Have you been hurt or betrayed beyond beliefe,,, Well I have and now im upset and I hate for anyone to have any betrayel built up inside... So let it go!! Release it into a poem... Pretty much anything go's!
It can be erotic, dirty, dissturbing, revengeful because of the betrayel, Dark, sad, funny, evil, loving, whatever! It dosnt matter...
CUSSSING ALLOWED NO RESTRICTONS...
Commenting on some of my work.. (not just the first poem either so u get it done quick and easy.. somthing that u think u can relate to or whatever) WILL EARN YOU BIG BROWNIE POINTS....
Got a really good one already written... ok submitt it but only one.. u r alowed UNLIMETED entries but... ONLY ONE PREWRITE!!
Thank you..
<3 Summer
It can be erotic, dirty, dissturbing, revengeful because of the betrayel, Dark, sad, funny, evil, loving, whatever! It dosnt matter...
CUSSSING ALLOWED NO RESTRICTONS...
Commenting on some of my work.. (not just the first poem either so u get it done quick and easy.. somthing that u think u can relate to or whatever) WILL EARN YOU BIG BROWNIE POINTS....
Got a really good one already written... ok submitt it but only one.. u r alowed UNLIMETED entries but... ONLY ONE PREWRITE!!
Thank you..
<3 Summer
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 9, 2006
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Honerable mention to carryingon4u becuz her was amazing i need another trophy... and to all the rest fantastic job!! You all did really well and thank you so much for entering.. I dont know if i can do contests no more choosing WAS SO HARD!
Entries [7]
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dark hollows
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Yelling love can be free
only in your sweetest fantasyby angelmirage 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 18 8:53 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
My chess board had a king and queen
That sat high upon their thronesby dark oblivion 97 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 7 1:55 AM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I am sitting here,
Because I can't bring myself to cry,• Commented on by judge. -
This is the betrayal of suicide.• Commented on by judge.
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You taught me the way to learn to hate you
And I learned it very quickly after that stunt you pulledby dark oblivion 34 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 8 1:21 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Sounds like an interesting contest here, I may or may not get to respond to many of your poems right now, but when I get the chance I will..good luck here and have a blessed day.
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OH YES! This is something I am going through right now, though its not the same as yours, I can definitely relate to how you are feeling right now. I didn't have a chance to explain over the phone (Damn! I forgot to call you! Opps... I guess I won't be borrowing that movie tonight
) but I will definitely be entering this
BTW... I hope that the "situation" gets better. Even though things may never be the same between the two of you again, I know how much she meant in your life, and losing someone that you thought was your best friend is at the very least devastating... I know for its happened to me before, more than once... and I almost lost you at one point in time (Thank goodness we got through that )
Anyways, Don't worry, you have me and since work is slow for the next couple of months, you are stuck with me bothering you
I love you Babe!
Will enter soon
Sara
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Well done to everyone and a big thanks to our host for a great contest.
shaz xx
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