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For the Enlightened

OK. This contest is truly only for those people who feel they are enlightened.
I want to know when you felt that your eyes were opened and everyone else's was closed, when you felt like you knew something that everything else didn't.
There isn't many rules just make sure that it comes from your heart, I want something deep so reach down and find that place that will shock the hell out of me.
Whether or not you comment on my poems won't help you win the contest, I really like comments but I don't think that would be fair.
Good luck!!
REMEMBER--IMAGINE!!!

I am editing this because I want to be a little more clear of what I want:
I want your conspiracy theories
If you can remember, I want to know the moment that you felt like everyone else was just trying to blend into what they thought was right
I want your anger towards the ignorant
I want your pain of wanting to scream that no one understands
thanx

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 21, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:

Entries [7]

1 - 7 of 7
  • Are we?
    Are we thinking about the future
    When we cut down the trees and toxin the air we have?
    by Elvenfairy 20 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 27 8:37 PM 2003. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • High On A Hill
    by malkinpuss 18 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 20 6:20 PM 2004. In Society, Contemporary
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • hot oil
    doris, pick up the phone and talk to the one who has been calling....
    you you you....
    by institution recoil 31 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 20 4:54 PM 2005. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • How Could...
    by B Chandler 30 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 16 4:22 PM 2005. In Society
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Look Around
    Here in this world we do not seem to feel
    by Dark Savant 17 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 17 1:38 PM 2005. In Society
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Take It Away
    Please can't you take it away
    I don't want it to stay
    by Smirnoff Ice 29 lines, on Sep 21 3:40 AM 2005. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • institution recoil
    September 16, 2005
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    I feel that my eyes have been opened, broken and stabbed into the flesh.

    Through my life experiences and those of near-death I have come to understand the fundamental notions of reality, that I make my world and that everything else is unproven fiction.


  • Annalise
    September 16, 2005
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    Oh, this sounds quite interesting. I think I may have to enter this one. As long as I can make this thought "poetic"... :/ Good luck with the contest!
    Bestest of wishes and all that other mushy, gushy stuff ~Meli~


  • RealEyezRealize
    September 19, 2005
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    Chauna I dedicate this poem to you for I thought of u when i wrote it, not for the contest but for OUR opinions! hope you like it hang it on your wall!!! Love you!!
    Edited on Sep 19, 11:06 p.m. because 'cause i had to'.