Hey, this is my second contest. I had so much fun with the first one and I have the points so i thought, hmm Ill have a contest lol.
Okay, here's the deal. Lately Ive been going through a tough time trying to figure out whether or not to dump my boyfriend. Ive been contemplating it because I have just recently found out that he lied to me and also in the past he cheated on me and I'm about at the end of my rope.
Now enough about me on to the options.
Option 1-
Write about a love that you are contemplating leaving or have left.
Option 2-
Write about a love that has lied to you and about what.
Option 3-
Write about a love that has cheated on you and how you handled it. Did you leave them or stay like I did.
Option 4- Write a poem using the quote, 'He hurts you once it's his fault, he hurts you twice it's your fault, he hurts you three times your fucking stupid'
Option 5-
Ive always enjoyed peoples views on society so you could write about society.
Comments on my poems or other poets that enter are not necessary but will be appreciated because we all enjoy comments right?
If my friends enter you will have to work hard because i will be judging the entries of everyone fair, so you'll have to work harder. I will not give you a trophy because your a friend of mine. Also please dont be mad, because Im judging it fair.
My last contest almost no one followed the rules and this one I'm not going to be so flexible.
The Dreaded Rules:
Rule 1- I'm allowing pre-writes but I ONLY want them if they apply
Rule 2- Swearing ONLY if necessary.
Rule 3- Only ONE entry per person, if you enter more Ill randomly pick
one and delete it.
Rule 4- No StIcKy CaPs, they annoy the hell outta me.
Rule 5- Follow rules
Rule 6- Have Fun!
First place- A Gold Trophy and 300 points
Second place- A Silver Trophy and applause
Third place- A Bronze Trophy and applause
Honorable Mentions (will be given if I feel the need)- Applause
Okay, here's the deal. Lately Ive been going through a tough time trying to figure out whether or not to dump my boyfriend. Ive been contemplating it because I have just recently found out that he lied to me and also in the past he cheated on me and I'm about at the end of my rope.
Now enough about me on to the options.
Option 1-
Write about a love that you are contemplating leaving or have left.
Option 2-
Write about a love that has lied to you and about what.
Option 3-
Write about a love that has cheated on you and how you handled it. Did you leave them or stay like I did.
Option 4- Write a poem using the quote, 'He hurts you once it's his fault, he hurts you twice it's your fault, he hurts you three times your fucking stupid'
Option 5-
Ive always enjoyed peoples views on society so you could write about society.
Comments on my poems or other poets that enter are not necessary but will be appreciated because we all enjoy comments right?
If my friends enter you will have to work hard because i will be judging the entries of everyone fair, so you'll have to work harder. I will not give you a trophy because your a friend of mine. Also please dont be mad, because Im judging it fair.
My last contest almost no one followed the rules and this one I'm not going to be so flexible.
The Dreaded Rules:
Rule 1- I'm allowing pre-writes but I ONLY want them if they apply
Rule 2- Swearing ONLY if necessary.
Rule 3- Only ONE entry per person, if you enter more Ill randomly pick
one and delete it.
Rule 4- No StIcKy CaPs, they annoy the hell outta me.
Rule 5- Follow rules
Rule 6- Have Fun!
First place- A Gold Trophy and 300 points
Second place- A Silver Trophy and applause
Third place- A Bronze Trophy and applause
Honorable Mentions (will be given if I feel the need)- Applause
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 18, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Wow another great contest. All the entries were so good it was very very difficult to judge this. Some of the poems really helped me feel better in an odd sorta way. Tnx all that entered!
First Place-The Letter by Moon Shadow
Second Place-I Will Return by crowedjewel4Jesus
Third Place--Drug Me- by Unh0ly DreAmer
Honorable Mentions (Theres Lots. In No Specific Order)
Miss Independent-CheekyV
Pain-poetrygal06
Before Him-davidishere
A Need To Rise-ChockingDust
Needing Love-XWingsOfSilverX
Silly Little Girl-xXHangMyHeartXx
Great job everyone!!
Entries [9]
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One last wish from her wornout heart,
Take away what weren't to be from the start.• Commented on by judge. -
How Can I say that I love you?
When I am so unsure that you love me.by A7X-4-Life 18 lines, 11 comments, on May 19 4:10 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Deceit May 27, 2005, 4:59 PM
The act of Deceit.by sedatedthought 40 lines, on May 31 9:37 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
For the things you put me through
why do i still think of youby beebee2003 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 7 1:18 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
• Commented on by judge.
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Look what you have done...
You have killed me..• Commented on by judge. -
You tore my heart
Stepped on the pieces• Commented on by judge.
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D*U*M*P H*I*M !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hunny i wish it were that simple.
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I think that I understand...you love him and don't want to leave him, but are sick and tired of being hurt...right?
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Thats EXACLY it! Im glad someone understands cause not even my best friend does lol
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Been there done that. That's why I understand. I might be able to do this contest...maybe...but I write more dark tings than about love...The incident really messed me up...I hope you don't end up like me...
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I know the feeling...
Except I just acted like a bitch, so he broke up with me..cuz I've broken up with WAY too many people for no reason..
Best of luck to you,
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Tnx for the advice i will take that into consideration. You are right though, I guess it does kinda prove that he dosnt love me as much as he claims. However if you've been through this, and its your first true love, you would know exacly how hard it is to turn them loose. But again tnx for the advice.
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yup, listen to orionis and take some of yur own advice:'He hurts you once it's his fault, he hurts you twice it's your fault, he hurts you three times your fucking stupid'! i like it!
oh, umm... sorry for sticking my nose where it doesnt belong(i'm bad at that). cool contest, my poems are getting dusty.
pete
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I'm not sure if my poem fits "razors and knives (part II). It's sorta like what you wanted. It's about a gurls bf who cheats on her and tells her a lie. if it doesn't fit, let me know and i'll remove it. Great contest by the way!
Ashley
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