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The Point of No Return

I really don't think you care what number contest this is for me, or any of that stuff, so let's get on with it.

Choices:

1)Nature- I want you to write about the beauty of sitting outside with nothing around you but nature...It can be about the peace of a summer day, the harshness of a cold winter wind, or even the violence of a storm, whatever floats your boat.

2)Write a poem about abuse.  It could be verbal, physical, sexual, spousal..etc. Make me cry.

3)Write a poem using one of the following lines:
        a. "The scent of ozone and liquor hang in the wind, a precursor to your demise"
        b. "Feathers fall from your shattered wings, memories of lost innocence"
        c. "Do you practice that look in the mirror, that one of feigned innocence and hope"
        d. "Here I am, drowning in heavy perfume and cheap cosmetics"
        e. "Say the words like you mean it, and in the end, maybe you'll believe them too"

Bonus: you get bonus points if you write a poem for one of those categories using a title from one of the songs on The Phantom Of The Opera movie soundtrack.

Rules:

1)Only one entry per person.
2)No StIcKy CaPs or chat lingo!
3)No Haiku's..I can't stand them.

Points:

1st: 300 points and a gold trophy
2nd: 100 points and a silver trophy
3rd: 50 points and a bronze trophy

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 25, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Well, it took me a while to get this up because I just broke my finger...so if I make a few typing error, bear with me please...
    This was my most productive contest as of yet, and I was extremely pleased with the number of entries I recieved and the quality of the nature poems that I recieved. It was a difficult decision, and I have read all of the poems at least once and I have decided to give three honorable mentions(who will recieve 25 points each) in addition to the gold, silver, and bronze trophies..

    1st-Valley Sunrise by sewasham
    2nd-Serenity by seriea89
    3rd-Say It Like You Mean It by Rose Dark Thorn
    H.M.-Natures Call by Larewen
    H.M.-Joy Song from the Chrysails of lament by Bob the elder
    H.M.-Point of No Return by Vampress

    Thanks for making this a very successful contest

Entries [12]

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  • When the world was young I was old,
    I was first amongst God's works,
    by Wolfpoet 45 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 31 9:00 AM 2003. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Nothing is what it seems. Bad is not always good, and good is not always bad.
    by angel-of-death03 25 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 4 6:29 PM 2005. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A cry in the dark,
    The scurrying of feet.
    by Jaded-Silhouette 17 lines, 3 comments, on May 16 7:47 PM 2005. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • from the shadows were i rise.comes the sound of horror and cries. cause were i lie is were i shall die.And never rise to be seen again.Nor shall any thing be he
    by unfogiven 9 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 23 3:03 PM 2005. In Sad, Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • His Father was sent way down below
    Where all the demons dwell
    by LovesSuicide 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 15 2:31 AM 2005. In Sad, Abuse, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Hide in the cupboard,
    Quick go!
    by Rippled-reflection 59 lines, on Jul 15 2:29 PM 2005. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • All my life I have wondered about why i am here
    You treat me like dirt yet its not you I fear
    by All4God21 32 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 15 2:32 PM 2005. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • O Nightingale, thou who trills through green hills of glassy
    Stature, wouldst thou please me with thine unearthly call?
    by Alexandra Saint 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 15 2:44 PM 2005. In Nature, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Here I am, drowning in heavy perfume and cheap cosmetics trying to look Good for you, but it makes no sense.
    You no longer see who I am, just the shell on the
    by Vampress 42 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 15 3:54 PM 2005. In Sad, Abuse, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A simple task of reading
    Has led me to the most miraculous discovery
    by PenguinsRUs 76 lines, on Jul 15 4:57 PM 2005. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • for if a writer/poet can't love all they have is the drowning of the words, that lay deep in thier blackening hearts!
    by rozz669 55 lines, on Jul 22 10:41 AM 2005. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Wolfpoet
    July 15, 2005
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    b. "Feathers fall from your shattered wings, memories of lost innocence"
    When I saw this i figured I had a pre-write that suited it ) I will enter a second poem based on the Phantom of the opera when my muse strikes me with a rolled up newspaper. Love that musical.


  • Rain86
    July 15, 2005
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    This sounds like a very nice contest. Can't wait to see who will win

  • goodbye carnivale
    July 15, 2005
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    Yay Phantom! <333 Great idea for a contest too ^__^ Hope you get loads of entries - it seems like you're well on your way already ;P
    ~mercé

  • flipping4a10
    July 16, 2005
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    lol i'd enter if i could write poems as well as u ..but i can't ..yet lol^_^ i <3 u


  • Rock-Junkie
    July 18, 2005
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    oh i just love POTO!! i hope that my poem does well in the contest...good luck to all and farewell!!


  • sewasham gold member
    July 25, 2005
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    Thank you for the gold trophy, I am honored to be among so many great entries. I enjoyed your contest and congratulations to all who entered. Take care and Have fun. Steve


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    July 25, 2005
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    Thanks for the bronze and the points.

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