write about whatever you like but it must end in positve change.I really believe the world can be a different place if we get good at being happy.
Nothing about suicide or cutting, rather the problem that may cause people to be saddened in the first place, then end it with a tangible good that you would be able to take and use in your life in a practical way daily.
Would love it if you commented on some of my writes.After all there are approx about 200 people on this site and that is not many to get to know really in the huge scale of things.So let's be friendly and happy even if it is only for a moment.......
Nothing about suicide or cutting, rather the problem that may cause people to be saddened in the first place, then end it with a tangible good that you would be able to take and use in your life in a practical way daily.
Would love it if you commented on some of my writes.After all there are approx about 200 people on this site and that is not many to get to know really in the huge scale of things.So let's be friendly and happy even if it is only for a moment.......
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 27, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: thank you to all who entered. You are all have such precious writes. Give me some time so I can enjoy each poem and comment on them. I would like my comments to be from the heart so I will do this steadily......It was very hard to choose...
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Once upon a time, some time ago
There was a young girl, who had a pink bow• Commented on by judge. -
know in timethings will be okayjust take things one by onetake things day by daylife may not throw youthings you really wantbut you shouby unable2fly 23 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 12 1:28 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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My happy place is happy.
In my happy place I have a pet turtle named Snappy.• Commented on by judge. -
You want to change me
Well I wont let it happen• Commented on by judge. -
We've seen through recent disasters,
pain and heartache of every kind...• Commented on by judge. -
by MissCassie 7 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 23 7:10 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
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nice idea for a contest i totally agree with you!! i love how you you wrote: if we can only get good at being happy.. becuase its soo easy to be depressed.. as in to get it.. its not very easy once you are as in yoru life. but to feel depressed u know? but anwyay.. awesome, goodluck witht he contest!
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hey i just wanted to say that i know my poem does have editing issues and things of that nature i just thought it would be fint the way it was. this was a really good idea for a contest!! good job
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VERY GOOOOD idea dearie. so many crappy dark and cutting poems and contests these days I was wondering if anyone was happy!
anyways its a wonderful idea for a contest I also agree the world could be a better place if ppl were happy and sharing etc.
good luck!xoxo
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I entered the painting one dont get angry becuase the beginning is a bit sad and stuff but the last verse I made my views of being contented
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This is a wonderful idea for a contest. It is good to see something positive and uplifting! I hope you get losts of great entries for this one! Best wishes and good luck!
~Frog~
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Congratulations, Frogsters40...well done, one & all...Thank you, angaus, for hosting a great contest...Be well, Poets... Wanda
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