Welcome to my second contest:
1. I want the best memories of childhood/ best time spent with your kids/or neices and nephews.
2.The first time you ever feel in love.
3.Your first heartbreaking experience.
4.The biggest lie one of your friends have ever told you that hurt
your feelings and shrouded your friendship.
1. I want the best memories of childhood/ best time spent with your kids/or neices and nephews.
2.The first time you ever feel in love.
3.Your first heartbreaking experience.
4.The biggest lie one of your friends have ever told you that hurt
your feelings and shrouded your friendship.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 11, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Congradulations all winners and I also thank that entries as well.
Entries [5]
1 - 5 of 5
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Drenched in glory's light,
Walked outside one cold morning• Commented on by judge. -
excuse me, but
your name is on my mind.• Commented on by judge. -
i wrote my suicide note on the back of your hand
it was the only time i wasn't afraid to touch you• Commented on by judge. -
I miss you my children, morning, noon, and night;
I close my eyes and think of you and have you in my sight.• Commented on by judge. -
For my Uncle who passed in November.by EternitysLastWish 30 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 12 2:06 PM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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Congratulations to the winners.
I was hoping perhaps the judge might take the time to leave constructive criticism, and make suggestions on how I could have improved my entries "Wall of Lies" and "Someday (song)"
Actually, I would appreciate that type of feedback from anyone who's got the time- I will return the favor
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Well done everyone! Who won?
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From the heart
Your poem was touching and there is nothing you should change or do better, it is a rememberance for someone close to you, this should be from the heart and nothing should be improved on. -
nice
nice title, I am also a lover of walt whitman
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