UPDATE 2: I have read all the entries at least 3 times already. I may go ahead and judge this contest this weekend since the interest finally slowed down a little. This would be a good time to tweak what you've written if you need to or want to. I have an anonymous judge that's going to help me with this. There are so many wonderful entries so far. So anyway, unless I get another overwhelming response to leave this open...I'll probably close it tomorrow sometime.
UPDATE I hope no one mind's but since this filled up so fast, I'm going to open it back up. I had no idea I would get 30 entries in just a few days. I'm going to change the entry amount to 50.
There is nothing more beautiful than poetry that makes you sit and ponder well after the words have soaked in. One of my favorite forms is the cinquain. It is not easy to write something that makes you sit and ponder in such few words, but when it is done well, the results can be amazing.
This is what I want for this contest:
-Write a cinquain inspired by this picture by Alexander Volkov. (Don't describe what the eyes see, I want to know what your soul sees).
-Metaphors and deep emotion
-No cinquain suites for this one, only one cinquain as I want to see what you can tell me in just those few words and lines.
For those who don't know how to write a cinquain, here are the rules for that form:
-5 lines ONLY. Each line has a syllable count of it's own.
Line 1: 2 syllables
Line 2: 4 syllables
Line 3: 6 syllables
Line 4: 8 syllables
Line 5: 2 syllables
CINQUAINS SHOULD NOT RHYME (in my humble opinion).
Use good punctuation and formatting to emphasize your write.
To get a feel of the type of cinquains I like you can check out one of mine:
allpoetry.com/Poem/1413787
This is one of Nicolette's. A great example:
Blue Words.....
Rules:
-No chat speak
-No sticky caps
-Your syllable count will be checked
-Use spellcheck
-NO FOUL LANGUAGE....NONE
-If you choose to write an adult/erotica piece, please put it in the appropriate category and be tasteful.
-2 entries per poet.
-No Prewrites this time. I want you to be inspired by this picture.
I will close this contest after 30 entries or September 18th, whichever comes first.
Gold 400 points
Silver 100 points
Bronze 75 points
Honorable mentions are always possible but not guaranteed.
Enjoy writing in this wonderful poetry form. You may also go to www.shadowpoetry.com to get more information about this form.
I will read/comment each entry at the end of the contest.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 11, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Wow, you guys blew me away. I can't believe all the wonderful entries. I simply had to stop and judge before it got so big I wouldn't be able to decide. Thank you everyone for being a part of this. I will do it again. I had a hard time with this contest and called in the big guns to help. Pierre Richards graciously helped me narrow this down and he and I were in total agreement with the winners. I have many honorable mentions also.
The trophies go to:
Gold-Nicolette-September's Wreath. I asked for power and surely got it with this piece.
Silver-surfergirl-Dawn 'Til Dusk. I think I interpreted this different than maybe she meant it but I still loved it.
Bronze-daftmonk-She's Hiding-This one hit home with me. A very familiar question asked in this piece.
Well done to all of you.
Here are the honorable mentions (10 points each) in no special order:
Delicate Vision-Zoo
Whispers-Samplette
Perception-crystaldust
Forebearance-Natanya Shull
Rainbow Petals-Donjo1030
Time Passes-Night Hope
Cinquain 1-KarenHarper
Untitled-MagicLady
Thank you all for a wonderful turnout. Take a bow!
Until next time...............
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Aaaaah wonderful, Lyrical. The picture is just perfect for soulfull, deep cinquains. You know I just love this poetry form and I also know that you'll be an excellent judge, because cinquains are your forte!! I hope to be here before you have 30 entries!!
~ Nicolette
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I sure hope to see something from your incredible pen my dear friend.
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Brilliant!!!!
What a wonderful idea for a contest, I am going to come back to look at this again after I think of somethin worthwhile to enter into it. Thank you for running this, my curiosity has been piqued, now my poetic muse must go to work and think of the best.
Joyce
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wow... if i could write in that kind of form i would love to leave a pondering poem. i think its a great idea for a contest and i hope that it goes well!
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Umm what is a cinquain? I have no clue what it is or if I can write one XD Im not to smart but ne ways umm if However I find out XD then I will try my best in the contest so let me know please I need to open "All" my options for the contests cause My new goal is to have a trophey and at least get 300 points lol well umm ok im babling sorry well please let me know so I can try ty XD.
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Alric, I have explained the rules of a cinquain, gave a link to an example AND gave a link to shadowpoetry to explain this form. It's all in the contents of this contest.
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There im done XD I hope you enjoy it its my very first one XD
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Hi Lyrical, I agree a well written cinquain is a thing of beauty. I'll keep this contest in mind.
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This website offers a very user-friendly syllable counter....
www.bryceland.com/haiku.php
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Wow that was very nice Ms.Lyrical.
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Thank you Nic. I was looking for one of those...we don't want my southern accent to drop syllables
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there is no way in high h** am i not gonna enter this cause cinquins are fun and exciting to do in my opinion
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I am so sorry I missed this contest, inspired by it, I have written one, whether or not it went in the contest lol!!! Do have a look, if you feel inclined at : allpoetry.com/Poem/1495526
Love and light,
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Why did you close this contest already on Sept.6th after 20 entries, while it said that it would be closed on Sept.18th or after 30 entries? I don't get this!!!!
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Poetico, the last I counted, there were 30 entries exactly. Sorry. I'll have another one sooner or later.
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A really incredible conteast...i love the idea of writing our own interpretation of how the picture makes us feel...very well donea nd good luck with the judging
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Congratulations, one & all...very well done, Poets...Thank you for the Honorable Mention, Robin...I am Honoured to be on the same page with this immense Talent...& Congratulations, Nic!!! I agree!!!
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Wanda
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WOW...!! Thank you for awarding me the gold trophy, Lyrica (and Pierre) - that little cinquain was pulled from the heart . Luckily I can say that spring is looking better now... Congratulations to the other winners and the honourable mentions!! And thanks for the inspiration too - a wonderful contest!! ~
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You are most welcome. It was well deserved. Congratulations!
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Thanks so much for the honorable mention here! I wasn't honestly expecting it. Congrats to all the winners. This was a tought one to judge. lol
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Thanks for the honorable and congratulations to the winners
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