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Lust & Longing [Contest]

Thank You

Thank you to all who entered! The standard of entries was exceptionally high! There were so many good entries that I wish I had more trophies to hand out! My boyfriend and I had a wonderful time reading through the entries and it was VERY tough to call! Everyone should be had their entry commented on, if not, IM me and I'll correct my errors plus comment on another of your poems as a sorry

Concept

I want you to write a poem about missing someone sexually and awaiting their return. Imagine your partner or fantasy partner going away for a break for a while, candidly bottle all the emotions and wants you miss about them and emalgamate them into a poem. I want it to be sexual as well as sensual, loving and caring as well as lustful. Try not to make it explicit please, some of the most effect poems only hint at what lies beneath! Make it the best poem it can be. I will be expecting poems, not just descriptions. I should be able to see structure in the poem, good grammar and spelling etc.

Before you enter, PLEASE read the rules!

The rules :

1. One entry per person. I have allowed prewrites but i will only accept 30 entries. Prewrites must be 100% on topic.

2. No sTiCkY cApS

3. Swearing and erotica where appropriate is allowed. Remember that this poem should be giving reference to the longing of two consensual adults (homosexuality is not a problem for me).

4. You MUST use spell check before you post your poem.

5. Poems only please. Also, please put poems in the appropriate category as there are innocent children on this site who need time in life just to be kids and not read adult content.

6. Comment / applaud on one of my poems. This allows me to pay for future contests.

Good luck and have fun

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Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 27, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Heya everyone!

    First of all I want to say thank you to EVERYONE who entered! This contest was notoriously difficult to judge and ive been putting off judging because it was all too close to call!

    Thanks to you all for entering (my boyfriend appreciated your sauciness!)

Entries [9]

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  • anticipation
    excited, these steel butterflies tear
    by flamingsoul 19 lines, on Sep 24 2:53 PM 2004. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • As gold and maroon streaks of the glorious sunset covered
    the darkening horizon, thoughts of regal purple silk filled my
    by Whisper 111 lines, 18 comments, on Dec 10 7:20 AM 2004. In Erotica, Love, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Would that you and I
    were not as fate decreed,
    by artis 71 lines, 8 comments, on May 2 8:06 AM 2005. In Erotica
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by ShaShay 66 lines, 2 comments, on May 5 8:02 PM 2005. In Sad, Adult, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Too long it has been since time decided to separate us
    And the journey of this mind tickles me in readiness
    by Anthony- 26 lines, 1 comment, on May 5 11:45 PM 2005. In Personal, Contemporary, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • He was a poet at heart, I could tell by his stare
    His legs were spread apart, and his chest was bare
    by sadsong 37 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 3:56 PM 2005. In Adult
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You're gone. I miss you.
    by GauArrowny 37 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 8:51 PM 2005. In Erotica, Adult, Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • flamingsoul
    April 30, 2005
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    was written quite a while ago, but i feel it fits the category nicely.

  • Qu33n J3z3b3ll
    May 3, 2005
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    hey, i will have to check out your poems later, i have to pick my kid up from school and make some errans. and, yes, i always use spell check cuz my spelling sucks. i'm not too fond of this poem, but it's prob the only one i had in this topic, i usually only write dark stuff. anyways, i hope you don't laugh at it too hard. comment on yours later, and i am sure i will like it.

  • Pinkypants
    May 12, 2005
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    Hehe Thanks to everyone who has entered.. I will be judging it over the weekend. Good luck!


  • Junebug-
    May 16, 2005
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    Best of luck to you on judging! You have a lot of poem you have to look at.


  • Catressa gold member
    May 27, 2005
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    am I nuts? lol who got silver hon?

  • Pinkypants
    May 27, 2005
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    Almighty Aphrodite the saucy minx!


  • Catressa gold member
    May 27, 2005
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    dang she withdrew it fast lol Ah figures she always snatches the good trophies lol Thank Pinky

  • Pinkypants
    May 27, 2005
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    hehe Next time I will put super glue on my nice shiny trophy so she cant run away with it!

    Take care


  • -LizBTropez-
    May 27, 2005
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    Thanks for being a fair and thorough judge- making sure to comment on all the entries- I wish all judges did that. You left a very nice comment on my entry "Tease"- I'm glad you liked it. I wrote it simpler at first but then went back and polished it up and I'm glad that seems to have paid off.
    Congratulations to the winners!

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