OK babies, this is the deal. I am sick, like horribly, sick and I'm all alone and bored and sad, and did I mention, bored?
I want something interesting, I want details, imagery, description, I want something that will knock me off my feet and blow my mind! Come on my loves! Show me what magic you can weave!
Most interesting, descriptive poem wins first place!
1st place= 300 pts and a shiny golden trophy
2nd place= 50 pts and a less shiny Silver trophy
3rd place= 50 pts and a not so shiny bronze trophy
So come on m'loves wow me.
Only one prewrite per applicant, and as many new writes as you like.
Not a written law that you comment me or your fellow applicants, but still a nice thing to do.
Have fun!
By the way, I will comment on all poems when I judge the contest, if before the contest is over I havent commented your poem do not worry because I WILL COMMENT!
*** UPDATE ***
Because of all the entries that I am recieving I may decide to close the contest early, just a forwarning, still haven't decided. Let me know if you're working on something for the contest, otherwise I may decide to close a few days early. Thankyou.
I want something interesting, I want details, imagery, description, I want something that will knock me off my feet and blow my mind! Come on my loves! Show me what magic you can weave!
Most interesting, descriptive poem wins first place!
1st place= 300 pts and a shiny golden trophy
2nd place= 50 pts and a less shiny Silver trophy
3rd place= 50 pts and a not so shiny bronze trophy
So come on m'loves wow me.
Only one prewrite per applicant, and as many new writes as you like.
Not a written law that you comment me or your fellow applicants, but still a nice thing to do.
Have fun!
By the way, I will comment on all poems when I judge the contest, if before the contest is over I havent commented your poem do not worry because I WILL COMMENT!
*** UPDATE ***
Because of all the entries that I am recieving I may decide to close the contest early, just a forwarning, still haven't decided. Let me know if you're working on something for the contest, otherwise I may decide to close a few days early. Thankyou.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 25, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: OMG I am so utterly ashamed of myself that it took this long to judge this contest, and I truly am so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Sorry! I usualy try to get my contests judged the night the end but lately Ive just been so scattered, my computer keeps dying and life is just insane but seriously we all know you dont care about my problems so here is my judgment:
1st place: Autumn's Moratorium by Genielassie
2nd Place: Postcards by Natural-disaster
3rd place: Relentless Dragon by MoonWyrm
Honorable Mentions:
(In no partiular order)
Song of the Waterfall- sewasham
This Warrior- Simple Literature
The Path- Georges
Soul Collector- DAangelDEVILinME
I Put the Poem Away- Shewolfnative
Construct/Deconstruct- Simple-nobody
To all of you, thankyou so much for taking time and putting in so much effort, and also thankyou for being so patient I know it couldnt have been easy. Also I didnt get a chance to comment on all of the poems, I hope you will forgive me this, there were so many entries I had to reread a lot of them and soon lost track of which id commented or not. Again thankyou for your pantience, and please forgive. :-)
-Ash/Mantis
Entries [23]
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feel the clamor of the much faded armor
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by guardian angel 26 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 20 8:06 AM 2004. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge.
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Spider crawling up my back,
I fidget and sit tall,• Commented on by judge. -
Austere and black
Ashes of a former life...• Commented on by judge. -
this poem is part of my list"Love in all it's cruelty" at: http://allpoetry.com/list/15461by Amygdala the Tramp 73 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 14 5:09 PM 2005. In Fantasy, Love, Dark
Gold trophy winner
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I had thought I knew her,
The familiarity with the world• Commented on by judge. -
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A sphere of alteration and perseverance, always varying in forms of duplication. Our mind seeking likeness, and shunning it away.• Commented on by judge.
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These tears, these tears of mine,
which falls from my eyes.• Commented on by judge. -
Come now child, come and see,join the midnight revelry!
Dance and sing, our circle waits......• Commented on by judge. -
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About a princess seeing all her soldiers die at war,
and the soul collector getting their souls..• Commented on by judge. -
Tears, on guard, march their endless procession,
through angry streets of hearts at war.by starry-eyes 19 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 27 12:11 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
vibrations and reverberations set off against the cold steel rails that were once labeled a marvel.• Commented on by judge.
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A waking highway
at dawn.by lizzard king 99 lines, on Nov 2 9:56 AM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
I stared at the box as my heavy head dropped.
I motioned to turn away and then i stopped...by FiReSDeSirE 37 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 2 8:56 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Smashing a hole into the wall of a brain• Commented on by judge. -
Ruby red plasma molecules, round and full
Rushing – pumping – racing like a tumultuous rapidby guardian angel 16 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 4:00 AM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Darkness saturates my hollowed footsteps.
My world collapses beyond• Commented on by judge. -
blood,car,lover,shadows,and oceansby poetoflove18 33 lines, on Nov 4 9:13 AM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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by duhhitsyasmine 6 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 6 9:22 AM 2005. In Childrens• Commented on by judge.
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My angel from heaven,
Yes the Almighty's grace enlightens us brethren,• Commented on by judge.
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Ooo! Lovely contest. I think I shall enter a couple.
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Definately will enter pre-write and new-write...cool contest
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Hey, cool contest you have here. Good luck to everyone entered in it and good luck with all the judging!
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Wow, there are a *lot* of entries, you've got your work cut out for you. Here's one more, hope you find the time to read all of these delicious words, and hope you like mine.
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Thats a whole lot of reading
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Hey there, love the contest, how's it going with the judging
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O.o;; wow the contest isn't judged yet O.O
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whoah.. that is a LOT to read.. just thought i'd check back to see how far you were. i liked this contest a lot, it was pretty cool. anywayz yeah, take care
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s Thank you so m uch for the gold in this and congratulations to everyone. Hope all have had a Happy Thanksgiving! s and best wishes... ~genielassie~
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A nice end for me.. Happy Turkey Slaughter Day, everyone.
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Thanks for the honourable mention on my poem, it is much appreciated and welcomed.
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Thanks for the second place, I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks alot.
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Thank you for the 25 points and the recognition.
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