1. Enter the poem you wish; limit one.
2. Read and comment on the write of any other writer.
3. Read and comment on my short poem "A Woman Early" allpoetry.com/Poem/1178133
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 17, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: "Does God shit? The Christian and Catholics believe so."
Well, I shit and I lied. There were no beginners. The was not an easy contest. The best poem I have seen gets 2nd. Kids you were beaten by the pros. Look at the first three if you come back. Some studied the author of this contest carefully. They should have broke a rule. There is a tie for third.
Andy
Andy
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When I look in your eyes
I always have to smile• Commented on by judge. -
Through the laughing crowd and the unconcern,
my hunger grew stronger as the night grew full.by George Maris 36 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 10 1:31 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww YOU'RE MAKING PEOPLE READ THE POEM YOU MADE FOR ME!!!!!
YAY!
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I think it is a powerful poem and I want to share it. I may feature the contest, but I think you get more reads running a contest than featuring. What do you think?
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How sad that you force people to read your poem to be in a contest.Enough said,I might actually say what everyone already knows.
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Natari Moon, you make it clear that you don't like me. Why do you read me?
Andy -
No I didn't read you.I read a poem in the contest then saw your message telling the person to read your poem.That is all.
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You obviously read and still are, Natari Moon.
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Not that I have to answer to you.i clicked on the person's poem on the featured box.I don't read your perverse rantings.
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You don't get it, when do you stop reading me, Natari Moon?
You are currently one of my biggest fans, or so it seems. Stalker maybe?
Andy -
Ok Andy enough said.Stop harrassing me.I made a comment and you won't let it go.Stalk you dream on buddy.In your wildest dreams.Now you go on ignore because you creep me out.
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Thank you for the trophy!
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Aris wrote directly to me. I do not know him. He studied me edited his original poem to fit. I believe. I have no objection to this. Some of the others also wrote to me. This counted against some of them. Artis's work was directed only to me, but second place is the better poem. If you understand, that is the reason he got first. artis worked with the skill of a craftsman, extremely accurate and nobody but I will likely fully understand it. A marvel.
Andy
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