This contest is dedicated to nernwon and Josey, because of a recent loss of someone they love. All I want you to do is write about your pain.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 11, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes:
Entries [34]
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I think about how we could never be
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“FAITH”
5-15-04by westhepoet 70 lines, 1 comment, on May 14 10:43 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Daylight is fading fast,
I can feel the storm clouds rising,• Commented on by judge. -
Look! It’s just outside. What do you see? I see smoke, fire, and death. Three innocent victims were driving on their way do their own thing. The driver, a beby BabyBoy1686 56 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 15 9:07 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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Show them the feeling,
Of wanting to die.• Commented on by judge. -
A sad poem about addiction and death...• Commented on by judge.
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This poem is explaining a problem in life now days, people who need help often dont want others to know, so they pretend nothing is wrong aka paint their shadow• Commented on by judge.
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as i stare into whats
left of the mirrorby 13bloodytears 30 lines, 3 comments, on May 28 10:58 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
She glides the gun to her temple
And feels her pulse• Commented on by judge. -
I'm not punk, i swear to you
the clothes i wear have something to doby 6-Ft-UnDeR 50 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 10 11:59 AM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
I'll take a gun up to my head.
Or cut myself untill im dead.• Commented on by judge. -
Life has already become sad
and your look an eternity.• Commented on by judge. -
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Steeples, and gables, and gargoyles adorn
Sullen walls of clay brick that weather has wornby story teller 51 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 19 3:29 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
From nothing I can build such pain
A sandy beach from a single grainby story teller 37 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 19 4:23 PM 2005. In Abuse• Commented on by judge. -
I cry every day
I cry every nightby Broken2peices 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 21 8:30 AM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Why is it that, every time i talk
I'm not heard?by Broken2peices 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 24 12:36 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
I watched a sunrise
didn't see the sun die• Commented on by judge. -
never happened to me• Commented on by judge.
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I'm over this,
I'm over you.• Commented on by judge. -
I was down.
I really couldn't see my way through.• Commented on by judge. -
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I've been trapped under this brick since the break of dawn
See, these men keep trying to build up this wallby this is a war 31 lines, on Jul 9 12:46 AM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
a document oFmental dysFunction
dreams allow us to weave• Commented on by judge. -
An old briar rose
With a set of false eyelashes• Commented on by judge. -
You¡¯ll never knowby GerardWay Is WayHot 62 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 9 7:35 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I see it coming, those darkened clouds.
It swallows me whole, engolfs me, surrounds.• Commented on by judge. -
you've been through a lot, i understand,
but now your addiction's got out of hand,• Commented on by judge. -
You drive me to distraction
Dead or alive• Commented on by judge. -
I'll never know her again
But no one is to blame but me.• Commented on by judge. -
A poem of a girl who realizes her tears and killes herself so she wont have to feel.by the lonely child 27 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 10 6:09 PM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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I feel like I haven't spoken to anyone in ages
Like my bones are dry as I sit here watchingby Not Really Right247 35 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 10 9:03 PM 2005. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Close to you,
though we can not touch,• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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My poem is kinda like pain. I hope it's ok in this contest...if not, o well. Good contest tho.
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i hope u enjoy it cos thats all that matters to me
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nernwon i know her...not in real life but we share comments and chat sometimes....wow...bummer...im sorry
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i hope my poem years of hate is good enough for this it has alot of meaning in it and hidden messages but its all about pain
Edited on Jul 11, 2:49 p.m. because ''.



