well hello now. I have been very depressed lately, and i need your help. Give me a piece that will give me some hope, some courage. Things of this nature. I am not one to board you with alot of details, so here are some rules.
1. only one entry per poet
2. no pre-writes, i want original
3. no sticky caps
4. No cursing, doesn't fit this setting
5. be creative and have fun
Now here some things that would be nice for you to do:
1. comment on my poetry
2. comment on other entries
You don't have to, but it may earn brownie points.
There will be only one winner, and 750 of my points. I want the best, so i made this contest very competitive.
I want hope, and a will to go on. Help me!
1. only one entry per poet
2. no pre-writes, i want original
3. no sticky caps
4. No cursing, doesn't fit this setting
5. be creative and have fun
Now here some things that would be nice for you to do:
1. comment on my poetry
2. comment on other entries
You don't have to, but it may earn brownie points.
There will be only one winner, and 750 of my points. I want the best, so i made this contest very competitive.
I want hope, and a will to go on. Help me!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 21, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 750
- Final notes: thank you all for entering, this was deffinitly a hard contest to judge. Congradulations to Janice M Pickett. Your piece you simply amazing and helped me so much. Other entries that were just amazing were:
Sadness - Blue Misery
The Stubborn Waether Forcaster - cold girl
One More - Sandi Alford
Follow the Stars - DarkDreamer28
Part of Creation - catinahat
Joy in The Mourning - celinh
my pain got worse - alien-runner
End of the Rainbow - f a e r i e
Well done to every one. Check out the above entries, they were amazing. I might be giving out some more points soon to a few of teh above authors, just as soon as I can get them around
thank you all, blessed be
-pasti
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Would you want to give all this life upFor what would be the gainThe oby BrotherOfShadows 29 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 15 8:43 AM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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A great person with promise
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Look into the stars and find their light
Fly to far away places you've never seenby Forgottn18Beauty 19 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 17 8:58 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
Though pain may last
Through the night• Commented on by judge. -
In yourself, never stop believing
Keep on trying, so there's less to be grievingby greeneyed angel 35 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 20 10:36 AM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
when you need a hand you can reach for mine
or just listen closely to this rhyme• Commented on by judge. -
The ladden tears of our hollow dreams seem to seep with hopelessness
We stare at our shoes wishing we could reach the sun, but we fallby rubbaduckie 29 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 1:29 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
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This write is only for the poet whose contest is up, and needs encouragement...blessings unto you...by InnerBeauty 16 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 5:24 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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i remember
those times i criedby alien-runner 29 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 20 5:42 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
I am in waiting-
I am unsure.by REVOLALYAK 26 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 11:05 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
Gold trophy winner
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YAY
your new contest is in here…………… YAY, well I’m working already in this piece for your contest of course…. Well I’m a little bit nervous because this are some of my first attempts to write positive I guess I can be happy too… well my friend I wish you the best of luck in judging expect my entry sometimes soon… 
Much Love
Leslie
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Dear Pasti, whatever life has thrown at you in the past, leave it there, awake with a different song on your lips and embrace the new day, you are so young and have a gizzillion new days and opportunities to experience. I promise the days will get better in time. and many blessings, Sandi
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I'd enter hun .. but all mine are depressing and i just wrote a great dark poem
have fun with it 
~Aimee
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I would hope that my poem is slightly uplifting, but it seems very dark too, apologies x
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Well i think this is a great idea for a contest. great job. dont be depressed. i have been there and it wasnt pretty. just remember there is always someone there to help. but it takes your effort along with theirs for it to work. well i hope you get happy and if you think you dont have any one to talk to im here and i will listen and try to help you. smile and be happy. David
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all I see is gold where is the silver and bronze
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have the others pulled their win already .. i like to read the winners
.. thanks for an awesome contest and for the mention
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THANKYOU SO MUCH
OH Darlin THANKYOU. MY words were meant especially for you and I didn't for one moment think I would win. You are such a great person. Thanks. I will always be here if you ever need a chat.
Hugs and Thanks
Jan
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