ok...this is my first contest YAY!!!
i want you to tell me about your first real love or your first crush... the first time you felt butterflies in your stomach...the first time you put yourself out there and got your heart broken... or maybe you didnt get your heart broken, maybe you got lucky and that person returned your feelings.... just tell me all about it...
i love words... im a wordy person...so use really good words...not really big words that ill have to use a dictionary on...but good words
i will comment on every entry...
you can sumbit as many as you wnat..
Rules!
there really arnt any..
i guess just dont pull tHiS SHiT... BeCAuSe ItS So ANnOyiNg...
and kinda use proper grammer none of this: u, 4, or any of the internet slang... it takes away from the poem...
i dont mind cussing... so feel free to if that wil make you happy
but please comment on one of my poems... and one of the other submitted entries
1st will get 500
2nd will get 200
3rd will get 100
so...
GOOD LUCK!!!
and HAVE FUN!
i want you to tell me about your first real love or your first crush... the first time you felt butterflies in your stomach...the first time you put yourself out there and got your heart broken... or maybe you didnt get your heart broken, maybe you got lucky and that person returned your feelings.... just tell me all about it...
i love words... im a wordy person...so use really good words...not really big words that ill have to use a dictionary on...but good words
i will comment on every entry...
you can sumbit as many as you wnat..
Rules!
there really arnt any..
i guess just dont pull tHiS SHiT... BeCAuSe ItS So ANnOyiNg...
and kinda use proper grammer none of this: u, 4, or any of the internet slang... it takes away from the poem...
i dont mind cussing... so feel free to if that wil make you happy
but please comment on one of my poems... and one of the other submitted entries
1st will get 500
2nd will get 200
3rd will get 100
so...
GOOD LUCK!!!
and HAVE FUN!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 20, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 800
- Final notes: This was great you guys... thank you a bunches for entering... it was amazing... all of the poems were wonderful... you are all truley wonderful poets... thank you so much...
Entries [29]
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if only you knew how i longed for you to be with me
for us to be couple• Commented on by judge. -
everything reminds me of you
from people laughing to my dreams at night.• Commented on by judge. -
Things can never go back to the way they were
words have been said hearts have been heard.• Commented on by judge. -
The more I think about you the more I miss you
I I wish you could be here with meby Sharkbaitoolala 9 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 22 6:09 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
When I first met you I thought I could never be with you
I'm not good enough for you and never will beby Sharkbaitoolala 16 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 4:14 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Dear love,
This is my first time meeting you and I just wanna know is this really true about you. When I first meet you am I supposed to get a sick feeling?My• Commented on by judge. -
Rather not see me I was sure you would.
Make it through life without you- don't think I could.• Commented on by judge. -
I love you
I will never leave youby Sharkbaitoolala 26 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 27 12:13 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
A day without you
is like a day without sun• Commented on by judge. -
Whenever I saw him,
He made me smileby Kitsune-Tears 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 12 8:09 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Picture this if you can
go back to the playground days• Commented on by judge. -
I don't know why I have these feelings I can't explain them they are just there
The more we talk the stronger they grow each day they get more and more out oby Sharkbaitoolala 16 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 26 5:04 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
battered and broken
the pages of our love lay scattered• Commented on by judge. -
When I saw you it was like love at first sight
You said you felt the same wayby Sharkbaitoolala 22 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 9 3:13 PM 2005. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
I talked to you today
you seemed to be doing fineby Candice Bezanson 32 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 12 5:41 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I can’t recall whether—
(I’ve loved before)• Commented on by judge. -
This is it:
the hopes and dreams of twenty years• Commented on by judge. -
If love doesn't cost a thing
then why am I in such pain• Commented on by judge. -
This poem is dedicated to a certain someone. (BMR)• Commented on by judge.
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I love my Jay and this is for him• Commented on by judge.
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I never thought that I could be capable of loving,
but you have awakened a part of me.• Commented on by judge. -
To her my love is nothing but a toy
She constantly plays with itby jerzelove21 45 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 15 8:55 AM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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Incomplete
By: Jenn Von Hagenby KometGirlJenn 28 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 15 9:55 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
As the truth in your eyes
sets my heart free• Commented on by judge. -
There is so much in you
that I see• Commented on by judge.
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I know I entered a prewrite but i just wrote it a couple of days ago so I ask that youplease give it rqual concideration :0) Not that you wouldnt...Just that most people dont give prewrites the same attention as normal entries. But Im NOT implying you would do that. Casue your probably one of those super cool folks.
Great contest BTW !!
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o... im giving all the poems equal attention... if its good its good no matter when someone wrtote it... thanks for entering... i actually like jsut read yours... and i think i liked it..(theres so many that i just read that i cant member them all... but im sure i liked it.. cuz i havnt gotten any bad ones ) lol... but good lcukk... xoxo stac
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Just thought I would let you know you have made a mistake with your points. I did the same with my first contest. By writing 800 points in that box 800 points will now go to first place what you have to do is when you judge the contest IM your first place and ask them to return the extra 300 points via the form in the help menu (faq) then the points will be returned so you can then give them to your other places again via that form. Hope that was helpful xxx
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