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Heres a challenge!

Right!

This is my second contest and i know exactly what i want. I want a deep, emotional, but uplifting poem.

You're sitting in your Doorway, with a hot cup of whatever drink you like, a candle, watching the rain.

Write about it. Whatever you want! BUT

1)I don't want you committing suicide, hanging yourself in the doorway slitting your wrists because Life is so so so bad. I don't want to know how it feels when you slit your wrists in the dark. . .If i wanted that i would of posted this in the Angst section.

2) No StIcKy CaPs no txt typ.

3) At the end of the poem i'd like you to have felt like you've accomplished something.

The rest is pretty much up to you my Darjeeling's!

You don't have to, but it would be nice for you to post a comment on one of my poems, or someone Else's in this competition

Have Fun!xxx

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 2, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 400
  • Final notes:
    . . .I cant really say i got what i was after, but i feel like these where the three who really tried. And im glad they did. For the rest of you?

    Try reading the rules! haha. . .i jsut hope you enjoyed writing for me.

    XXXEllie

Entries [6]

1 - 6 of 6
  • Tears of Heaven
    As I sit here in the rain,
    by nike 39 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 26 2:32 PM 2005. In Personal, Spiritual, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Rain Through Different Eyes
    There is summer rain in silence,
    trickling gently down the glass.
    by Scheherazade 6 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 26 2:55 PM 2005. In Personal, Hope, Contemporary
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Wish
    I wish I could sing you something beautiful,
    But my voice cracks, static rushes in instead,
    by milkman41 63 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 26 5:54 PM 2005. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Rain
    A poem about the freedom of the rain.
    by GodsPrincess 13 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 26 7:54 PM 2005. In Other
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Swarm of Bees
    And it’s time for you to pave the path
    To freedom and eternal sunshine
    by trecephus 23 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 5:32 PM 2005. In Society
    • Commented on by judge.
  • the candle
    shards of hope crash
    d d d
    by tropical london 18 lines, 4 comments, on May 1 8:06 AM 2005. In Hope
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • nike gold member
    April 26, 2005
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    After several attempts to edit, I finally got it right, Thanks for holding this contest.