Contest Tired of all these so called by tarnishedheart at All poetry

There is really not to much to this one, an easy 300 points.
Now, I am really tired of entering these contests that say, give me your best I want you to make me feel it, blah blah blah!!
I have looked at the poems that have won these and they might as well be roses are red violets are blue...
either I am too conceited or there are friend's entering and friend's winning, whatever the case, I want your best.
I don't care what style it is, whatever.
I don't care if you cuss. It can be a love poem or an I hate you poem.
Please Please Please NO FORCED RHYMING!!
If you have to force a rhyme in your poem, re-write it so that it sounds better, I have done it before so I know how to correct it.
I have read alot of really really good poems on this website so I know you guys are capable.
Good luck!!

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on October 16, 2005
Rewards: Gold: 300
Final notes:
Hard contest to judge, you all did a great job!! see you at the next one. Peace

Entries [15]

1 - 15 of 15

'Twas the Night Before Battle

A Biblical spoof of "Twas the night before Christmas"

by Glacian 68 lines, 43 comments, on Nov 7 12:51 AM 2004. In Society, Other

• Commented on by judge.
A Night out at sea

Sit down my lass, ill tell you a tale,

by Chrissy626 25 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 25 7:25 AM 2004. In Other

• Commented on by judge.
The Place

Just to the left of Delusion
Directly to the right of reality

by Alien Bob 20 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 19 4:37 PM 2005. In Weird, Dark

• Commented on by judge.
Weight

At times I feel heavy
At times I feel like I am 5 pounds

by Neelam568 25 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 22 6:52 PM 2005. In Personal, Other, Hope

• Commented on by judge.
Red death

the reaper of innocence
you sow to be raped by god

by wings of myth 19 lines, 5 comments, on May 20 1:14 PM 2005. In Dark

• Commented on by judge.
Love Is Blind

This poem tells u how love is really blind, and if u don't know your partner by know, get to know him before it's to late.

by sexyfidethang 30 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 29 3:06 PM 2005. In Love

• Commented on by judge.
Jwt

As i'm laying in my bed
I think of all the things

by LadyMidnight07 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 7 11:28 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Love

• Commented on by judge.
Born again

To all those who have
Hurt,

by Carissa 31 lines, 37 comments, on Jul 23 7:48 AM 2005. In Personal

• Commented on by judge.
me...you...what?

mmmmmm...... no morral just read and smile :D

by once more 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 30 7:57 AM 2005. In Weird

• Commented on by judge.
Hidden

I keep myself hidden inside
For fear of being hurt

by LivingLies 28 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 3:29 PM 2005. In Personal, Dark

• Commented on by judge.
Remodeling Johns Hopkins

Songs are muted with sawdust and coughs
that drown out the ambulance sirens

by TBRduddette001 68 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 9 12:42 PM 2005. In Other

• Commented on by judge.
subconscious realization

upside down,
retreating into a wilderness

by deleted all poems 16 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 10 6:53 PM 2005. In Weird, Beat, Other

• Commented on by judge.
the story of my broken heart

by miss midnight 9 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 10 8:28 PM 2005. In Love, Dark

• Commented on by judge.
Scattered Feelings.

Is it possible
to feel

by sad green angel 33 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 12 3:01 PM 2005. In Love

• Commented on by judge.
Shallow Bottomless Pit

Perfection of an absolution
technique long forgotten

by Few and Far Between 19 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 15 2:02 AM 2005. In Abuse, Dark, Angst

• Commented on by judge.

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lifeisjazzy
October 10, 2005
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cooooool
this is really cool contest and the best part is the intro to it or whatever rules... but actually you really have no rules i see!!!... but it's really cool and i will try to enter if possible... all the best reading... and hope you have a great time :-)
tarnishedheart
October 10, 2005
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thanx for the comment, just trying to let people know that I know they have talent and I want them to show it, I hate it when I see someone has won a contest for a poem my 4 year old could have written
sevas-tra
October 11, 2005
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good topic for a contst.
i'm hoping you don't see what i've written as "forced rhyming".
But still i love this topic
tarnishedheart
October 17, 2005
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being that you took your poems out of the contest already I cannot answer your question in the way that would be fair to you because I don't even know what they were. Also, yes I am the judge and ultimatly it is my decision. Having said that, you can learn alot about a poem by reading the two lines under the title, also, when I judged this it was around midnight and I had alot of entries, it is alot easier to judge something by title and the two lines underneath, not that I judge all the poems in a contest like that, because I don't, I just didn't think that it would be fair to everyone if I put it off and put it off until I had time to got through every single one. If you send me your poems that you entered in the contest I will give you an accurate answer on why I did not read them and/or make you the winner
Viv
October 17, 2005
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Thank you so much for giving me the gold it was so kind of you!
I'm going to comment on some of your poems now, as a small return for your generosity.
Thanks again ^_^

Vivi