Well I was just betrayed by a friend of mine so I want poems about friends betraying you. It doesn't matter what they betrayed you about, I want it all. But only being betrayed by friends, not boyfriends/girlfriends or family...sorry!
Now for the dreaded rules:
1) No sticky caps...I can't read them!
2) You can cuss all you want...it doesn't bother me.
3) You can enter as many times as you want but only 1 prewrite please.
4) Please comment on one of my poem and someone else's in the contest and put the names of the poems in your authors comment box.
5) Have Fun!!!
1st place will get 300 point
2nd and 3rd will be decided by how many points I have at the end of the contest!
IM me if you have any questions!
Good luck everyone!
Now for the dreaded rules:
1) No sticky caps...I can't read them!
2) You can cuss all you want...it doesn't bother me.
3) You can enter as many times as you want but only 1 prewrite please.
4) Please comment on one of my poem and someone else's in the contest and put the names of the poems in your authors comment box.
5) Have Fun!!!
1st place will get 300 point
2nd and 3rd will be decided by how many points I have at the end of the contest!
IM me if you have any questions!
Good luck everyone!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 28, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I want to thank all of you who entered and followed the rules. I had a lot of wonderful poems in here but was not able to chose them as they did not follow the rules. Everyone did such a wonderful job and I enjoyed reading all of the poems. Congrats to the winners
1st - A Touch of Innocence by Dark Phoenix
2nd - SCRAPbook by DraganaGytrash
3rd - Trust No One! by LostDeadCutter
Honourable Mentions go to:
It's Your Fault by Dark Phoenix
Used To Be by Rain86
Sacrifice by rode blood 87
Two lives; both lies by down without you
I believe in fate by Made2GlorifyHim
Fallen Comerade by Comatose
You Hurt Me! by art
Thanks again for entering. All of your poems really helped shed some light on my situation. ThanksEntries [20]
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Betrayal;
The worst type of pain.by BloodofaDeadRose 11 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 11:03 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
To drag you down from your wings and halo
To suffocate you with lies you refused to hearby Dark Phoenix 44 lines, 4 comments, on May 11 9:04 PM 2005. In Love, Dark, Angst
Gold trophy winner
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I never did anything to you,
Yet you take revenge.• Commented on by judge. -
I've known you for so long,
why do you cast me aside,by thex tapxdoctor 9 lines, 7 comments, on May 18 11:07 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
I wait, kneeling.
You don’t answer me.• Commented on by judge. -
heart break all the poems about love in my set are about this girl that just plowed my heart into the ground. for the guy who hurts her everytime they get togetby westhepoet 42 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 28 12:07 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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The sting of being betrayed is fresh in my mind.
The words of betrayal are fresh in my ear.by maelburleson 28 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 22 9:27 PM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
For an old friend whom has left me... goodbye...by Sorin of Shadows 30 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 10:20 AM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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Rest in peace fallen oneby Blank Page 74 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 9 9:09 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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I thought I had moved on,
I thought the memories had faded.by BLUE EYED NOTHiNG 27 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 15 12:08 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
by BLUE EYED NOTHiNG 38 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 17 6:25 PM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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Remember how we spent
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I was standing by the wall waiting for you
Why aren't you here yet?by General 1948 14 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 17 7:08 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I watched you give up
I watched as you saidby outofbreath 38 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 19 3:21 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
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Papers and photographs
Float past my eyes.• Commented on by judge. -
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joke about the times we had,
laugh about the experiances we share,• Commented on by judge. -
by Made2GlorifyHim 36 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 25 5:52 PM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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this poem is one of my first ones on this site so.. yeah i hope you like it!
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Wow this is an amazing contest and I cannot wait to see who wins!
Also, thanks for your comment on my poem. I know how it is to have people stab you in the back....it's horrible and it takes time to learn....but what doesn't kill you makes you stronger...and I am stronger now for learning about her trecherous ways as you will be in the long run Thanks again for the comment as it was well recieved and needed.
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Thanks ! It's horrible to have people stab you in the back. And it's true that it will make you stronger. I my situation makes me stronger....unfortionatly that means I have to hope it doesnt kill me first! Glad you liked my comment to you! Good luck!
~Fi~
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Just a reminder to everyone....you need to comment on one of my poems and someone elses in the contest. After you do that please put the name of the poem into your authors comment box so I know you did. If not you will be DQ! And I really dont wanna DQ anyone! So please put it in your comment box or I wont know you did it! Thanks! Good luck to all!
~Fi~
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Hey, I have two or three poems about my best friend splitting up with me, and I don't know which is best, so I'll enter em and you can decide which one to keep in. Hope that's alright.
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Sounds good to me! I'll remove the other two! Thanks for telling me !
~Fi~
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hi
I'm not your maid... clean up your own messes
by outofbreath
and
How It Feels
by Coffee Lover
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You know.. I just wrote a poem for this, and I've been rushing to get it onto here... But the contest just closed 47 seconds ago. That really sucks...
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Sorry to hear about that. Unfortionatly there is nothing I can do about it! I really wish there was!
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Next tim eplease put it in your authors comment box as I almost missed this and you had a very good write! I would have been horrible had i not seen it here! So just for next time...authors comment box
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Wow thanks for the honorable mention And thanks as well for holding such an awesome contest! Congrats to the winners!
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Anytime! you really deserved it Glad you enjoyed the contest!
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Thanks for the honorable mention, and congrats to the other winners. You all did amazingly!!!
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