**NEWS FLASH FOR CONTEST ENTIES**
I have Got the Winners For 3rd and 2nd Place. But since all entrys where good iam having a hard time with frist .So iam going to have 2 people Judge with me, MY best friend (Kelsey) and Another...... I will judge Soon. Good Luck. and the Date Is Not Yet Set. The Latest Is April 3
This Contest is easy.
Read the story and write a poem based or close to it.
Charcters:
Kelsey-Best Friend
Blake-Boyfriend
Mia-Me :-D Kelseys Best friend
Sarah-Good Friend Of the Bestfriends Mia and kelsey
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Story:
Kelsey and Blake have been dating for almost 5 months now. And well spring break is coming in under a week. Mia,Kelsey and Sarah are going out of State. Alll three girls want to cut and die there hair before they go. Mia and Sarah Have nothing to worrie about. Kelseys Boyfriend Blake doesnt want kelsey to cut her hair or die it and he gets mad. Kelsey gets mad,because she wants to and he shouldnt tell her what to do. Easter is sunday and all the girls are going to there faimlys for it. Kelsey wont be coming home till Sunday,Mia intill Saturday night. And Sarah Will be home Sunday Morning. When kelsey tells blake she wont be home till sunday and is leaving early monday moring for the trip. He gets mad. Because she wont be able to see him. she really wants to go and he says " Oh this ruins are plans". Sarah and Mia get mad becuase the trip is going to be fun and if they stay home for spring break. Blake is just going to Want to " Make Out and cuddle" with kelsey. Which she always doesnt want to do. So The girls are going No matter what. And blake gets mad for no reason. And Makes kelsey Cry and mad. Because everytime she wants to do something with her friends Mia and Sarah. He gets mad and doesnt talk or anything.And hes keeps doing this evertime.
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Basic. Idea Of the story is Mia,kelsey and sarah want to do something for spring break. But blake gets mad and acts all selfish and immature to kelsey just because she wants to do what she wants.
Pre Writes Aloud.
I have Got the Winners For 3rd and 2nd Place. But since all entrys where good iam having a hard time with frist .So iam going to have 2 people Judge with me, MY best friend (Kelsey) and Another...... I will judge Soon. Good Luck. and the Date Is Not Yet Set. The Latest Is April 3
This Contest is easy.
Read the story and write a poem based or close to it.
Charcters:
Kelsey-Best Friend
Blake-Boyfriend
Mia-Me :-D Kelseys Best friend
Sarah-Good Friend Of the Bestfriends Mia and kelsey
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Story:
Kelsey and Blake have been dating for almost 5 months now. And well spring break is coming in under a week. Mia,Kelsey and Sarah are going out of State. Alll three girls want to cut and die there hair before they go. Mia and Sarah Have nothing to worrie about. Kelseys Boyfriend Blake doesnt want kelsey to cut her hair or die it and he gets mad. Kelsey gets mad,because she wants to and he shouldnt tell her what to do. Easter is sunday and all the girls are going to there faimlys for it. Kelsey wont be coming home till Sunday,Mia intill Saturday night. And Sarah Will be home Sunday Morning. When kelsey tells blake she wont be home till sunday and is leaving early monday moring for the trip. He gets mad. Because she wont be able to see him. she really wants to go and he says " Oh this ruins are plans". Sarah and Mia get mad becuase the trip is going to be fun and if they stay home for spring break. Blake is just going to Want to " Make Out and cuddle" with kelsey. Which she always doesnt want to do. So The girls are going No matter what. And blake gets mad for no reason. And Makes kelsey Cry and mad. Because everytime she wants to do something with her friends Mia and Sarah. He gets mad and doesnt talk or anything.And hes keeps doing this evertime.
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Basic. Idea Of the story is Mia,kelsey and sarah want to do something for spring break. But blake gets mad and acts all selfish and immature to kelsey just because she wants to do what she wants.
Pre Writes Aloud.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 24, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering my contest. You all were very good. I wish i could choose you all, but i couldnt. Please keep writing, I really look forward to reading your poetry. Best of luck in the future.
Mia
Thank you my fellow judges big rich 88 (Richie) & Kelsey
Entries [2]
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this is who i am
if u cant except thatby uncut skin 40 lines, on Mar 4 11:42 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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ah. um. you have spelling mistakes.
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I accidently deleted my poem from the contest! Oops. Thank you for the gold and the points. I hope you take the advice- or at least some of it. There's a lot to be said for purple hair- mine was like that for a year or so.
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thanks for likin my poem. im a new writer and it gives me lots of encouragement.
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