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My Baby

Okay, this is my second contest. The first one went... seemingly well, now I want this one to be better.

Now, this is what I want. I'm going to have twins around end of April, beginning of May. What I want you all to do is write a short story (I will also allow poems) about:

1) telling you boyfriend/getting told by your girlfriend that you are/ she is pregnant.

2) Write a story or poem about the first day with your new born child and what it's like to be with him/her.

3) write a children's story or poem.

~Now for the Rules~
1) Please No StIcKy CaPs
2) No Erotica please
3) You can swear, just don't go over board. Don't have every other word be f*ck or sh*t
4) Please use spell check... that's what it's there for. I'll tell you if I see a few mistakes in your entry when I read and to fix it.
5) You can put in as many entries as you want, but for every 2 pre-writes you enter, write a new one.
6) HAVE FUN!
~It's not a requirement, but it would be nice if people looked at either my poetry or others in the contest.
PRIZES
1st will get a beautiful golden trophy and 300 points
2nd will get a marvelous silver trophy and points will be determined at the end.
3rd will get a nice bronze trophy and points will be determined at the end.

There may be a fourth and fifth and a few honorable mentions, but I'm not sure.
Have fun, Good luck and Get writing!
Tears
UPDATE~~
Sorry, I have to close this contest earlier than planned. school starts Sep. 1st and I can't pull an all nighter judging contests.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 26, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Well, I had my boyfriend help me with this (because they are his twins too) and we thought that sandygram's Mother's Love was the best. This was another hard one because I had troublewith it... that's another reason I turned to him.
    So, Here's the outcome.
    1st: Mother's Love by sandygram (300 pts)
    2nd: How Can I tell you this by Praise his name (100 pts)
    3rd: Do you Love me? by Lady Charm (50 pts)
    4th: A Most Cheished Gift by electricpoet (25 pts)

    Honorable Mention
    Please Don't... by stormy angel (worth an applaud)
    My Newborn by dadizgurl (worth an applaud)

    I would also like to give my boyfriend (losing all sanity) 25 points for dealing with me and the contest and having to deal with me for the rest of his life.

Entries [1]

  • Today I will find out if the sex wasn't for vain,
    Today I will find out if you'll share your last name,
    by Changing Lanes 23 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 18 3:17 PM 2005. In Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • sarahblu
    August 17, 2005
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    okay i'm totally condfused.. I found out i'm pregnant last week. So i'm 6 weeks and due April 14th. If you're due at the end of april it makes you only 4 weeks. Have you already had an ultrasound? Congradulations on twins, you are probably sooo excited. I hope everything goes well for you and your babies


  • SierraHaven
    August 17, 2005
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    I want to enter a poem that I just wrote about my daughter.....but your thing will only allow me to put on prewritten stories? Is there a way that you could fix tha maybe?


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 17, 2005
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    did u just write it? maybe you could put it in story form for a little bit.

  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 17, 2005
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    thank you... we think im farther... around 6 weeks, though I have been starting to show early... that's y we think its twins. I have no clue when we are going to get an ultrasound. When I work up the courage to tell my mom.

  • starr75
    August 17, 2005
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    Hey..I just wanted to post a comment to let you know I have entered your contest.My little story may not be in with the rules.but this is my first story I have ever written.I like your story..I have just got on this thing and im gonna have to figure out how to add you so i can read your stories.but keep up the good work
    Edited on Aug 17, 11:41 because ''.


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 17, 2005
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    thank you for entering... ill read it as soon as i get the chance.


  • Sailorswench
    August 17, 2005
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    I want to enter the contest but it wont't allow for my pre-write. Is there anything you can do to fix the problem?


  • CodeNameCassie
    August 17, 2005
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    this is such a good idea...i think i'll be able to enter but it depends...I've been so braindead lately! But it's a really great contest and I'll bookmark it so I'll remember and then, I'll try and enter! Great idea and good luck!!!!

    Sara

  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 17, 2005
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    you could put it in story form for a little bit... and the once the contest is over, advert it back to poem form.


  • Co-Co-Cola
    August 17, 2005
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    oh wow this sounds like fun!!! I should so try this contest out!


  • Shakari
    August 17, 2005
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    This seems like a wonderful contest! I just don't think that I am the person to write it! I wish you the best with your children! I am sure that the new member of the family will shine in your eyes forever!


  • SeptemberFaith
    August 19, 2005
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    "3) You can swear, just don't go over board. Don't have every other word be fck or sht"

    you want poems about children, how you told someone you were pregnant or the first day with your child and you are allowing cursing?

    Hm.

    good luck with your contest.

  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    August 19, 2005
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    Ya. I kno when I found out, my bf when a little overboard... he was there when i found out... hell he bought the test for me. But ya, he cursed.


  • Sandygram
    August 26, 2005
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    WONDERFUL CONTEST

    Wow thank you so much for the Gold. Really not expected. I so appreciate it. This was a beautiful contest. Best of luck with the babies. Take care, Sandy

  • eclecticpoet
    August 31, 2005
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    Wow, my first story and I got fourth! Thanks so much for a wonderful opportunity. BTW, my daughter has been at college for five days and already has a boyfriend, lol.


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    September 1, 2005
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    lol... well, at least she's happy and alive, right?

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