As the title says I want you to write me a poem that displays pure, true love. You can do it any way you want. Rhyme, no rhyme, whatever. Just make sure it is TRUE LOVE. I don't want lust or erotica. I want true, unconditional, undying love.
Rules:
No Swearing
No Erotica
No Sticky Caps
No Full Capitalization
Your poem has to be true to life, if it is labeled Love as well as Personal it will get the most attention
Anyone can enter... I don't care if you are 12 or if you are 85 if think you have experienced true love, give this a go.
Internet love poems are acceptable as well if you have found true love over the internet.
Prewrites are allowed.
Up to two (2) entries per person allowed. One Prewrite and one new one
Have fun and good luck to all my entrants...
This contest will be for 450 points (by accident I put 350, IGNORE THAT)
Second and third will get some points as well as I am feeling generous but I cannot give you a number right at this moment
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 26, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 350
- Final notes: Okay I ended this early because there were SO many entries.
A few of what I read here did not follow the rules. There were a few lust poems and a few heartbreak poems, to those people, I assume you did not read the rules OR you're too young to understand true love, probably the latter, so I won't penalize anyone
I decided there will be some honorable mentions since it took me a long time to choose between the top 7 entries that I felt deserved something.
Oh yeah, and 2nd and 3rd get points
2nd will be 50 points
3rd will be 25 points
1st goes to A Wife's Poem by kissing-eris
2nd goes to Soulmate (A Series of Cinquain) by Leander
3rd goes to Heartsong by Rous
Honorable Mentions:
Souls Sacrificed On The Back of Paradise by Glory of Sonne
Walking In The Moonlught With You by Poetic-Soldier
Through Your Eyes by after-dark
Entries [14]
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Until Angels close my eyes
I will love youby prettyangeleyes 14 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 28 9:30 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Fantasy is queen
akin sister to hope.• Commented on by judge. -
His reply was
"You can never Explain true love."• Commented on by judge. -
Swing me around in a circle,
with a blindfold,• Commented on by judge. -
i kiss you,and thats all i can feel
nothing else existsby fall into the abyss 42 lines, on Feb 23 3:49 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Into the glorious vastness of the sky’s wings
We—our eyes—gaze in honor, respect, and beauty• Commented on by judge. -
What did you do to me
I never thought of you• Commented on by judge. -
I’m strangled in your complication,
high on lack of oxygen,• Commented on by judge. -
i loved you,
i knew you knew.• Commented on by judge. -
My true Love.
My baby.• Commented on by judge. -
I look in your eyes,
And I wonder whyby deathless-trivia 10 lines, on Mar 21 8:37 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Where I can see you,feel you,love you,
Where I can call you my own,my everything,MY DEAR!by deathless-trivia 24 lines, on Mar 21 10:25 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
As I stare into your eyes
my reflection glares back at me,• Commented on by judge. -
LINES HAVE BEEN ADDED TO THE ORIGINAL, AUTOPSY REPORT• Commented on by judge.
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Can we have 2 new ones and not one new and a prewrite, just making sure, ya know?
eny
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sure... the more entries the merrier.
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thanxerz!
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WHo won first and third?? I try to read the winning poems, but I didn't see them on here.
-Rhana
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It's listed in my final notes. kissing-eris won gold and Rous won bronze. I wonder why they took their pieces out of the contest after getting a trophy... ?
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