phobophobia
    January 25, 2006
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    contrary to popular demand, i'm not posting any garbage about cutting or suicide.


  • Death From Above
    January 25, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment on my poem!


  • isolated sorrow
    January 26, 2006
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    read did you know
    i wrote it ^_^

  • Phobophobia
    January 28, 2006
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    thank for commenting and applauding, twice even, on nightmares made flesh.

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