Help me fix this. Submit your best stuff. Doesn't matter the subject, preferably no really dark stuff because I don't want to feel that way, but if you think a dark write is your best, by all means, submit it. I'll read it, I judge, you know the rest.
Rules:
1) I'm talking about best as in actual best, not really meaningless shallow poetry. I want to read something that makes me feel. So rule number one? Be meaningful.
2) No more than two prewrites per person. If I see that you have submitted more than two prewrites, I'll delete the excess ones, and you won't be able to choose which ones to keep (and they may not be your best ones). Any number of new poems are allowed, but I don't want more than 2 prewrites.
3) For every prewrite, you must comment on one of my poems. If you have submitted a new poem, then you don't have to. But you *must* comment one poem of mine for each prewrite you submit. In your author box, write which poem you commented on (or tell me in the comments of this contest).
That's it. Have fun. Be creative. Inspire me!
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PRIZES:
1st place: 450 points and two applauds/detailed comments
2nd place: 200 points and one applaud/detailed comment
3rd place: 100 points and one detailed comment
NOTE: Yea, I know it's taking a few days for this to be judged, I'm trying to go through and read every piece and comment on it..and I can't do that all in a row or I'll just skim poems..hehe..so yea..It should be finished in about a day or two because I'm almost done.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 7, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 450
- Final notes: I loved all of these poems and it was very hard to choose a winner. I'm thankful to everyone who entered, I got the inspiration I needed and that means a lot to me. Thanks for entering everyone, and I'm sorry I couldn't let everyone win!
Entries [21]
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no one asks to be born
and this is what it probably is all aboutby gwynethshugart 40 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 20 1:07 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
~Tis' the millennium anointed knights brave frontiers
Battle garments O' denim, faded shades O' blue~by Mystical-Gardenia 32 lines, 39 comments, on Mar 4 11:17 AM 2005. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. -
Forgive my behavior, if need be,
But I seemed to have lost my destiny.by AlaskaMoleman 27 lines, on Apr 15 9:10 AM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
The darkest of souls
Trapped up for ever• Commented on by judge. -
I was having the time of my life until my friend Maddi, told me that James, a guy I used to like, liked me too. The trouble was that I had moved on, so it was rby broken beauty 14 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 10 9:16 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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uses analogies relating to a picture collage to express a feeling of pity when he remains unnoticed - yet still hopeful - by a girlby sunset delicate 30 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 15 6:29 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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about a Jew being discriminated against and killed by an ally while fighting in the army against Nazi Germany. wishes people will learn from this, no one doesby sunset delicate 50 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 15 6:32 PM 2005. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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i slit my rists on the broken shardes of humanity. my breath threatens the very life within.every thing i do seems like a mistake . my blood bleeds screams screby CrimsonYouth 19 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 15 9:16 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Wanting is not needing.
My soul crying for so much more.by my broken kiss 7 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 16 5:15 PM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
I want to write again,
But where do I begin?• Commented on by judge. -
Ill eternally sleep
there's no need to weep• Commented on by judge. -
He left a hole in my heart,
a puncture wound in my soul...by hothunnybunz 27 lines, on Nov 21 2:27 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Angels watching over you
When you’re happy or when you’re blue• Commented on by judge. -
by MountainGirl 37 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 24 1:38 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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I feel like i'm walking in circles
I fell like there's no way out.by Killed for love 46 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 28 9:23 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
i wanted to write something different, it can be about whatever you want it to be.• Commented on by judge.
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Whenever you feel alone
or cold like a frozen stone• Commented on by judge. -
I'm stuck with a choice to make
Between my heart and my mindby Killed for love 35 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 30 9:31 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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The rules say that prewrites are allowed. But in fact.. prewrites are not allowed. Can you fix it? Cheers!
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umm....in the top it said that you can enter prewrites but theres no where to enter them. um... so yeah and i wanted to enter a prewrite....but hey...what can i do...
Love Renee xox -
hey, i commented on 'testing testing 1 2 3' and 'secret'
very nice work, easy to relate to. good luck getting back into your groove -
I think that the best way to fix the prewrite problem is to go to the contest, click on edit. I think that you may have actually hit no prewrites,on accident. I have one that I would love to enter.. Will be reading your work shortly
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I commented on "they". I will be reading more, regardlss of entering the contest. I like your style
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I commented on testing, testing, 1 2 3. To be honest, at first I was just reading it because we had to comment on one, but once I read it I couldn't help but to applaud it. Trust me when I say that I can relate. I hope you find your inspiration.
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I entered " curl " into your contest. Goodluck to
all the contestants.
And now I'm off to check out
some poetry on your end of things. I'll put which poem I
commented on in my authors comments.
- James
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I entered 'Thank You' into your contest...and I commented on "the Last one"....I like it..
I wrote thank you for a friend...And have been told it's one of my best...So yeah.. -
cool contest
looks like u'll get a LOT of entries x x xhave fun judging
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Thank you Midnight Fairy for THANK YOU. I loved the honesty in your poem. I never considered myself a great poem, I don't know..., I just scribble away when I can or when I feel like it about whatever I feel at that time... It helps. And so many negative things have happened to me over time that in the end most of my poems showed more and more of that. Sometimes dreams just turned into nightmares... but I hope from my heart that all will get better for you soon... Gwyneth
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I commented on "Midnight".
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I read and commented on 'Thank You'
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Commented on "Mad World" and "The Rain"
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I also commented on 'You'
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I commented on "Ice Temple" and "I need You Gone"..
I like the idea for your contest...
Good luck judging..You've seemed to accumulate a lot of poems
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i commented on electrically alive.
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I commented on electically alive as well. I can't help it, the title drew me in!
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I commented on "Thank You"
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wow thanks.i hope i inspire you.
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comment on "electrically alive" and "vortex of reality"
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Dance,Dance,Dance!
I read your poem (I Need You Gone) and I liked it alot. I plan on entering your contest to inspire you!
"All you have to do is write one true sentence, the truist sentence you know.....and go on from there." {E. Hemmingway} -
I commented on you brought it out, it is really good by the way, please read the comment, I meant every word of it.
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i commented on Ice Temple it was a raly neat pice
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I commented on Thank You
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mine: "You Brought It Out"
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I commented on Repetition. I could really Identify with that poem.
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I commented on "Electrically Alive". I love it!!! It's sooo creative!
It caught my eye and I could'nt rresist reading it and I loved it!!
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Good luck with judging the contest. I have commented on 'Ice Temple' - I adore your style of poetry as well.
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i was a close four though im sure
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hear
hes somthang i wrote it sucks but it may help
i love her with all my heart her breth as we make love her mones and the felling of her body to mine love is like a tree it can grow big and beautyfull but love can die as well wen true love dies bothe the lovers have made a mistake but if true love servives you two will live in eternal love live can do any thang all you have to do is leed it




















