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Make me feel happy

Alright guys, here is the story. My boyfriend, who I love greatly, is in the Army and is currently in Germany. I am feeling a little down about myself right now. So here's the deal, I want poetry about me. If you know me tell me what you think about me, if not tell me what you think I am like or how beautiful you think I am.

Tell me what you think or would think if you knew me. Or tell me what you would tell someone you think is beautiful.

*RULES*
1.) I have left the categories pretty much open. Just remember if you think it needs to be put under adult, put it there. I will allow adult poetry.

2.) No StIcKy CaPs  - you will automatically be disqualified

3.) If you have a poem that you believe will work here, IM me and I will check it out.

4.) I am a Grammar - nut. So please go back and check that.

5.) Enter as many times as you want.



*Author's comments*
  Thank you all in advance who enter this contest. I am having a hard time with my better half being so far away from me. I have no reason to think I am beautiful. So I hope you guys can lift my spirits enough to do just that. Also if you can't think of something because you don't know me personally. IM me and will tell you almost anything you want to know.





*OK here is the thing.*
You do not actually have to know me to enter this contest. You can write something that you would write for any one who is feeling down - in - the - dumps. If you don't know me personally write something you would write for any one. It is as simple as that.

*Alright*
I have decided to allow prewrites and I have put the contest off until the 25th. If you want to enter please do.

Sorry guys I just realized that I don't have time to judge the entries until I get back to school. So I have yet again had to push this contest back. Sorry again.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 4, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    This contest was so hard to judge. All of the poems were excellent. I want to thank you all for entering, and I am so sorry that it has taken me so long to judge the contest but I have been so busy. Any ways you guys really helped to make me feel better. Thank you so much.

Entries [7]

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  • Far from the distant land,
    dancing oceans and trudging band
    by draj 26 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 12:01 AM 2005. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I made it sounds a little confusing, but its hard to explain, but now you somewhat know how I feel towards those whom I love deeply...especially my ex in the mi
    by Sakana 39 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 5 12:21 AM 2005. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • “Break your love free
    Hug the next man on street
    by 59 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 3:03 AM 2005. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • And if you cared about yourself
    And no one else
    by queenmorganalefay 29 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 5 7:15 AM 2005. In Hope
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sara, oh Sara
    your new nickname is Vanna!!
    by amanda-the-emo 14 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 10 12:04 AM 2005. In Humor
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • When you're alone,
    Big brother is there.
    by BloodofaDeadRose 15 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 29 8:01 PM 2005. In Personal, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Should our hands not touch again
    No matter, our souls are one
    by Jinx 21 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 30 9:08 PM 2005. In Personal, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • thepoisonpen
    November 5, 2005
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    um..okayyyyyyy whatever
    im in germany


  • November 5, 2005
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    Which poem was your comment on?


  • NoWayJo
    November 7, 2005
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    since I don't know you, entering this contest without virtually any information would be impossible. however, I hope you get loads of friends and buddies who are able to participate.

    Jo


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 7, 2005
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    Hope you get plenty of entries. Judging will certainly keep you busy, so hope you get lots of great poems to read.


  • rosepoet
    November 7, 2005
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    Hey great idea i have a few poems but don't know if appropriate so i guess i will make one specially for u
    Edited on Nov 07, 9:29 because ''.


  • Candlelight Chaos
    November 7, 2005
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    I cannot enter this contest because i don't know you, sorry. Good luck though

  • Sakana
    November 8, 2005
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    You dont have to know her to enter the contest. The contest rules say it doesn't have to be about her, but it can be about ANYONE you know. I don't know Saramouch at all but I still entered the contest because I wrote about someone I know


  • ----michael----
    November 16, 2005
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    if you decide to allow prewrites let me know, I think my poem beautiful ugly would suit. thanks.x.

  • Saramouch
    November 16, 2005
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    Since I have like no response I will change it and allow prewrites. Thank you for your interest in this contest.


  • LoveItAlone
    November 30, 2005
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    what is grammer?????

  • Saramouch
    November 30, 2005
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    gram·mar
    n.

    The study of how words and their component parts combine to form sentences.
    The study of structural relationships in language or in a language, sometimes including pronunciation, meaning, and linguistic history.

    The system of inflections, syntax, and word formation of a language.
    The system of rules implicit in a language, viewed as a mechanism for generating all sentences possible in that language.

    A normative or prescriptive set of rules setting forth the current standard of usage for pedagogical or reference purposes.
    Writing or speech judged with regard to such a set of rules.
    A book containing the morphologic, syntactic, and semantic rules for a specific language.

    The basic principles of an area of knowledge: the grammar of music.
    A book dealing with such principles.

  • Saramouch
    November 30, 2005
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    AT least that is the dictionary definition. I did not know quite how to word it myself. Thank you for your entry.

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