Contest Your Last Moments by disciple123 at All poetry

hey well i suddenly have like a thousand points so i decided to have a contest! yay! lol so yeah here's what it has to be about. i want poems about if you were going to die soon what would you say to someone or what would you do. like example :your on a ship sinking and you could make one phone call or something like that. it doesn't have to be that situation just like about your last moments. people with school starting soon i won't have much time so please if there are already like 20-25 entries please don't enter. sorry. now for the rules!
1. no erotica
2. no swearing
3. no God bashing or something like that please i'm a Christian
4. sTiCkY cApS are allowed! yay! finally a contest that allows them! lol
6. comment on one of my poems please and put the title in your author's comments box.
7. put "penguins only dream in black and white" in your author's box so i know you read the rules!
8. please also comment on at least one other entry in this contest. everyone appreciates comments.
9. have fun!
10. have more fun!

1st place gets 500 points and a gold trophy!
2nd place gets 300 points and silver
3rd place gets 200 points and bronze
-disciple123

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on September 18, 2005
Rewards: Gold: 500
Final notes:
these were all very well written poems! you all did a wonderful job. thank you all for entering. it was very hard to choose

Entries [9]

1 - 9 of 9

Family

Everything went blank,
And I never woke up.

by Satin Slapt Tears 67 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 3 12:20 AM 2005. In Sad, Dark

• Commented on by judge.
Never Goodbye

Its difficult to think about what i'd do If i had to spend a second without youPeople call me crazy when they finally seeThat i would

by Forget It All 30 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 3 1:52 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Love

• Commented on by judge.
They Knew She Loved Them

Laying in a hospital bed
Trying so hard to survive...

by smileygurl 29 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 3 9:54 PM 2005. In Sad, Spiritual, Love

• Commented on by judge.
One Last List

Who to start with I don't know.
All the love I never show.

by lag 15 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 7 8:58 PM 2005. In Other, Love
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
If I had one day left

i find it so hard to believe
that this day has finally come

by dancingpuppet 38 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 8 9:32 PM 2005. In Other

• Commented on by judge.
If I Had....

\*If I had but one day
This is what I'd do

by Whispering Winds 12 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 12 11:27 PM 2005. In Personal, Love
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
My Last Moments Here On Earth

If I were to spend one last day here on earth
Before I’d be deprived of my life and breath

by Poetrylegend 31 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 14 2:55 AM 2005. In Other, Love, Hope

• Commented on by judge.
Perfect last Word

the truck struck me on the drivers side
my legs were tangled and my hands were tied

by beebee2003 70 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 14 1:12 PM 2005. In Sad, Love, Hope

• Commented on by judge.
One Moment, One Day

Wonder what we came here for ? We’ve heard the old ones say
“I’m not certain anymore: It’s different than “my day”

by emvyar 32 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 14 4:14 PM 2005. In Other
Gold trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.