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Pain Passes But the Memory Remains

Hello.  This is my first contest.  So anyone that enters please bare with me if I make mistakes.  This contest is for 300 points for first place and 50 for second 25 for 3rd.  i may increase it depending how kick ass your poetry is I'm really not gonna restrict the contest too much but I will give you some suggestions and no erotica is not acceptable I'm only 16.

Suggestion 1:
     Love.  My hunniebunnie and mine anniversairy has just recently passed, and I'm feeling extremely loving towards him.  I want something that's gonna make me go "awwwww those so sweet tear".


Suggestion 2:
     Anger/Dark.  I've been extremely pissed off at my mom right now because all she does is jump to conclusions and they are never right and she treats me like shit.  Perhaps angry poems toward Parents would be nice.

Suggestion 3:
     Vampires.  I love vampires.  I am obsessed with them.  A really good vampire poem would be nice.


Again those are just suggestions.

Rules:
1) NoNe Of ThIs SHiT.  It's fucking annoying and ruins the poem.
2) I don't care if you cuss Trust me there's nothing you can say that will shock me.
3) You do not have to comment on any poems because this is a Poetry contest not a Comment contest.  I think it's so fuckin' annoying when people do that.  However if you wanna comment on any poems mine or someone else in the contest it would be nice and all but it's not like "Omg i'm gonna kill you in your sleep if you dont"
4) Again no eroctica.  I think its sick.
5) Have fun!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 19, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    All of the poems were rather good in they're own ways. It was a very close contest. I want to thank everyone for entering.

    Honorable mentions:
    Angel by fredsinmyhead
    Passion in the sand by Haran
    Memories by Haran
    Who Am I by TooManyDemons
    Memory by JarkaRuus
    No love such as this by Definitive freak

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • Careless Parents
    by Rose Dark Thorn 48 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 8 7:33 PM 2004. In Sad, Dark, Angst, noguest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Talk About Sadistic Hatred
    I hope you choke on your pretences
    And suffocate in puff of your own pride
    by SomethingLovely 43 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 12 11:24 AM 2004. In Personal, Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • shattered
    i stand, arms open, like an offering to the gods, begging them to take me away while the rain drenches me, i shake the water off like a wet dog.
    by poetictears1222 27 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 10 11:32 AM 2005. In Abuse, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Metamorphosis
    Stay alive for now.
    Don't cry in your dreams.
    by kristin marie 78 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 15 6:35 PM 2005. In Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Joey
    why have you do this to me,
    i always loved you because i was too blind to see.
    by Gay-Militant 39 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 27 9:35 AM 2005. In Sad, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A Story
    this is about me and my brothers
    by TeenageTears 49 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 3 6:47 PM 2005. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Hazel
    ~*Hazel*~
    I see your hazel eyes following my every step,
    by Pammers 30 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 4 4:35 PM 2005. In Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Defected
    This is about a girl I fell in love with. She is gone from my life as she wants nothing to do with me anymore.
    by So much blood 31 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 5 6:36 PM 2005. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Damn You
    by DelusionalDollie 13 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 12 9:01 AM 2005. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Only a Misunderstanding
    It was only a misunderstanding
    But it matters not
    by Gryffyn on the Wind 62 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 13 7:54 AM 2005. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

  • empire of dirt
    April 17, 2005
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    My entry is for suggestion #1. Have fun judging!


  • April 19, 2005
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    Wow! I am totally, I mean totally amazed, thank you! I can't believe it! In shock so, congratulations to all the winners, this was an amazing contest with so much talent... thank you for the honorable mentions on Memories and Passion in the Sand I don't know if you can tell but I'm EXCITED thanks again, Annie


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 19, 2005
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    Annie ~ Haran ~ is my Best Friend...may I just say, DeathsAcre, that you have impeccable taste??? LOL I'm so happy for Annie...she deserves all the accolades she gets; she's such a wonderful writer...& an even better human being...Congrats to everyone for a job well done!!! Some incredible writes on this page...Be well, Poets... Wanda
    {grabs Annie & does the Happy Dance} hehehe