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OK, say you're with someone and they really care for you, they even say they love you......... how do you know if you love them and that they're not lying to you???????
:†: OPTIONS :†:
1. this someone says he/she is %100 faithful to you... but your best friend says different. what do you do?
2. you've been hurt (bad) before. its been nearly a year since your last "relationship", he/she comes along and you're happier than ever, but you're having doubts on wether or not you're ready for a relationship. how do you know you're ready?
3. are you sure you love him/her? no reason for you to be afraid, yet. he/she's been good to you for a long time and you feel you really trust them.....
4. if you dont want onw of the 3 other option just write something in realtaion to the situation at the top.
:†: RULES :†:
1. No sTiCkY cApS. automatic disqualification.
2. type "Scorpions sting themselves to death in circling flame in your authors comments so i know you read the rules.
thats about all i can think of, pre-writes are good. i'll try my hardest to comment everyones poems as i read them. you have 8 days. have fun
OK, say you're with someone and they really care for you, they even say they love you......... how do you know if you love them and that they're not lying to you???????
:†: OPTIONS :†:
1. this someone says he/she is %100 faithful to you... but your best friend says different. what do you do?
2. you've been hurt (bad) before. its been nearly a year since your last "relationship", he/she comes along and you're happier than ever, but you're having doubts on wether or not you're ready for a relationship. how do you know you're ready?
3. are you sure you love him/her? no reason for you to be afraid, yet. he/she's been good to you for a long time and you feel you really trust them.....
4. if you dont want onw of the 3 other option just write something in realtaion to the situation at the top.
:†: RULES :†:
1. No sTiCkY cApS. automatic disqualification.
2. type "Scorpions sting themselves to death in circling flame in your authors comments so i know you read the rules.
thats about all i can think of, pre-writes are good. i'll try my hardest to comment everyones poems as i read them. you have 8 days. have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 13, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Im sorry i never commented, im moving to a different house and its been a bit hectic lately. thank you for all your entries.
Entries [7]
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It seems I’m acting how I said I wouldn’t
But it’s not as bad as it may lookby FlirtyLiLBlondi 26 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 12:49 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
A ventful poem of a love gone bad.• Commented on by judge.
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My friend said you were a great crush to have
I didn't know whyby HummerGirl 25 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 19 5:48 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
by xDarkSuicidex 15 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 30 10:03 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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And I'm hurtin so bad And I'm feelin so sad. You were all that I had. And I'm hurtin so bad.• Commented on by judge.
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This is the same one without the Chorus.• Commented on by judge.
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&& you tell me you love me
as you { k i s s } me && hug me• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
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you don't know if they are lying to you for sure - but their actions speak louder... and if you have to ask yourself if you love someone - chances are that you don't love them
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is a storywrite okay? im still not sure if it fits or not...
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I know how hectic things can be when moving, so I don't mind you didn't have time to comment on my entry- at least you read it! Some "judges" don't even do that (why hold a contest, I say, if you can't take the responsibility seriously) so I am VERY appreciative you did. Hope the move goes ok, and when you do have time I would greatly appreciate it if you could come back to my poem and give a critique. I don't enter contests to win points or trophies (though they are nice to get) but instead I do it to get feedback so I can improve my writing and polish my work. I do appreciate all the comments I've gotten thus far, and if anyone else wants to comment here's a link to
"Of Love and Trust"
allpoetry.com/Poem/1557767
I will eventually pay back the favor (be patient, I am also moving, but with a 2 month old baby!)
Anyways- most importantly I want to congratulate the trophy winners- great job.
And I hope this contest served the purpose intended (questions of love are always hard to answer, no matter what the circumstances!) -
awesome contest and congrats to all winners. It's awesome to be a part of this. Hope you have another one in the near future.
Marianne.
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