I am looking for a perfect guy right now and i am thinking about all the wonderful things we will do together! i would like for y'all to write a poem about personal moments between boyfriends and girlfriends! i don't really want anything sad! more like romantic
I want you to make me sit back and think after i read your poem wow if that happened i would die! Take my breath away!
OKAY now for the funniest part RULES!( i know but hey ya gotta have em')
1 No sticky caps! ( i will skip your poem if you have them)
2 keep cursing to a minimum ( you really shouldn't even need it)
3 HAVE TO COMMENT ON AT LEAST ONE MORE POEM UNDER THIS CONTEST( i don't care if you comment on my poems) (you can though
4 Use colors that i can read
5 and PLEASE spell check (misspelled words take away from the poem)
6 HAVE FUN AND BE ORIGINAL
I want you to make me sit back and think after i read your poem wow if that happened i would die! Take my breath away!OKAY now for the funniest part RULES!( i know but hey ya gotta have em')
1 No sticky caps! ( i will skip your poem if you have them)
2 keep cursing to a minimum ( you really shouldn't even need it)
3 HAVE TO COMMENT ON AT LEAST ONE MORE POEM UNDER THIS CONTEST( i don't care if you comment on my poems) (you can though
4 Use colors that i can read
5 and PLEASE spell check (misspelled words take away from the poem)
6 HAVE FUN AND BE ORIGINAL
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 26, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I was so pleased by the entries i got!! there are such talented people on this site! everybodys poems amazed me!! thank you all so very much! before i go i will list the poems that i was picking from for first place:
Someone BY problem child
The Perfect Love BY BluRosePoet8488
Three Little Words BY Lomhar
Your Hand in Mine BY Courage2Survive
Night BY driftingsilhouette
Empty BY hellizacomin
LITTLE BIRDIE TOLD ME by howoe
I've Finally found BY Quetzalcoat
A Walk BY luckynsincere
thanks again to EVERYONE!! i loved all the poems entered in this contest!!!
Entries [19]
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Pixies inside,
with long purple feathersby fallingintofate 27 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 9 3:36 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
The Last Give Gift I can To You
This is the last gift.by Rose Patrick 50 lines, 20 comments, on Nov 16 12:17 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
"Dared to through me in
That cold water over the waves"• Commented on by judge. -
I find myself missing you
I find myself wishing for everything you doby burntphoenix 18 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 19 10:58 AM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
empty voices fill my head
leaving me wonderingby hellizacomin 27 lines, 4 comments, on May 10 6:30 AM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
Baby
You'll never know how much I love youby ChelseaNicole 18 lines, 4 comments, on May 13 8:47 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
When those three little words echo...
I love you!• Commented on by judge. -
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Flirting at the smoothie shack,
playing poker and kicking back.by DarlingStac 9 lines, 6 comments, on May 20 5:12 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Kissing his sweet lips
Staring into his amazing eyes• Commented on by judge. -
You are the…
Sparkle in my eyesby x PassionateKisses 12 lines, 5 comments, on May 20 8:06 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Laughing til our sides hurt
Waking up to kisses in the morning• Commented on by judge. -
Close your eyes
Dream about me• Commented on by judge. -
I've finally found
the One for me.by Quetzalcoatl 16 lines, 9 comments, on May 22 5:19 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Whispering these words on my yearbook
You put all your heart into this paragraph• Commented on by judge. -
Cobwebs stuck on the corners of the ceiling
Candles on the floor, barely lit• Commented on by judge. -
Our love .....by machobunty 35 lines, 1 comment, on May 25 11:10 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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aww...sweetie..this is a good contest.. i like it alot.. great idea.. ill enter you an orignial one soon.. xoxo stac
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i have authors nots on my entry that are a little personal, so i will say in the comments that i did comment on artis's pajama game poem. i found it very well written and quite clever. and i wish all the contestants luck.
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okay.....
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if you want "deep" sincer love. you can have this poem also.
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I think you accidentally skipped mine "Make Me Smile", or weren't signed in when you read it- your name isn't on the list of readers. I guess I'll be asking Kevin if there's a glitch with that feature. What's the use in paying for a feature that doesn't work right? (grumbles)
Anyways I can understand if it was an accidental oversight- you did get a ton of entries (as would be expected with a subject of love). I did follow the rules though. (And thank you for making spell check one of them, I think it's rude for people to enter a poem with spelling errors.)
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she skipped mine two, and probably a few more, that seems to be common any more on so many contests, but I will give her the benefit of the doubt and just assume she missed two, but I doubt I will benefit by entering any more contests where poems are skipped...it is important to comment on your entries... thanks for the contest and congrats to wolfbard
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Well it can be easy to do when you allow prewrites and fresh writes- because a prewrite will appear earlier in the list and you may be remembering fresh writes you already read and mistakenly think you already read the prewrite.
The way I prevent this from happening to me on my contests is simple (though time consuming).
Each time I get a message in the system messages that I've got a new entry, I click the link and read the poem. I send the author an IM thanking them for entering, and make sure they've followed the rules (if not I remind them).
Once I close the contest for judging, I click on the first entry, and read and comment on it, then once my comment has been recorded, I click the "next in contest" link.
I also click them all individually if I think I may have skipped one (or if one was removed prior to judging).
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~jaw on the floor~ Wow! Thank you so much! I'm honored to have won this contest! I didn't think I even had a chance. I appreciate it!
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Congratulations to the winners!... and well done to everyone else who entered!... Thank you 'LongLonelyNights' for holding this romantic contest! x
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OMG! i am so so sorry!! i feel horrible!!! i dont know what else to say! i feel bad that you went through all the trouble of writting a poem to met my standers and i didnt even look at it! i am so sorry! if there is anything that i can do for you please do not hesitate to ask! once again im so sorry!!!
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That's ok, at least you're willing to make up for an accidental oversight... If you want to leave constructive criticism on them- tell me what you think could be improved, I'd greatly appreciate it. After all, that's my goal in entering contests- becoming a better writer.
Thanks for the apology, I'm glad it was an honest mistake and I definately forgive you
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