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Close Your Eyes

close your eyes and picture yourself in a pitch black room
There is no way in
There is no way out
you are there forever
There is nothing in there with you
You are naked
Write a poem about how you feel
Use as many adjectives as you can

This contest will be judged by realeyezrealize and tarnishedheart

Good luck, have fun, don't forget to close your eyes

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on November 4, 2005
Rewards: Gold: 300
Final notes:
I just wnat everyone to know that everyone did a great job. This was a very hard thing to do. We wanted everyone to go to that place, to show your emotions, what you are feeling, and you all did a very good job of that!! Congrats to first place!! BTW--We will be commenting on everyones poems, I have this rule that I do not comment when a contest is running, I do not want to give anything away or seem bias, anyways, great job!!

Entries [4]

How I feel

Alone
Trapped in my own sanity

by alicia55 34 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 1 7:17 AM 2005. In Dark
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
Finished Body

the stinging air sinking it’s cold teeth into my naked body
alone in the darkness

by flight 20 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 1 4:11 PM 2005. In Dark

• Commented on by judge.
An Alternative Take on Darkness (in two parts)

I live with the flower blossoms in the sidewalk cracks.

by vaguelyfamiliar 109 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 2 1:57 PM 2005. In Personal, Contemporary
Gold trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
that is...

my life and its description with a meaning too...

by PrabhuDayal Khattar 20 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 3 7:46 AM 2005. In Sad

• Commented on by judge.