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Make Me Cry

Okay...give me your best work here people.I want raw emotion,make me feel like I'm there,like I'm living in your poem.I want to have to read these over and over again to find all there meanings.You can write about any emotions that your feeling,emotions of what your friends are feeling,anything.


Now on to the rules....
1.No STiCkEY CaPS-the are annoying and hard to read.
2.Just have fun and write your little hearts away.


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on June 26, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 350
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for entering this contest.These were all suck beautiful poems it made it really hard for me to just choose 3.Conragts to the winners,and congrats to you all because you all have made a dent in my heart,in which these wonderful poems will be cherised in.

Entries [27]

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  • by Bandit Boy 49 lines, 22 comments, on Sep 18 3:33 PM 2004. In Personal, Other, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I live in a brittle glass box
    by ZannePhalanges 46 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 24 5:32 PM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • There is a place in time and space
    by SegerFan 69 lines, 63 comments, on Nov 29 1:21 AM 2004. In Spiritual
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Found in a puddle of red rain
    with a picture of her boyfriend
    by troubledgurl101 37 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 15 7:54 PM 2004. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • what you did made me cry.
    What you did made me feel like I was dying inside.
    by lilsunshine214 21 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 21 10:52 PM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A little girl walking down the street,
    with long thick hair and a scar
    by troubledgurl101 49 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 27 7:36 PM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by GldnShadows 30 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 11 9:48 PM 2005. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The tears are here to stay
    no one can take this pain away
    by Devilish Temptation 25 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 20 9:12 PM 2005. In Sad
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • If you were to take
    another look at me
    by grippineagle 17 lines, on Apr 18 3:37 PM 2005. In Love, Hope, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • as she sits in her bed
    saying \
    by Juiceboxx 27 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 21 6:54 PM 2005. In Sad, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I know sometime's its hard to live
    When life wont seem to start
    by tupac 23 lines, 4 comments, on May 8 11:41 AM 2005. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The love in my heart is still very real
    Pain; sorrow; terrible suffering is what I feel
    by Puppydog 17 lines, 13 comments, on May 21 8:19 AM 2005. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I remember it very well,
    The night you passed away,
    by lilpbnjam 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 13 10:35 AM 2005. In Sad, Other, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Flawless beauty, is someones ugly side
    A mistaken epiphany, or a love suicide
    by WirEdhEarT 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 16 8:00 AM 2005. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • At the dawning of every new day
    My first thought is....
    by LemonDropAngel 30 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 20 8:31 AM 2005. In Other, Dark, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Alas, sweet Shannon, I bid thee farewell,
    The time we spent as friends was far too brief,
    by poeticyde 51 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 20 11:19 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • they dont take the time to see
    they see right past things
    by tacobell4me08 35 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 20 11:33 AM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Did you forget?
    why cant you remember?
    by tacobell4me08 48 lines, on Jun 20 11:41 AM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Why did u leave me?
    couldn’t u see?
    by tacobell4me08 113 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 20 11:45 AM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Shall i rewind, pretty boy?
    tell me what
    by MountainGirl 24 lines, on Jun 20 11:55 AM 2005. In Sad, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by death-fears-me 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 20 12:26 PM 2005. In Weird, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Cold, hard, empty feelings running through her
    For the last time
    by GothicLolitaGracie 36 lines, on Jun 20 2:22 PM 2005. In Sad, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • do you wonder if the grass is greener on the otherside?
    well has it ever occured to you that the other side may be burnt and dead
    by tacobell4me08 33 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 21 6:00 PM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • cool eyes caught his from the hospital bed,
    and she smiled a weak smile, to hide the gloom.
    by MountainGirl 24 lines, on Jun 22 11:19 PM 2005. In Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • she knows why about the stories she hides
    with the scars on her wrists and the makeshift lists
    by mjl 28 lines, on Jun 24 9:15 PM 2005. In Personal, Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • cry when he kissed her, crying when he pushed her, crying when his hands hit her.
    by xxlovexoxo 18 lines, on Jun 25 7:47 PM 2005. In Abuse
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Pussy Kat
    June 20, 2005
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    Great contest! I'm sure you'll get some wonderful entries because you have given us lots of choice by just chosing the subject 'emotion'. I'll choice something of mine to enter too! It sounds fun! Good luck everyone! x

  • Lilithtornintwo
    June 24, 2005
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    oh my are you gonna get swamped with poems!

  • l-u-b-y-l-o-o
    June 24, 2005
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    Woah, a lot of entries! Im not at all surprised, you've given a lot of scope, and not too many rules! A great combination! Everyone loves this kind of contest! Love lulu xxx


  • rendezvous
    June 25, 2005
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    Haha, wow...you've got a ton of entries. It'll be a heck of a time judging these. Good luck in that department.
    ~jen


  • leander Moderators member
    June 27, 2005
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    Congratulations to the three winners and thanks for a wonderful contest

    Leander

  • l-u-b-y-l-o-o
    June 28, 2005
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    Hey! Congratulations to the winners, everyone did a fantastic job, didn't they?! claps for everyone Well done for getting through alllllll these entries! Must've been damned hard! Thanks for the great contest! Love lulu xxx


  • twenty-four-reasons
    June 28, 2005
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    Your welcome.It was very damn hard.But i got through it.Thanks for being such good sports you all.I'll be making another contest soon.So be on the lookout for it,if you would like to join it.

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