OK this is my first contest so bare with me. This contest it going to be for the poets with a darker side or just sad ones. I want you to make me cry or i want you to make me cringe.
You can write about
pain
cutting
suicide
murder
or just something sad or depressing.
Give me detail and put thought into it people!
Rules:
no erotica
no sticky caps
you must comment on either one of my poems or another contestants.
and last, no bashing anything, like cutting or suicide
if you do i will not judge your entry.
A special thanks goes out to hockeyprincess for donating points for the contest!
So thanks for entering and have a fun time writing...later
You can write about
pain
cutting
suicide
murder
or just something sad or depressing.
Give me detail and put thought into it people!
Rules:
no erotica
no sticky caps
you must comment on either one of my poems or another contestants.
and last, no bashing anything, like cutting or suicide
if you do i will not judge your entry.
A special thanks goes out to hockeyprincess for donating points for the contest!
So thanks for entering and have a fun time writing...later
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 20, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: These were all amazing entries, thats one of the reasons it took me so long to judge them! I have never seen so manny talented authors in my life... im jellious! Thank you all for participating! Great job to everyone who entered, there wasnt one poem that was even mediocre, they were all wonderful...take care!
Entries [40]
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She died alone in her bed, in pain
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There's a house on the hill
where a mother cries for in• Commented on by judge. -
I breathe as cord pulls tight
A million stars explode within• Commented on by judge. -
Thinking of my cousin that got hit by a car.by Corrin-G-04 15 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 27 9:41 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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The numbness, and the tender pain,
But all i hear are your chuckles.• Commented on by judge. -
Holding myself higherJust to watch me fallTo wonder why I stoppedTo stopped this pain at allTo pull away the scissorsThat whispered to m• Commented on by judge.
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He was so sly
Acting so innocent• Commented on by judge. -
just another poem by me if you care and wana know what it is youll read it• Commented on by judge.
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never to be forgotten
in my last dreams• Commented on by judge. -
I am close to the end
almost thereby prettyangeleyes 17 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 7 11:05 AM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
the marks an my arm are nothing
compared to the ones you left on my heartby lovealwaysme 31 lines, on Feb 10 4:23 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Viens are open
Now I'm bleeding• Commented on by judge. -
I wish no-one knew,
But they do,by scattered-stars 29 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 1 11:57 AM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
My mind succumbs to thoughts of you
When I'm lying here aloneby Romantic Misery 39 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 7 9:46 AM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
I look into the mirror
I look into my reflection• Commented on by judge. -
Love is everlasting
It never goes awayby mysteriouskiller69 46 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 9 2:46 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
You think I will come around
Well I know betterby lovealwaysme 24 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 11 11:43 AM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
/As they found her, in a blood puddle on the floor/
/They screamed at the sight of the cut sophomore/• Commented on by judge. -
almond eyes and a bright smile,
loving arms and a mind longer then a mile.• Commented on by judge. -
I am a replica of happiness
yet not even close to the real thingby lost-hopes16 27 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 13 2:22 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I then cut my own wrists
and fade into the lightby DarkenedLight 31 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 13 2:38 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Twenty four feet from nowhere• Commented on by judge. -
I look at you
but this time• Commented on by judge. -
by BrokenSouledPoetess 19 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 15 12:28 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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your slowly killing me anyways
my heart breaks every momentby slowlychanging 40 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 16 9:39 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Awake, scared , alone
I cannot stop this tormentby Devilish Temptation 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 16 10:17 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I will die if I live
I will cry from my wrist• Commented on by judge. -
So now she lays,
in her chilling bed she stays.• Commented on by judge. -
Placid lake of aquamarine
tranquility in all its splendor.by Debauchery 41 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 18 7:34 AM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Bottle of asprin
Sitting on my bed• Commented on by judge. -
Mama it is sure going to kill me to watch you go.
But mama I already miss you.by CountryCousin 50 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 18 12:23 PM 2005. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
1, 2, 3.
take a look at me.• Commented on by judge.
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow this should be a hard one to judge!
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yea i know it will be wont it! but thanks to you so much for donating all thoes points!
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who whon?
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