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Make Me Cry or Depressed

This is my first contest and I've been feeling a little depressed and sad at the moment. I want you to put your best poems into this. Here are your options.

1st prize, 300 points
2nd prize, 50 points
3rd prize, 35 points
4th prize, 20 points
5th prize, 10 points
Honorable mentions

1)Write about how you want to make someone pay for your pain and misery. Be descriptive and show emotion.

2)Write about cutting and how you just want to end your life. Do a good job and show image in this. Tell me how you want to die. Show it exquisitely, but not that much blood and gore. Pretty much just tell me what's on your mind. Stay within policy rules or I will disqualify you.

3)Tell me about a little girl and how she is abused by a family member or family friend. Show how she still trusts this person even after what they did to her. Have it in the little girl's point of view.

4)Talk about a teenager/yourself who has gone through a tough time (friend dying, abusive father, just plain unlucky) and wants to die but is afraid to actually commit.

5)Take a title of a song or a poem you have read (just make sure you say whose it is and if you have gotten permission) and write about it. Describe what the title means to you and how it relates to your life.

~RULES~
1. Minimum swearing. (crap and shit is good, other than that, no, not really.)
2. No Sticky Caps
3. comment on one of my poems and put which one you commented on in your author's comments
4. Put "All I need is you" in your author's comments so I know you read the rules
5. Please put the number you chose in your comments too.
6. Have Fun

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 1, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    I had a hard time judging and had a friend help me (losing all sanity) and we came up with 1st through 5th and two honorable mentions.
    4th place: Rain by Sigafoo
    5th place: Help Me Mama by tootyfruity4hoty

    Honorable mentions go to:
    Black Blood Red Tears by BlackBloodRedTears
    The tint of Blood by queen of darkness

    I based these on the rules and the topics, also on which one i liked the most of course. Congratulations to everyone who entered and i loved each and every poem. If I had enough points I would have choosen everyone, but I couldn't.

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  • Hell In Harmony
    July 26, 2005
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    I have LITERALLLY commented EVERY poem in this contest, but kine, so if ANYONE, wood be so kind to retun the favor it wood be considerate..? Well.. Ohwell. Alot of competion here, Good Luck Every 1
    kat

  • Hell In Harmony
    July 26, 2005
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    mine*

  • Hell In Harmony
    July 26, 2005
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    THANKS. Will Do


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    July 26, 2005
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    thanx.


  • ICoughedToStayAlive
    July 27, 2005
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    this is kind of a weird, abuse/sad/angry-writing contest lol. not entering, but good luck to everyone anyways.


  • QueenT
    August 1, 2005
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    Thanks so much for the gold trophy it means alot to me. Thanks so much for running this contest, I enjoyed being in it. Do you mind if I add you to my favs list so I can check out some of your poems? Oh and I used to be known as Blonde Ambition but I changed my name to QueenT


  • ShadowStalker
    August 2, 2005
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    I won third! yeah! You guys are the best and thanx.....*beams* I'll make it up to you guys...promise!

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