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Contest Impossible Love by mantis180

OK So here's the deal. I cant find the words. I am completely out of sync with my muse these days. I need you to express my feelings for me.
 I have met a guy whom I cannot fall in love with... But I've already fallen for him. I want to express this and I can't.
 So now it's your job. Tell me about someone that you loved and couldn't have. Make me feel it in my soul and let me know how much it hurt you.

 I don't want suicidal notes, I don't want cutting and "Oh my god I have to cut my heart out now" I just want love and pure emotion. Tell me what it did to you and why it hurt, and tell me how you got through it, or if you have gotten through it.

Rules:

1: No StIcKy CaPs... Whatever they are- I ain't never seen them and I have no desire to.

2: Um... Like I said, no suicidal notes, cutting, or any of that

3: Make me cry- make me know what your thinking.

Prizes:

1st is 300 points plus a shiny pretty gold trophy

2nd is Idk how many points and a shiny silver trophy

3rd is, again, I'm not sure how many points- and a not so shiny bronze trophy

 Have fun and good luck.

P.S. Prewrites aloud but I'd perfer new poems.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 22, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Oh dear, this contest was harder then the last, and I am amazed I actualy chose my three winners. I hate choosing winners, cause for the most part all the poems submitted were amazing.

    1st place- Wishing xbLaCk rOsEx - Her poem held what was the main point of this contest, it showed raw emotion, drama, desctriptive, and was the best read I beleive.

    2nd place- Black Angel- by lilithtorninhalf Not exactly the same thing I wanted and yet it spoke to me, touched me, and was dramatic and full of feeling and emotion. When it comes to love, no matter what the concept is, its the emotion that conveys it.

    3rd place- Now as then- by Enchated Knight... You did such a breath takeing job on this poem. I loved it. it was emotional and well written and amazing.

    Honorable mentions, I am sorry but after 1st, 2nd, and 3rd prizes I have no more points. But honorable mentions must be made.

    Zoey9395- Once again you made judging harder by adding your poems. I am in awe of your ability to write and bring forth your emotion. Please keep writing, and vex me by entering my next contest, Everyone one of your poems always seems to make my top ten.

    Groover- Each poem entered in this contest made me want to cry, just for the emotion, just for the desperation and desire to be loved. You make thing sound so amazing, the most awful emotions can be turned into the best. I am proud to be able to read your work, you quite take my breath away. "please" and "Rose" have become favorites of mine for your work.

    Outoflove for the poem "You'll never care" This was an enticingly wonderfully written poem.

    Pattyann4500 for her poem, "Forbidden" Lovely write, well written and quite amazing.

    Mr. Vertigo-Conversations with Clouds- Again not exactly what I was looking for. But at the same time it was interesting and thought provoking and I enjoyed reading it, although I was not impressed by the old cleches- You still did a great job.

    All the rest, I know there were others but its late and I cant remember... but you all did a great job and thank you so much for entering my contest.
    -Ash

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  • x Ugly Beauty x
    July 17, 2005
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    when you say write about someone you love but you cant have, can it be an ex-boyfriend? like, but theyve gotten over you and moved on but you still want them. ??? -Megan


  • mantis180
    July 17, 2005
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    Sure


  • mantis180
    July 17, 2005
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    Well then you should write about it!
    I kinda know what you mean, I fell for this guy, who married someone else...


  • Midsummer nights
    July 21, 2005
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    I have posted a great poem that i seem to have dealt with the same terms you deal with now.

  • Lilithtornintwo
    July 22, 2005
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    thank you for the points and the trophy. Always nice to see someone who judges fairly and doesn't give all the points to their friends!

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