Wow! This is my first competition!
Right this is what i want.
When you walk/drive/catch the bus/train in the morning, to school or work or wherever you go,
I want you to tell me what you see, and what you think.
It can be about anything or anyone. . .AMAZE ME with your thoughts one life, or other people, OR EVEN THE WEATHER! i don't not mind!, make me see what you're seeing, feel what you're feeling, if that's sad or happy! I DON'T MIND! I would just like some variety! something new and original!
Right i have only a few rules.
1.NO ANGST! i don't want to hear about how your Cut yourself and how good blood trickling down your arm feels. . .I already know. Its been done. . i want something NEW!. . .however it can be depressing.
2.No StIckY CaPs Or AbBrEvIaTiOnS
3. This isn't a rule, but it may help if you comment on at least on of my poems TRUTHFULLY! as i like constructive Criticism!
Thank you and Good Luck!
Right this is what i want.
When you walk/drive/catch the bus/train in the morning, to school or work or wherever you go,
I want you to tell me what you see, and what you think.
It can be about anything or anyone. . .AMAZE ME with your thoughts one life, or other people, OR EVEN THE WEATHER! i don't not mind!, make me see what you're seeing, feel what you're feeling, if that's sad or happy! I DON'T MIND! I would just like some variety! something new and original!
Right i have only a few rules.
1.NO ANGST! i don't want to hear about how your Cut yourself and how good blood trickling down your arm feels. . .I already know. Its been done. . i want something NEW!. . .however it can be depressing.
2.No StIckY CaPs Or AbBrEvIaTiOnS
3. This isn't a rule, but it may help if you comment on at least on of my poems TRUTHFULLY! as i like constructive Criticism!
Thank you and Good Luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 1, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Wow! this has been fun folks! I've loved reading your stuff! you're all so talented!
Thankyou!xxx
Entries [10]
1 - 10 of 10
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Don’t Look Down On Me
I Am Not Your Inferior• Commented on by judge. -
He strolls up Haven Esplanade;• Commented on by judge. -
The sun is shinning
It's a happy day,• Commented on by judge. -
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walking to the corner
all by my lonesomeby Panda Lover 21 lines, on Feb 23 12:22 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
He was so angry, he would stomp his feet
Creating this noisy, thunderous beat• Commented on by judge. -
You have to have it your way,
You have to flaunt it all,• Commented on by judge. -
Yet again I step out of my door,
I dread the return,• Commented on by judge. -
lengthening shadows
slanted lightby malkinpuss 15 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 27 6:26 PM 2005. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge.
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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I just had to create something special for this contest and I liked the choices. I hope my poem meets your expectations. I want to Thank You for conducting this contest for fellow poets to display their poetic creations and wish them All Good Luck. I also want to wish You Good Luck as your challenge will be extremely difficult as I have discovered that All of the poets on this wonderful site are Winners. Once again, Thanks for conducting this contest for All of us. Your Friend, MickPigKnuckles
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I would like to take this time and thank you for being a positive influence on all writers/poets. Life would be
that much more rewarding with people such as yourself going out of your way..Peace -
I want to Thank You so much for the placement of this wonderful contest. I know your selections were extremely hard and just want everyone to know that they are Winners. I will ask that All of You please keep your poetic pens flowing so Your beautiful poetry keeps growing for Our readers. Thanks Again, MickPigKnuckles
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thank you for the placement, I am truely honored, there were so many wonderful entries, And a meaningful challange! hugs and blessings, Sandi
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