My AP name is obviously ToDieBeautiful. But thinking about it, do you know why its that?
Have you ever been so obsessed to just be beautiful? For working hard each day, to change your appearance... to never be satisfied? If you can relate to me write about it.
This contest is mostly for people with eating disorders, or depression. Tell me your thoughts, your feelings, what you go through on a daily basis. Or do you know a friend that's like this? Tell me about them... tell me a story in a poem. Make it good, make it break my heart, make me relate....
Rules:
1. No bashing
2. Comment on one other persons poem, and tell me in the author comments who's poem...
3. Describe in your author comments what the poem is about...
Beauty isn't always whats right, nor whats healthy...
~*Striving for Perfection*~
Have you ever been so obsessed to just be beautiful? For working hard each day, to change your appearance... to never be satisfied? If you can relate to me write about it.
This contest is mostly for people with eating disorders, or depression. Tell me your thoughts, your feelings, what you go through on a daily basis. Or do you know a friend that's like this? Tell me about them... tell me a story in a poem. Make it good, make it break my heart, make me relate....
Rules:
1. No bashing
2. Comment on one other persons poem, and tell me in the author comments who's poem...
3. Describe in your author comments what the poem is about...
Beauty isn't always whats right, nor whats healthy...
~*Striving for Perfection*~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 1, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Honorable Mentions
Dear Anorexia by twinkletoes72089
To Far From Beautiful by suicidalzombie
Affection, Infection and Perfection by ICaughtFire
Tattured Angel by SilentEmpySoul
Eidolon Desires by EidolonDesires
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Sorry this took me so long to judge, but I've been "grounded" do to not going to school, and pretty much on lock down. Thank you all for joinging my contest. In my minds, you're all winners for trying... Remember, beauty is not always whats important, and by reading all of your poems, I realized each and everyone of you are beautiful!Entries [16]
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Broken face, with the broken lungs.
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Look at you
You’re a disgusting fat pig• Commented on by judge. -
i lean back as far as i can go
to see the ribs jut out• Commented on by judge. -
The image in the mirror
Haunting face, bloated body.• Commented on by judge. -
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i never knew where he came from
but i took these precious birds• Commented on by judge. -
Morning plays a sick and morbid
Song of falling soul.• Commented on by judge. -
I can relate to trying my hardest everyday to look my best.
I can relate to having a eating disorder its called not eating.by get N-side my head 17 lines, on Sep 18 9:09 PM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
by Sara Bellem 50 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 20 10:49 PM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Society
Gold trophy winner
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Eidolon Desires caress my heart,
But I collapse from your cold touch...• Commented on by judge. -
my hair is straight
my eyes and lips are painted• Commented on by judge. -
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would you like me still,
if I turned myself inside out for you?• Commented on by judge.
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WELCOME BACK LALAAAAAA 
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Thank you sweetie Love ya!
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I read the poem insides out...
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Hey Sis,
Sorry it took me so long to comment and check this contest out, been busy but I don't want you to think that I have forgotten you. You know how I was before and even now my EDs try to haunt me. When I have a chance I will enter, perhaps even tonight if all goes well
... Hang in there, I hope you are doing well.
Sara Dawn
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hey just wanna say that i hope my poem was right for the contest and its a really good contest!!!!!
have fun judging it!
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Have a wonderful time judging these! I've spent a bit of time going through them... and you have a tough choice here! There are some wonderful poets here! Thanks for hosting the contest!
Love,
Katy
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good luck judging hun, this was a good and interesting contest!
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YAY..thank you soooo much! second place! yay!!!! im soooo happy!!!
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OMG! I got first place?! Thank you so much Sis, I am very honored and proud that my poem won in your contest. I am so sorry for the delay in responding, for some reason I am not getting system messages like I should and I had to go to your author page and find out what was going on
I love you sis, Thank you so much for the trophy and points, I feel very honored
Your Sara Dawn
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Bronze trophy winner
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