As some may know, I have somewhat of an obsession with emotion. I believe it's the emotion within a poem that really gives it that edge. This is my first contest and I look forward to reading your poetry. So, now onto the rules
-I know most of you, since it's a contest about emotions, will write a sad he broke up with me poem. I want originality here. I want you to have me laughing at the end, happy, sad, even hungry if you would like to go that route. I want this to be a challenge of your words and your topic.
-I don't want any swearing or any poems about cutting and/or suicide. It's the holidays and I don't want to be dealing with poems like that during the holidays.
Other then that, I allow anything else you wish to write about, I suggest maybe going through and reading others poems in the contest to get an idea of what you're up against.
I will give 300 points to first, 2nd and third will be handeled when judged. I do have some financial help, so you can expect some kind of an award for these places. I will try to round up some more points for honors, but I have no promises there.
I know the ability and the talent that has come from this site, and I know I will find it here. Good luck to everyone.
-I know most of you, since it's a contest about emotions, will write a sad he broke up with me poem. I want originality here. I want you to have me laughing at the end, happy, sad, even hungry if you would like to go that route. I want this to be a challenge of your words and your topic.
-I don't want any swearing or any poems about cutting and/or suicide. It's the holidays and I don't want to be dealing with poems like that during the holidays.
Other then that, I allow anything else you wish to write about, I suggest maybe going through and reading others poems in the contest to get an idea of what you're up against.
I will give 300 points to first, 2nd and third will be handeled when judged. I do have some financial help, so you can expect some kind of an award for these places. I will try to round up some more points for honors, but I have no promises there.
I know the ability and the talent that has come from this site, and I know I will find it here. Good luck to everyone.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 31, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Contgrats to the winners, they all did a great job and deserve the win. Now onto the Honorable Mentions. I had such a hard time choosing between them all. This is definitly a hard thing for anyone to do. Here they are:
1. The first time in forever by horus8
2. Dark Desire by Maureen
3.A Craving for something by Definite Freak (definitly a great pick)
4.Do you deserve a title? by Julie-x-
5. Adam My Son by getsbetter
6. I would have sued by Celtic Moon
7. Someday by DenyMyLove
8. Natural Election by Dfind
9. 360 degree view by Dfind (Both were wonderfully written, I couldnt decide!)
10.Progression by Dfind? how many did you submit? I didnt even realize until I went through here. Great work!!!
11. The angels grace the sky? by ToLiveBeforeDie
12. Anger by xxspeechlessxx
13. Love is complicated by crosskid
14. Dear santa (daddy) by luvmybabys
15. When the rooster laid eggs by ed1atime
Yes, it's alot, but Everyone deserves a round of applause. The HM's deserve the attention and some deserve points. As a new years gift, I will find some way to randomly select some of the HM's and give them a little extra something...
Again, thank you all for the entries and I wish you all a happy new year.Entries [28]
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like the many silks
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just the thought of it
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We walked along the beach,
my lady friend and I,• Commented on by judge. -
Rays of pleasure spark her eyes
from secret spheres of skies,by EgyptianEyez 45 lines, 39 comments, on Jul 30 10:55 PM 2004. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
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by lifeofapoet 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 24 7:47 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Daddy is that what you wanted?
To be a father to your children?• Commented on by judge. -
i think the time is coming,
the time to seek revenge,by ToLiveBeforeDie 30 lines, on Oct 24 4:27 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Anxiety lasting throughout the day
Shivering when it was hot,• Commented on by judge. -
Not my cup of tea
Yummy chunky supper please• Commented on by judge. -
your “screw you I have power” short hair teasing all above your “I have fashion but don’t care”• Commented on by judge.
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I wake up,
I find myself lying down in the hospital,• Commented on by judge. -
Or how ‘bout a Tibetan Buddhist monk?
I’d shave my head and see my hair in a hunk• Commented on by judge. -
DO YOU THINK IT WILL EVER BE THE SAME?
DO YOU KNOW WHATS ITS LIKE TO BE ME?by ToLiveBeforeDie 22 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 9 3:32 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Lately I have been wondering
How come these days seem so long?• Commented on by judge. -
Crack there it goes again. Every time I hear his name from your mouth.
Crack every time I see you happy without me next to you.• Commented on by judge. -
The first one you think is true
the one you give it all to• Commented on by judge. -
Dearly beloved are you listening to me
I can't remember those words that we were saying• Commented on by judge. -
Shouting at empty walls,
Reaching blindly for a hope I will never find,• Commented on by judge. -
Like spying upon Medusa would turn you,
as your heart already is…to stone.• Commented on by judge. -
You can even place my picture in its twinkly frame
But the reality is you need to hang your head with shame.by Smirnoff Ice 18 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 29 3:40 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
Lets not worry about the other side of this story.
Baby, I can't stand to worry all about all of those other people.• Commented on by judge. -
A young innocent child,
Left feeling cold,alone, and ashamed.• Commented on by judge. -
Walking down the road,
Shivering inside.by Psycho Dancer --- 23 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 30 10:03 AM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
We all have arguments in our heads... This just went too far.by Uselessemotions 63 lines, on Dec 30 1:17 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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Hi there
this sounds like a wonderful challenge... however, you say you're going to divide the points as 150 for gold, 100 for silver and 50 for bronze... unfortunately that doesn't go
the minimum amount of point you need for a contest is 300, but that's the amount of points that goes straight to the winner... second and third can get point via the
tab...
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I realize my mistake, This is my first contest and I didnt realize that, but thank you for pointing that out to me, It will be fixed.
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Hi there Takayuki. this sounds wonderful, I love the way you presented it and good idea with dis-couraging sadder poems. good luck with the contest and have a great new year!!
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Sounds like fun, thanks for hosting.
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this sure seems like its gonna be a toughy to judge!! i mean, look at all the entries!! i might just have to submit something.... hmm...
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Hehe, I've got a good one for you. I think it will have the desired effect on you by the end of it...
I'll maybe write a new one as well. Have fun judging!
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Thank you for the honorable mention, Takayuki!
Happy New Year!
♥ Maureen
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