I want a poem about one of three things
1) a poem about how you would percieve your suicide to be
2) a poem about someone you love's suicide
3) a poem about the suicide of 2 lovers
these do not have to be true
I don't really care about the style just as long as I can feel the emotion behind the poem
good luck
1) a poem about how you would percieve your suicide to be
2) a poem about someone you love's suicide
3) a poem about the suicide of 2 lovers
these do not have to be true
I don't really care about the style just as long as I can feel the emotion behind the poem
good luck
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 30, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: this was an amazing contest...damn near impossible to judge sorry it took me so long to judge it, I was up skiing in canada good job to everyone and I'll have another contest up when I have enough points so keep checking in
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One tear rolls softly down your cheek
I gently brush it aside• Commented on by judge. -
Leaning against a tree
Tall and lankyby PerfectStranger 66 lines, 22 comments, on Oct 28 6:15 PM 2004. In Love, Dark, Angst
Gold trophy winner
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Now I lay me down to die
I pray the Lord no one will cry• Commented on by judge. -
He lay there, motionless, and her tears began to run
She lays her head on his chest• Commented on by judge. -
why did you leave me?
you left me alone that day...• Commented on by judge. -
If you will die for me
I will die for you• Commented on by judge. -
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by themaddhatter 56 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 7:11 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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You dead, and I'm so sorry.
This is only because, I love you.• Commented on by judge. -
she loved him so much
she never wanted to lose him• Commented on by judge. -
Poem about two lovers who kill themselves with poison. With the image of both of them in eachother's arms forever.• Commented on by judge.
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Ripples from unseen waves
Sorrow penetrating• Commented on by judge. -
In a dream, I make a cut,
with a silver dagger, razor sharp.by Lunesphera 20 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 15 12:42 PM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
here you are
lying in my arms• Commented on by judge. -
I'm not crazy, I *swear*. If I were I wouldn't have killed myself, would I? It was the voices! SHUT UP! I can't hear you, I repeat to myself. I hear you , I hea• Commented on by judge.
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His heart is carved into his arm
Inhopes that she can seeby SicTransitVictoria 27 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 23 6:14 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
A single cry in a corner
But not a soul hears it,by Forlorn Sorrows 18 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 23 6:49 PM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
A single cry-a shot rang out
suicide attempt prevailed• Commented on by judge. -
by KelliClaire 70 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 24 2:38 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
Silver trophy winner
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what about a Suicide Note poem???
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Prewrites?
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yeah
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I have a poem about two best friends and a suicide.
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The poem I entered, A Dead Man's Death, is a true story about a childhood friend named Joey who was very dear to me and commited suicide, leaving me all the blame. I just wanted to make it clear that I never write about made up things, so I guess im just kind of odd to make sure everyone knows that but hey thats just me
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