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Dribble A Drabble Part Two

This is part two of Dribble A Drabble.  It is open only to those mentioned here.  Please resubmit your entry for the original contest.  It was not fair to compare the prose against the poetry, so I am separating the two.  

artis
shewolfnative
Blackdayz854
masterblaster
Eyeore's Buddy
Odanale

Right now, I have it narrowed down.  I will close this when all concerned have either resubmitted their entry, or let me know you are not interested.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 30, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Well, this was harder than the prose. I went with masterblaster for first because she had the most comprehensive writing and followed the grammar rules the closest to the spirit of the drabble.
    artis had very nice entry, but I felt the sentance structure was too incomplete. But, I love his sly innuendo.
    Odanale had a very touching entry, but I just felt the other's were more to the tone of the drabble. However, it would have made a great prose entry.
    Eyores Buddy- I did like this, but there were too many incomplete sentences. It made it harder to track than the others. Still, I am giving 25 points to the entries and I will award points to the second and third place winners when I accrue enough again. Thank you all for entering. This had been a learning experience for me. I may do it again sometime.

Entries [2]

  • Moons and heavenly orbs!
    by artis 24 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 9 10:34 PM 2005. In Humor
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A Child's Story
    If there was windows,
    We’d see the crescent moon above;
    by Odanale 20 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 19 10:03 PM 2005. In Sad, Society
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • masterblaster gold member
    April 25, 2005
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    Hi, hope I got it right as I transfered to here, hugs Di


  • Eeyores Buddy
    April 28, 2005
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    I shall re submit


  • Elrenia
    April 28, 2005
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    Well, if only three show up, this will be easier than I thought. LOL


  • masterblaster gold member
    April 30, 2005
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    Hi, thanks a million, you are not easy to please so I am thrilled with this win, hugs, Di, yipeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • Odanale
    April 30, 2005
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    Thank you so much!!!

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